Hannibal Forge

Regarding Plot Holes in B1 & B2

Added 2026-01-17 01:06:07 +0000 UTC

Hello folks! Quick update.

I am aware of a few lingering points of unresolved frustration in Books 1 & 2:

Leonidas' [Psionic Communication Skill]
The lack of Parents' perspective and Grandparents' military buildup POV.
[Platinum Chests]
Ceruviel's [Rebuild the Archon Order] Quest
Various character inconsistencies

I'll likely address these either with retroactive edits during second drafting, on impulse, or in the case of Book 1, by editing / adding content as needed during my pre-publisher edit sweep. If you note any that aren't listed here, please tell me in the Comments and I'll add them to my list!

Thanks for pointing them out, please keep doing so, and I'll 'publish and notify' whenever a chapter has been significantly altered to fix a plot point, so you may get alerts for existing chapters as they're fixed, with a (Second Draft) tag instead of (First Draft).

As a note and reminder: I am a Pantser, so I often write things with zero pre-planning and put them in based entirely on "What would be fun here?" without thinking about it too hard. I don't plot my books basically at all, barring some very vague key story beats I need to hit, which explains why sometimes it can be... chaotic, for lack of a better term.

Thanks for reading, I'm off to write more!