A Spike In Odd Jobs p11 WIP
Added 2023-10-25 17:26:59 +0000 UTCThe 11th page. As voted by my patrons.
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Comments
That flash back you described was a lot, it would've been multiple pages worth of content all on its own and would have been too many panels to fit into just one without leaving much room to the quality of each panel. And my goal is to try and get these pages done at a quicker pace with a simple focus to each page's content. Please try to keep your suggestions narrowed down to like something that can fit into one sentence?
Doctor Awesome
2023-10-26 15:41:52 +0000 UTCI was really hoping the flashback would happen to see some deleted scenes from the morning action, since it was so short. Was kinda also expecting to see a conversation between the 4 friends going over who's gonna do what and then transition to here at the bakery, cause it's a little confusing at first glance.
Kazuki
2023-10-25 19:24:20 +0000 UTCAhh dang, I was expecting this to win, but was hoping for more clown shenanigans.
Victorious
2023-10-25 18:54:27 +0000 UTC
