Grurg and Kanor - Vacation photos (part01)
Added 2020-08-15 21:54:41 +0000 UTCIt has now been two weeks since the two Orc friends, Grurg and Kanor, returned from their vacation and both resumed their old ways... or almost.
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Hey all !
I decided to add a little story to this series of images in order to bring a little depth to the characters. I hope you will like it.
English is not my mother tongue, please let me know if anything in the text seems strange to you.
Thanks everyone ;)
~ Etan.
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This work will be available in the August package, which I will send you on Septembre 6th.
Comments
Thank you, but I think there is much more to learn about the English language ^^
AD-Games
2020-08-17 21:13:07 +0000 UTCThank you for this information. I have some basics in English but the spaces between a word and its punctuation is something I didn't know.
AD-Games
2020-08-17 21:10:36 +0000 UTCSeconded. Also, it's minor, but in English there is no space before an exclamation point ("Wait up!" not "Wait up !"). I notice my French mother does that too.
Sibre Collard
2020-08-17 14:39:52 +0000 UTCOoh, I see! That is a neat continuation ^_^ I think that either should be "Wait up", which is a colloquial or slang phrase if he's being very casual, or "Wait for me" otherwise. If English isn't /his/ first language then he should probably say the latter. If it is then either way works. Also wow, I had no idea that English wasn't your first language since you write very well.
Garz
2020-08-16 00:50:18 +0000 UTC
