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Grurg and Kanor - Vacation photos (part01)

It has now been two weeks since the two Orc friends, Grurg and Kanor, returned from their vacation and both resumed their old ways... or almost.

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Hey all !

I decided to add a little story to this series of images in order to bring a little depth to the characters. I hope you will like it.

English is not my mother tongue, please let me know if anything in the text seems strange to you.

Thanks everyone ;)

~ Etan. 

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This work will be available in the August package, which I will send you on Septembre 6th.

Grurg and Kanor - Vacation photos (part01)

Comments

Thank you, but I think there is much more to learn about the English language ^^

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Thank you for this information. I have some basics in English but the spaces between a word and its punctuation is something I didn't know.

AD-Games

Seconded. Also, it's minor, but in English there is no space before an exclamation point ("Wait up!" not "Wait up !"). I notice my French mother does that too.

Sibre Collard

Ooh, I see! That is a neat continuation ^_^ I think that either should be "Wait up", which is a colloquial or slang phrase if he's being very casual, or "Wait for me" otherwise. If English isn't /his/ first language then he should probably say the latter. If it is then either way works. Also wow, I had no idea that English wasn't your first language since you write very well.

Garz


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