Nightmare Moon WIP4
Added 2019-03-25 16:38:21 +0000 UTCI saw the comments on WIP3 and decide to paint the drawing a bit to see if how it would look in color.
Right now I spot a few problems that will be changed in the next update. The shoulder is too tiny, the waist is too thin.
The breasts look weird but I cant really tell what is weird about it. Trying to find some good reference pictures (drawn or real human) but I can't find someone doing this posture and with a similar breast size : P . Maybe the middle of her breasts should be facing to the ground instead?
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I am going to add the wings in the future so they will be placed around the gem. It is just a decoration.
iojknmiojknm
2019-03-27 16:44:25 +0000 UTCyup
iojknmiojknm
2019-03-27 05:34:50 +0000 UTCI think her back is a bit too scrunched. I know impossibly flexible spines are common in cheesecake and I don't mind them, but looking at the angle of her breasts and shoulders compared to the angle of the rest of her body, it's like her upper back is leaned back, like, 30 degrees or more. I'd decree the angle, just bring the rear part of the body down a bit and see how it looks.
DrakeyC
2019-03-26 02:29:08 +0000 UTCI second the idea with having a version without a painted-on butt mark. I like it but I also want one without it. Breasts... I think they look too "orb-like" whereas real breasts would squish differently. In other words, work on the squish some more. Also take her bra into account. And, yeah, seconded on the overly narrow waist and too-small shoulders. Oh, and what's the gem on her back? Is it, like, stuck in her back, or attached somehow, or just lying there? Might want to make it look clearer.
TwilightIsMagic
2019-03-25 22:05:55 +0000 UTCAs for the breasts, maybe just see how they look smaller, I think because of how big they are it does look a little odd given the pose.
Grant Hynd
2019-03-25 19:56:46 +0000 UTCas much as I like the painted cutie mark on her butt, will there also be a version without?
Grant Hynd
2019-03-25 17:13:13 +0000 UTC
