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Added 2025-01-11 22:52:47 +0000 UTCNew year, new habits. Arm still feeling some ph
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Having things be more light-hearted before continuing the fight was a good call on your part. We also got to see quite a few interesting interactions such as Vali and Akeno. And of course Shirou with the Pendragon sisters. If there was ever blatant setup for future events then this would be it. Still, I am curious to see how the grail plays into things and also what Shirou just did.
JeanMartin Freites
2025-05-22 00:04:07 +0000 UTCIt would have been so awkward if Loki mugged Rin and then found the holy grail. Curiosity and "Something else" nudged her to. No way or could be Aphroditie. The God killer plan is getting me very curious. There are a ton of moving parts and secrets. I am not even really sure how Shirou was changed by the grail and fay magic ( what was increased to give him more power, did it give him mystic eyes, can he channel more magic energy, more circuits? ect). I kept waiting for Shirou to fully manifest UBW and isolate Fenrir thoughout the fight, but using it against Loki to ensure he can't escape might be better. Akeno and Vali interacting was something I wondered about for a long time, with them being true hybrid cousins. It was nice to see. I am liking how you are weaving the plans of the gods in the background and the whole true god thing. You didn't just dump exposition right before it became relevant. That makes for a better build up and a more satisfying payoff. Medusa and Tiamat. I am pretty sure that Tiamat is both her pastself and the missing piece of Medusa. It fits naritively and FGO does something similar. The back and forth between Medusa and Odin really made it clear that Odin was just waiting for the right moment to merge and I am interested in what they could find out from Jormungandr. Though it is a stall tactic/ misdirection for Odin for the most part. Rossweisse made a bold move that is sure to have consequences, but she finally got to try Shirous cooking. It should be a crazy ride if the last fight was Loki holding back. Shirou of all people making a sword out of the pain and anger of the victims of the fire will either end terribly or set the stage for something worse. Altria made a unconscious Excalibur reference, nice. It's going to be fun to see what come of all the craziness about to happen. The great cold war is heating up right as all the gods know a disaster is about to hit.
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2025-01-20 02:09:07 +0000 UTCYay for the chapter! happy your arm is getting better. i am so happy they pulled a fast one on odin. cant wait for goetia to somehow be involved in killing loki. i know that shirou is going to make a contract with goetia somehow and i am very excited to see how. so i know that shirou has somehow slotted in the grail to his body and basically he is using it like a reactor like iron man. what i am interested in is that ALL holy grails are made by goetia, and so goetia now has a man on the inside and a way in. gonna be fun. the only thing i can see think of left is for shirou to merge all the hate into a purpose, most likely naming the weapon angra. and if he told the girls all of the visions or just some, after all, he didnt state illiya's dreams and how he will exterminate mankind with the holy grail. becuase to me it looks like shirou is trying to fire the bullet while the gun is in his hands before it is in goetia's, and a holy grail is one hell of a bullet/powercharge. i think thats everything off the top of my head. ciao! P.S. sorry i took so long
Grant Walker
2025-01-12 10:35:47 +0000 UTCThanks for the feedback but Akeno got the bowl and traced the sticks, the separtaion is correct, it was that part of the group walking to the truck per say, its already stabilished that Angelo doesn't have acess to the good stuff (read Enkido, Ea and, not less important, the golden armor).
Ronaldo Souza
2025-01-12 02:05:50 +0000 UTCMmmm I must say that it's the first time I'm waiting for the chapters. I got excited for a while because I thought it would be Rin who would seal Loki but hey. I appreciate the conversation between Akeno and Vali, in addition to including Odin's ambition and what would happen with a True God. The point of that is that you can play with percentages and compatibility, you always forget that a "sword" is the greatest demonstration of civilization because it embodies the cruelest aspects of nature. And we all know of a goddess who has that authority. I hope that with Shirou exiling the whole group to the other side of the world and doping himself with steroids, Loki will be given the opportunity to fend for all his authorities. From there on, the only strange thing was the ending since I think you forgot to separate the cuts between the trip and when the Emiya team gets into the truck. And that Medusa gives some chopsticks to Akeno and then Akeno projects some chopsticks. From there on it is only confusing that you say that HF got all the NP when before Azazel said that the descendants of Gilgamesh collected them, so that then Xenovia destroyed them, so that later when she faced Shirou she only had a stock of 20NP. All this is incongruous. From there on, thank you for the chapter.
Lacró
2025-01-12 01:17:20 +0000 UTC
