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FBBH 84

Arthur uptade: After several tests nothing... H

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Pride really does come before the fall. You certainly did a very good job at showcasing just what a chaotic war zone this sort of thing could be as well as conveying the emotions of people new to this. The rating game picked up in pace but that's because The opening salvo was the most challenging one so far with the exception of what Luvia is doing.

JeanMartin Freites

I hope you have better luck with your next vet! And that Arthur gets better! For the chapter. Repelling the attacks come with the difficulty of identifying which devils were enemies, you did a good job clarifying the methods each person had to tell the difference. Next Shirou combining Kanshou and Bakuya through alteration into a bow was really cool! And him using partial wings outside of ascension is also really useful. Both Setsunas and briefly mentioned Shirous feelings on the tragedy of casualties in conflicts like this made sense, especially with them not being able to save everyone. Tanins first fight was pretty clear with who was going to win, but it took longer than expected, granted that was due to Ophis’s snakes. Then came the original Leviathan, I was shocked with how quickly Tanin lost to her, I guess it worked very well for Levaithans entrance and to establish her power. Next will be Serafall to fight her and I think Serafall should be able to win on her own but I can’t wait to see how the fight goes! I also can’t wait for Diodora to get what’s coming to him which will hopefully be in a chapter or two!

Archer

Finally got time to review. Love the chapter and can't wait for more!

Grant Walker

😱 se fue todo a la mierda

Martín corral

Well, that was unexpected. I wonder, will UBW's other "tenant" react? Looking forward to the next chapter.

Pietro Deglie

NO MAMES COMO QUE TANNIN MURIÓ?! Now that i hace express myself the right way about the shock AND surprise that i'm having in my first language, second i hope that you can find someone that can help your dog with his problem and hope It all ends well, giving my 2 cents a dog of mine usted to have a disease called seborrheic skin and the symptoms were a lot of itching and losing his fur, and third and last first time commenting and i justo want to say that i love your story and how it Is going, always waiting for the next chapter. (If there are some gramatical mistakes, i'm verry sorry, hope It can be easy to understand)

Angel Coll Villa

That's a problem. Have you thought about checking it yourself? Take a comb and look everywhere, especially in the folds of the limbs. He had a dog a few years ago, unfortunately he died from an infection caused by some ticks. We did tests and gave him medication. He didn't succeed. In the end, we ended up finding the ticks in the folds of the ears. Every profession is honest, but not every professional is.

Lacró


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