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Added 2024-04-22 12:25:25 +0000 UTCMy dog is losing some fur so I am going to take
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It's good to hear that. No rush.
Lacró
2024-05-07 20:01:28 +0000 UTCWhile taking care of my dog I also got a little sick and not even with that he has. Tests showed nothing wrong anyway and the chapter will probably be posted tomorrow as I am finishing editting.
Ronaldo Souza
2024-05-07 19:58:09 +0000 UTCAre you okay, man?
Lacró
2024-05-07 18:59:02 +0000 UTCForgot to mention, hope your dog is good.
Grant Walker
2024-04-24 18:22:24 +0000 UTCI hope your dog is alright! For the chapter, the meeting between the three faction leaders generally made sense as they covered the new intel. Gabriel calling Azazel onii-chan was funny. Azazel ranking Shirou above himself combat wise was a surprise, but after thinking about it makes sense. Shirou, while testing his new sustainable power, immediately helping civilians in a war zone is what he’d do, it sucks but makes sense that interfering would cause other gods to get angry. Shirou being able to provide a safe environment for anyone he’s carrying is awesome! Especially becuase it means he can show the amazing views that he can now see to those he cares about! Now with Bellerophons mana pool, Shirou will probably even be able to trace this worlds Caliburn and I wonder how long it could sustain UBW for. Comparing Shirou to the top ten of the verse is sooner than expected but I imagine after some time he’ll grow into a place among them. Shirous conversation with Kirei was unexpected but well written, it’s interesting to see how Gabriel tried to save Kirei while he’s still Kirei. For the ending, Zolgen has managed to restore the original Leviathan in Katereas body while he himself has overtaken one of Rizevims sons. This is an unexpected development, it’s funny to see Leviathans disappointment in the old Satan faction and I wonder how she’ll play into the attack during the next rating game, either way I look forward to the next chapter!
Archer
2024-04-24 01:59:55 +0000 UTCCool chapter with lots of setup. I wonder who the newly resurrected leviathan was cursing and also what exactly she is going to be trying to do. welp, cant wait to see what happens next time.
Grant Walker
2024-04-22 20:55:36 +0000 UTCThe first part of the chapter was a little hard to read because I could not tell when the Gabriel and the others were talking. It you did not want to use “ or ‘ while not ( or [
ovidkid
2024-04-22 20:13:53 +0000 UTCThis was a bit of a rather low-key chapter. Which is understandable considering what happened last time but at the same time I was hoping for a more direct continuation instead of a Time skip with some explanation on what has happened since then. The talk between Shirou and Kirei was truly the highlight of this chapter and definitely one of the best they've had so far. Kirei in particular really got fleshed out and the nature of his new world definitely allows for him to be more at peace with who he is because of who was there for him. And lastly we had some small hands on what comes next at the end.
JeanMartin Freites
2024-04-22 18:58:11 +0000 UTCOMG it's Zolgen, we quickly pretend to be surprised. Now I really thought that the guy was inside the corpse of the original Lucifer. Now a bit of analogies. You have two countries with two governments. Government A is a paradise in all aspects, but Government B is a complete disaster. Then government B abdicates its position and government A sends a entourage to administer the state of the previous government B. But the policies of the entourage are not in accordance with the natives of the B government. This gives you three options. 1. Accept the new measures and resign yourself. 2. Leave government B in search of other opportunities. 3. Fight against the entourage of government A. In the third option, the natives of B face the legislative power of A and government A commands an armed command to grind the B with sticks. I would like to elaborate more on Medusa but I don't want this to be a theology sermon. Just avoid confusing the three great branches of Abraham. Although the three of them riddle at Raymundo. Branch B appears 400-600 years after branch A only to beat right and left to the native tribes. And well, those of the A made their way thanks to the Romans. The C good there at the time bombarding today. If something seems interesting to me, it is that Xenovia forgot about her second great master. The one who sits to the right of the throne. I don't remember if she was a Protestant or not. And it is certainly easier to make her hate something and since to develop her new sense of duty and morality. Especially because she never wondered why Durandal chose her. It's a shame that you skipped the confrontation between Azazel and Shirou. Especially since we had little or nothing about Fafnir's "greed" authority. The guy has a name among the dragons for a reason. Certainly that chapter didn't paint anything here. I hope at least you don't skip the Kamen Raiders' trial of Shirou and Rias. Being the main partner (at least until the heavyweights are on the payroll). The chapter without further ado. A little boring. The members of the old faction who should inspire terror by being outdated nationalists. They don't deserve a special mention. I must say that I am not interested in reading the next act. Maybe just the little plot of the nuns. But most likely you will give them a facelift since 'poor demons are so innocent'. Maybe only the end is interesting.
Lacró
2024-04-22 15:30:01 +0000 UTC
