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“Now Shirou had to kill them. I think you spend too much time on Wattpad my dear Yoker. That conception is terribly aberrant. And only in W do Hispanic writers have this bad habit of portraying Shirou as a murderer. Certainly I maintain that Shirou is an extremist who does not think about how his actions can affect others.” Now, there's no good fics of Shirou in Wattpad, most of it are translated versions of fics from FF and the other part are fics of Shirou been horny as hell, none of there are good at the end. My point here was exactly that. That Shirou is an extremist man that won't shake his hand if the opportunity to stop a war-like incident the sooner as possible, even if he needs to sacrifice himself or kill someone else. We got a bunch of examples of the last cause Archer, Emiya Alter, Mind of Steel, his intention of killing Shinji in the Fate Route, the same when Taiga was capture by Caster and Rin doesn't let him save his Fuji-nee and for a paragraph he thinks of killing Rin but discarded it immediatly in the UBW Route, him killing Salter in HF twice in the Good/True Ending and Spark Liner Ending even if he still liked Saber exist as examples, and that are canon examples of how he can be not that good. Why? Cause he is an extremist man. He's not a murderer, but he isn't an innocent boy either, he is just bad in his head.
El Yoker
2024-04-23 03:48:00 +0000 UTCWell the argument of Shirou using backup to stop a casual thug in an alley was too poor. You really dropped a spoiler there but I won't be the one to mention it. When you read too many FF you tend to forget the source material. It's good to remember that Shirou is a thrill addict. In HA he became a sadist for killing dogs. So let's say that in this whole situation he was really ecstatic. And he really bet his life and the lives of others at that moment. It's certainly a very cool behind-the-scenes development. Shirou had no way of knowing if at the time he went into space. Gil could kidnap them. He lets you see the frenetic type of character he has. My boy is the goat. Which leaves open the possibility that someone close to him dies (it won't be Kiri) and allows him to grow more personally. Although also that final moment in which Shirou chooses to take the blame for the actions that the Hero Faction will commit. He gives you the value of him. Because people are going to die. And he will blame himself which gives him room for more character development. I certainly didn't congratulate you on that. Now what I was referring to when I said “Gilgamesh's head in the ground” I was referring to why some guy didn't kill him sooner. The joke of DxD is that everyone seems powerful but in the next volume someone stronger appears. It's similar. Certainly a Villain is the final boss. He must not be strong. I think you're confusing antagonist with villain. They are not the same. Deep down, HF is right. But so does Shirou. They are contrary. If you want an example. The Germans didn't wake up one day and decide to burn Raimundo. There was an adjacent and justified cause for them. And so throughout history. It is in nature itself. Other than that, I hope I don't lose my position as the first critic. Thanks App
Lacró
2024-04-11 19:41:53 +0000 UTCWhile I won't deny my mistakes, I would call it more my style of writting but regardless, the truth is that the Surge is based on Proto Gilgamesh's and that one doesn't go all out to destroy the world. Also the idea wasn't to sacrifice the Hero Faction but make them into an escaling threat. It is something that isn't done anymore in writting as in 'the villan growing in power and preparation'. Most already show up at full force or too much power that makes no sense the protagonists are still kicking after the first encounter. Going to Kanshou and Bakuya and its multiplicative ability that is actually cannon and how the Triple Wing Strike and Overedge are executed, it is just that Tracing so much of them is exausting so Shirou needed a couple of 'minutes' to do it. Good thing time gets more irrelevant the closer you are to the speed of Light but even them it would take hundreds of thousants for them to reach Ea and at that point he can't use them effectively outside UBW and in UBW the Sword of Rupture would just... destroy everything... Ea is broken like that, I think we all can agree to it. The whole thing was that you are right, Ascension was always the means to level the field with Shirou against the stuff too strong for their own good AKA Juggernaut Drive. To be fair there are ways to write around it but doing so while dealing with some of DXD's mess at the same time by giving an equal power was more appropriate and even poetic. Regardless the Heaven's Feel patch as you called it isn't to deal with the Kings of Kyoto, the rest of the plan, the distraction, is to get one of them in position to them they activate Heaven's Feel. In a way it is the same thing as Ascension because it is a way for humans to fight in even footing against the gods, the top tiers ones. Now, before finishing this I will go back to the Surge, the reason why Gilgamesh's head isn't rolling was because he fully believed and trusted Shirou could surpass the attack. Sure it isn't as strong as the Original's would be but the thing about Angelo was that he is inteligent and that he knows how to read a situation, like he did when Sirzechs showed up and they didn't fight. The guy didn't know the limits of Shirou's power but despite lacking the ability to see the future, that was an Original only kind of power, he did some fast calculations on his head and decided to risk it because he needed Shirou to go save people. It was a 'I know you and you are going to do what I want you to do' kind of moment that showed that while Shirou surpassed Angelo in power the guy is still stronger in the mind or at least willing at put others in peril. Which leads me to an argument that I should have given York, I doubt they are even reading this anymore; Shirou's priority is to save, not kill and in a situation where he can't waste time where people are in peril obviously he will drop everything to save someone. Hell, it was why he fell in a trap on the first place, it is why a trap like that will always work on Shirou unless he is Archer Alter, arguably, or the Mind of Steel route, again arguably.
Ronaldo Souza
2024-04-11 15:57:12 +0000 UTCWow, that was very interesting to read. It's a shame that Patreon doesn't report these gems. If you allow me to intervene, I must say that both arguments are wrong and at the same time right. The Utnapishtim Wave was supposed to only erase Japan which is contradictory. Why, according to legend, that sea erased the world. But well, it is assumed that by then the new world (America) did not exist. And if you remember what they talked about at the meeting of the three factions about 'The World' forcing what was written in the legends to happen. That attack should have wiped out every human being on the planet. It is illogical to think that no one would intervene. You have Azazel there, in Kyoto there are the four Kings including Grand Master Oogway. And then you have the Shinto Pantheon. Even the aforementioned 'characters who were fighting elsewhere but realized the attack'. Nobody intervened, nobody was worried about that. Because if they do not intervene they are going against the main law of protection of the world of magus and putting their faithful in danger. Ask yourself why Gilgamesh's head isn't rolling on the floor or why some kind of organization never came together to hunt down these pedants from the khaos faction. Type the M16 or the CIA. He was a threat to no one except Shirou. We could say that it was more of a bullet. Now 'App' has the habit of omitting important details and dwelling on frivolous details. Like that moment where Shirou repeats 'It's time to end this' three or more times and he doesn't finish it. Remember that Gil has clairvoyance. So our dear author can use it to defend himself that Gil knew that Shirou would stop him. Even if this Gil is the weakest because aha even if the descendants of Gilgamesh throughout time looked for the most suitable couples to try to maintain a pristine bloodline that does not save them from the fact that at some point they would end up joining blood with relatives distant or committing incest. Which supports why our friend here is so useless. 20 NP and nothing else, Xenovia destroying weapons and blah blah blah. But you still have the nerve to say that he can use the attack 2 times a month. Regardless of whether the weapon has its own stored energy. It's a bit contradictory. Now Shirou uses Last Stardust and was able to cut everyone's necks and that's the end. This is precisely what I was complaining about the other day, not having a villain or antagonist that we should fear. The Hero Faction lent themselves to be the perfect antagonists. But they were shit and now Illya is going to invent a mid-Heaven's feel patch so they can take on the four kings. Wait, wasn't that the first goal? Yes, it's stupid. But it is more than obvious that HF will not give them victory. Even if they bring the heroic spirits they will not be able to defeat the gods. Even Fate's own and that's why Iris is right that this plan is going to fail. In fact it is even sad because if they lose they will be condemned to eternal pain. I find that paradoxical with Prometheus. Maybe he was a member of HF. The truth is that we are just around the corner from Juggernaut Drive and Shirou was in no condition to fight him. A half-baked RM, Ascension blocked by Bakuya, and few NPs. Seeing that Ragnarok is out and that the 'App' measures needed to be adjusted, he had to sacrifice someone. In this case to the hero faction. If you are picky you will realize why. When Vali took a beating and we first discovered who had Kanshou, they wondered if they could attach a beast to that sword. That came to nothing and seeing that it would be better to give some value to that statement, here we are. But man, Georg and Cao Cao going through Hindu hell at the hands of Shiva with their bare fists tells you the great nerf that the boys here suffered so that Shirou would have his power up and not suffer humiliation. Because hey my almighty Shirou can't lose. Certainly he is a bit exaggerated. Regardless of whether you have a weapon that can cut through divinity like butter. The fact that projecting multiple KYB increases his power is another thing that doesn't make sense. If we had agreed that Belp was a ghostly beast. Where does he get so much mana from? Yes Shirou has two Medusa Blessings, but really instead of increasing his power it should decrease it the more pairs of KYB are on the field. Otherwise not only does Shirou with Ascension have the ability to 'usurp the power of others' like he does against Half Dimension, but now he has boost and makes fools of Albion and Draig not to mention the pedant Altria. Heck if he projects 1 million KyB you can tank an EA. You'll tell me how hilarious it is. Now Shirou had to kill them. I think you spend too much time on Wattpad my dear Yoker. That conception is terribly aberrant. And only in W do Hispanic writers have this bad habit of portraying Shirou as a murderer. Certainly I maintain that Shirou is an extremist who does not think about how his actions can affect others. And there is still no one to tell him to his face. This is certainly a narrative device that the girls are striving to not be left behind. Akeno already said it on his day. But this is also the fault of 'App' for not portraying a real threat. In summary. If you allow me to say something. Pay attention. We may have three arcs regarding the sky and those who live in it. This incident did not disappear and we may see an official Kyoto stagecoach soon or as the saying goes "if Muhammad does not go to the mountain, the mountain goes to Muhammad." Remember that this Shirou has been with his family for a long time and he has never been alone. Even in a certain way his girls are in charge of showering him with love in his own way. Which gives you a skewed view of what demons are. But as my good Lord Jesus Christ said “let he who is without sin cast the first stone” no one is perfect here. Even Altria. There are always clues and spoilers. There are certainly many shortcomings. But as my good Gabriel said, “the only one capable of writing Shirou correctly is Nasu.”
Lacró
2024-04-11 12:43:15 +0000 UTCSorry for the previous one, pressed Enter too soon but relax. I will go by your points one by one or at least try. For all intents and purposes the fact that Gilgamesh had the Surge and other cards to play showed that he wasn't really going for the kill during the fight even if Shirou didn't know that, he was also confident that she could deal with him to a certain point. Things were also helped that nobody had died yet and the person who came close to kill anyone was him. On the other hand, when Shirou got True Ascension he got absolute control over the situation, there was just nothing for him to worry about anymore. It can be argued that he was a little drunk with power and euphoria, it would be unfair to not say so because he even expressed some emotions similar to it with Bellerophon before but that was up to eleven. Once again I must remind that nobody had died then if it wasn't by his own hand, that Shirou knew it at least, because he did went for the kill before getting Kanshou but retracted that when getting the advantage again. When the surge happened Shirou panicked because, as you expressed, that would sink Japan. He knew he screw up by trying to not kill Angelo, his friend, from the get go and the last few lines in the chapter were about it. After that he understood that his friend was truly lost and that the only way to stop him would be to kill him: Fate was already in motion. Didn't stop him from trying everything else before like he did with Sakura. As you said yourself it took Mind of Steel for him to kill the person he loved the most but if you go to the LN you can notice that he always, always, avoids killing unless absolutely necessary. Reminder that it wasn't him who killed Shinji but Illya. Reminder he went to kill Gilgamesh but failed due to the lack of mana. Reminder that he did finished off a corrupt Saber but still held back to try and save Sakura. Maybe it is unfair since I am the writter but I fully believe he stayed in character the whole time and only after pressed was that he went for the kill, retracted when no longer pressed, moved to demand what Gilgamesh did and concluded that killing the blond wasn't his priority since it woulnd't stop the Surge and saving people were his priorities. Those were his train of thoughts at the very end and I hope that, regardless of your choice of continuing supporting this story or not you understand there a lot of moving pieces together that lead to the end the chapter arrived in. Either way sorry for the bother and I hope I don't disapoint you next time if you are still disapointed.
Ronaldo Souza
2024-04-10 01:33:07 +0000 UTCAllow me to disagree. But, when Angelo was in Shirou hands after he fires Utnapishtim, Shirou could grab him and go with him to face the ways of his action, literally millions/billions of people would die if Shirou wasn't here even with how overpowered he was. I really doubt the potencies of Japan even would have a moment to react to that attack, even mention the gods of the land. That could make him change his actions? Nope, but at least he would see the consequences of his actions or at least made him think about how to be a proper hero and that could be used in the future. Other thing, you know even with all that you say, as a reader, it looks like the whole group of Shirou would die, right? The commentaries of Angelo saying that it would be a shame that Xenovia die for a couple of shots meanwhile parts of her armor gets obliterate like her helmet and others were very clear. Even if Angelo wasn't going to killing Xenovia because he won't try it, doesn't mean that Xenovia would really live if Shirou wasn't there. Issei would literally evaporate with all the sacred chants, Kirei too with all those injuries, and Heracles would break Caren's neck in one more second. You even write a sentence of Shirou thinking the worst scenario with the Gremory group, even if you say it was not a that bad scenario, that was a dead situation right there. And don't let me begin with Utnapishtim, like dude, after this shot it's logical that any kind of friendship with Angelo would get the f out of Shirou mind and heart. Dude, his beloved ones would die man, and you're telling me that Shirou would be the same only because Angelo is his friend? That's the bigger bllsht I even read in a while, if the original Shirou think of killing Shinji after the school incident your Shirou at least would not contain again Angelo if both of them fight again, it's a whole country that Angelo threatened, bllsht if he isn't Shirou number 1 threat right now. The Shirou in this last chapter was the most out of character in the entire 81 chapters of this fanfic, and that is the hill I would die for. I will still see this fic, but because I already paid to read it.
El Yoker
2024-04-10 01:16:43 +0000 UTCOr, if you prefer a shorter answer, the Hero Faction had isolated everyone and only started going extreme when Shirou proved himself a threat and when the Surge of Utnapishtim was fired he abandoned everything to stop it giving the villans a chance to escape.
Ronaldo Souza
2024-04-09 14:56:47 +0000 UTCAllow me to disagree with a lot of the arguments on this. I will try to break most of them apart but if I forget anything or you need clarification just send a message. Lets go first with this; considering that the whole thing with Kiritsugu left Shirou with the decision of 'I will do what I want depending of what I see' that part is kinda off. The whole point was to do what he judges necessary conform the situation. Consider another thing, the Hero Faction only went for Fuyuki after Shirou absolutely cornered them, in fact the only real person in danger there was Ise and unless he died it is fair to argue that Angelo had the intention of doing something awful but hadn't done it in fact. Those two, Shirou and Angelo, were friends but unlike the situation with Shinji, Fate and FBBH, nobody else was in peril as the blond was trying to limit the damage to anyone else. Even aiming to Xenovia wasn't really shotting her and even then it was clear he also didn't want to piss Shirou off. When the Surge was unleashed it was fair to say that Shirou panicked and flew straight to the stratosphere to stop it without considering anything else. Angelo had faith Shirou could do it as well. At the end of the day that is still a friendly spat in a sense, the Hero Faction is planning something awful but Shirou doesn't have the details, is friends with some and Illya is part of it. All that needs to be considered because if he had captured Gilgamesh there was a chance of him finding Illya soon after. Even in cannon Shirou only pushes the killing line, with action not just thought, when push really comes to shove and that wasn't the case here. For the first time he found himself in full control of the situation and if he was Kiritsugu then every member of the Hero Faction would be dead. But he isn't, he was friends with one of them and would really prefer to solve things without having to decimate everyone.
Ronaldo Souza
2024-04-09 14:55:06 +0000 UTCI feel this chapter is more of Shonen-like than others, in concept isn't bad, but the execution wasn't good, In this chapter I feel the most uncharacter Shirou from the all the whole fic, and we already are in the 81 Chapter, being prideful in all the “fight” making fun of his enemies every 2 sentences repeating himself “Would you stop? Could you stop? Will you stop? I don't want to hurt you. I don't want to unalive you. This is your last chance.”X100 in ALL the chapter 61 pages was exhausted to read. Repetitive even. Him especially wasting time to “prove” his point was again his teachings, in the fic Kiritsugu make especially emphasis about how he needed to make the kill even if he doesn't like it. For god’s sake. The same scenario happen chapters ago with all the Zolgen thing and Arcs ago with Shinji. I can count at least 5 occasions where Shirou could and would have made the kill count against Gilgamesh and the Hero Faction, only because he suddenly was THAT OVERPOWERED. But not because he is “edgy” or something similar, but because he needed to protect his allies. That was really a setback in his character development, an involution if you want. I feel that you forget how the nucleus of Shirou was. A guy that isn't really sane in the head but has the better intentions for the people he cares and will go NUCLEAR if someone precious to him would be in danger. We see that in UBW when Caster try to kidnap Taiga (the most precious person for Shirou), Rin don't cooperate and for a single line he was REALLY considering killing Rin if she doesn't shut the f up. Or in the Fate Route, where he REALLY goes for killing Shinji to stop Blood Fort Andromeda before someone get hurt, or melt in blood and Magical Energy. In Heaven's Feel, we even have Mind of Steel, he literally went to the killing of the person who he truly loves because she was a danger to other people in the city. What I try to say, in resume, is that the mindset of the regular Emiya Shirou isn't something that Shonen-like like this chapter portray. He is not edgy, but his hand won't tremble at the moment he needs to kill someone he considers/considered a “friend” to protect his beloved ones or a big count of people. And Gilgamesh, Angelo, really passed that line the moment he shot that Arrow of Enki to kill Xenovia in the end of the battle. And passed again that line several times the moment he fired Utnapishtim to the WHOLE JAPAN. At that moment Angelo was in Shirou hands, there's no way Shirou won't eliminate such a threat to his people and the whole territory of Japan in that same instant.
El Yoker
2024-04-09 14:34:13 +0000 UTCIt’s been a while since I’ve wanted to see the next chapter this badly, and man did you deliver! Shirous complete ascension was a sight to behold, casually dipping in and out of last stardust while tanking hits with his sword wings. Also sword wings! Those are so cool and make so much sense for Shirou! Next his mana supply has been insanely bolstered now that he can access Belerophons mana as well. In fact with his new mana supply his reality marble should be able to overwhelm most others given that he’ll probably have more mana than the others casters, which includes dimension lost. I hope Shirou looks into world egg theory a lot more now, becuase he probably could have taken over the dimension in a spacial clash. Then when he blocked Gil’s final move that was a crazy scene! Him soaring up into space and blocking it with a new move, although I sort of wish he used regular Rho Aias just empowered with divinity instead, but it was still cool! Also the Gremory group is a real set of powerhouses now, we’ve got Shirou, Akeno, Issei, and Xenovia who are probably ultimate class, Rias who’s probably already bordering ultimate and will reach it with a Noble Gear, then Koneko, Kiba, Luvia, and Gasper who are probably high class level. I have an idea for what the Hero faction plans on doing to get stronger, probably similar to what Olga did but different, they probably plan on summoning their ancestors heroic spirits selves into their respective descendants becoming Demi servants which would make them all vastly stronger. Especially Gil, who might get the original Gil’s full treasury from that and the capability to open many times more portals like the Gil we know. Speaking of which Shirous UBW just gained a lot of if not all of Gil’s current weapon roster, so that should increase his versatility somewhat. Overall, this was a great chapter marking Shirous step into a higher level and I can’t wait to see where you’ll take the story from here! (Also I still hope that Rias’s Noble Gear core is a connection to UBW)
Archer
2024-04-08 05:16:47 +0000 UTCGreat chapter but I want to see some artwork of the various armors that Shirou made as well as his completed Pegasus armor, I bet they would look awesome
Jack Lycan
2024-04-07 21:31:13 +0000 UTCSomething like that, I personally participate in the fact that describing each part and its color was exaggerated but that's your fault for wanting to do it in the first place. Let's say that magic makes up for the biological deficiencies of the individual. Personally it's funny, the shadow that Shirou uses, I had set her up as a Chess player. Yes, those guys who study 1000 games of their opponent. The problem with that is that if they only have 1 game, everything becomes statistics and probability. But that's the eye of the mind for you. Thank you for your time.
Lacró
2024-04-07 17:01:47 +0000 UTCOkay, that was a lot to read after waking up but that is partially my fault, insonia and such. Lets go for the 'contradictions' first. The thing about the witches are a plot from DxD that basically involved corrupting sacred gears and their owners in a fashion that would turn them into monsters, Jeanne into a lamia for instance. That is what Gilgamesh doesn't like, the idea humans stop being humans and one of the things he harped on since he first show up. The man is even sorry because Ise became a devil because he didn't notice Ddrag. To be fair with him no one did but what he wants is humans so using inhumane resources was never a problem however using the Tears was also a situaiton of 'beggers can't be choosers'. Prejudice or not, rejecting the best healing resource available is stupid and he isn't stupid. Next lets talk about the armors as in just because they aren't affected by physics doesn't mean everything else isn't. Xenovia's still softened the blow but the fact there was a blow in the first place should tell you 'Gilgamesh must have hit her really hard'. Which is the thing with the GoB, every shot is pratically a point blank missile so the idea was 'Xenovia isn't losing her head but she would have lost it, half her torso and left a hole in the ground without Peerless Armor'. Same applies to Shirou in a sense but he still left the planet easily and the description of the kinetic forces trying to harm him were just that, they trying. Bellerophon can reach the Heavens and he did it, he can go to space, travel to another planet, go to the Moon and back with no worries. Doesn't mean nature isn't trying to stop him, just means it can't. About the color it was to make it easier to visiualize but also because how Kanshou and Bakuya would make an armor in the first place. Sure I could try to mesh black and white everywhere but then I would have to describe every spot of the armor trying to split it perfectly 50/50 and after a couple of attempts I judged it too complicated to read. If it was an anime or manga then it would be different but in text it was... ugly from my point of view. Altria, and in consequence Artoria, is actually in caracter as she isn't angry that she lost but how. Artoria is a sore loser when losing disonorably which is actually in the legends as once King Arthur had Excalibur stolen, Morgan, and had to face it in combat. Guy kept getting up and up and up out pure stubbornes. She doesn't want anything bad to harm Shirou, she wants payback and win a real match against him to try and correct her own flaws. That needs some caracter development alright including she accepting who she is. Also Shirou already has Eye of the Mind, have had it for a time, I just didn't plainly stated it. Think about what the Eye of the Mind is and how he trains inside his Reality Marble, the guy practices against 'shadows' to gain experience and then applies it in real combat. That is Eye of the Mind(Fake) because that is skill is all about 'repetition'. I remember once reading a description, can't remember where, that Eye of the Mind is basically 'He has done it a thousand times so the thousandth and one time isn't going to be any different' or something like that. Also while all powerful, Bellerophon has weakness. And it is extremely versatile. Expect the next few fights Shirou goes in to show a lot of the second but the first one is actually rather obvious and also not. Spoiler alert if someone else reads this giant wall of text: he has the same weakness as a god because of how much Divinity he is using. Besides that the armor is strong as hell but its main function is speed, Bellerophon is a pegasus after all so offense is left for the rider. Defense is still a must because of Divinity and the armor itself but speed is his bread and butter. Hope that answered almost everything that worried you, Until next time.
Ronaldo Souza
2024-04-07 16:38:09 +0000 UTCYep, another day at the office. I think it's a little rude that you upload this chapter at 1:50 a.m. There are people who have to work on a Sunday in the early hours of the morning, man. Now, I know that we have already overcome that plot arc of how slow the story progresses, but, you should finish it within 10 or 12 chapters. The Jews already have their red cows and want to build their third temple preparing for the arrival of their messiah. Probably in a year or two we will all be in the averno (if it exists), I don't want to end up in the hole without reading the end of this story. Jokes aside, I particularly never liked how you end the fights. It's like: hello, I pass a 30-ton trailer on top of it but I can walk, run and jump. It's a little anti-climatic. Do you remember the contradictions: Gilgamesh massacres a group of witches who wanted to use Ophis' mana and now he uses the tears of the phoenix? You'll tell me how it is. You can't use one thing or another. If the armor is not tied to the laws of physics, why do you use kinetic energy to harm Shirou? Under that premise, Xenovia's brain should not have survived Gil's blow. The armor is great, but the color combination is aberrant. For anyone who wants an example, look for the armor of the Pegasus and pass a black and white filter on each side. It would have been better to have a fusion of the two. From there in more that nostalgia of seeing the armor and the references evoke memories. Although the attacks used there, ruin the grace of NLBW or Tusbame Gaeshi among others. If he can do that, physical NPs don't make sense and their epicity is lost. I think the biggest mistake was to give Shirou infinite mana. It is true that it solves its main problem, but, between that and the fact that he is no longer punished for using other weapons, the power up is a bit crude. Basically now the only value that UBW provides is the equivalent of a portable printer. We certainly leave the magic circuits, the quality of the projected weapon and the steps of the Trace On aside. It's a shame because Shirou is something like a guerrilla and right now you turned him into a Shonenboy. Basically no one can stop it or have a hard time projecting KaB. Nor could we explore karma, the one that Shirou could shorten the projection time by jumping steps, the eye of the true mind or the ability that allows us to take the full potential of the weapon out of a cut. If you give all that to him later, he loses value because Pegasus>All. Not to mention that he will no longer use the mana connection. A resource that, like Fiton, is wasted. If the mana was still the biggest inconvenience there you had a narrative tool for 3 or 5 more relationships. Even the opportunity to see Rin as Shirou/Archer's teacher. When you made the armor you never wondered what is the value of these if they all have the strength of Hercules, the speed of Hermès and the endurance of Atlas? We were talking about domains and that. We have a lot to explore there. Xenovia is a wall that instead of having some thrusters should use its Touki to move., Shirou is the fastest but sacrificing defense for a much greater speed and being the only one who should be justiced to 'go as fast as the light' and Akeno really don't know what the hell his domain is. Come on friend, you had a one-piece story, it can't be that you want the Vinsmoke Family instead of the Mugiwara. I want to trust that there is a second Gilgamesh. Otherwise, more than one will want to pull the hair out of the head. I remember that you told me that I would not disappoint the faction of heroes but until now they don't even seem to be noteworthy antagonists. You don't have a villain, or a threat that is really worth it, nor do you present a real challenge and with this sweep of soil that they suffered even less. You fell into the classic cliché of the almighty Shirou by defeating the hero faction. I think I want to trust Cao Cao and Sieg. They are the most compatible enemies against Shirou. Cao's BB is the perfect counter of Shirou NP or not and the one who replicates saying that NPs cannot be destroyed. Shirou's if possible, the invulnerability comes from a headcanon invented by the former writers of FF FatexDxD. And Sieg I hope he doesn't suffer a nerf that can't use all the NPs at once. Remember that there are gods present here, so Balmung has true Ether to sweep with all the ORC, let's not even talk about the armor. Anyway, they will lose to the almighty Shirou because aha is the protagonist. I blame myself and the rest who complained about the volume of words. Certainly this probably forces you to follow the story in a straight line. We missed a lot of lore. We have so many emblematic characters on the scene but all empty in their respective characterization. Vali, Cao Cao, Gil even the Pendragons. Altria is so inconsistent that she enters jumping for joy and out of nowhere is she upset? Without forgetting that his excuse for Caliburn was frivolous and thrown overnight. Also all the shit you throw at the sword of the national team. Personally, I'm just waiting for Merlin and see how it all ends up. We could say that everyone misunderstood the story of Calibur and that's why they are all stupid. They deserve a bit of lonely history on stage. The world can grow without Shirou in the middle. I don't think he left me anything. Great chapter, App. Good week.
Lacró
2024-04-07 15:15:23 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, well done.
Darashon
2024-04-07 09:59:38 +0000 UTCThis was a pretty interesting chapter. And not just because of the completed Ascension and a Showcase of what it can do but also because of the questions of what comes next.
JeanMartin Freites
2024-04-07 07:57:38 +0000 UTCAmazing chapter!!!!
Caleb
2024-04-07 03:55:32 +0000 UTCCiao! Love the chapter!
Grant Walker
2024-04-07 01:39:27 +0000 UTCOhhh... Oh I'm not going to like that.... I'm a super heavy Inuyasha fan and I have like a thousand stories I have memorized with kagome/seshomaru pairings.... I might need a content warning for if sessh dies.... And you might need a body guard if that happens.
Grant Walker
2024-04-07 01:39:05 +0000 UTC
