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FBBH 79

Final Fantasy Rebirth is out... Maybe the next

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I'm hoping that Shirou will see and or receive Kanshou during this fight so he can finally have his signature weapons

Jack Lycan

Good chapter! Also feel free to take a break when you want, I’m sure no one would mind if once in a while you need to push back a chapter. Asides from that, Isseis therapy session went about as expected, denial, anger, realization, then actual development while Kirei was enjoying it all the while. The mention of Isseis health insurance was funny, it makes sense that they have it but it’s something I never thought about. Next Angelos appearance was a surprise as was the kidnapping attempt. The conversation made sense, Angelo to focused on eliminating the supernatural while Shirou will deal to things on a case by case as they present themselves. The ensuing fight is going to be crazy! I can’t wait for the rematch between Shirou and Angelo, now that Shirou has UBW and Ascension, not to mention all the Noble Phantasms he’ll gain from clashing with Angelo, I also hope he ends up using UBW in the fight, it’ll be a big surprise and cool to see it overwrite dimension lost while also countering Gate of Babylon. Man the end was such a cliff hanger! I cannot wait for this fight!

Archer

I have my theory, I think Shirou will manage to convince them to let everyone go in exchange for him to surrender, then he is rescued by Vali's group.

ALEx tv377

Oh I agree about the room 100% but it is part of the lore and one that, unfortunetely,doesn't necessary needs much change. If anything it silently raises the point of the imperfection of God in a more serious story but Ecchi goes as Ecchi goes I suppose. From my part I always thought more about not the thougths but actions that count. Ariel for instance was a demonstration of such, she wasn't falling because of Muramasa but because she was so singlehanded focused in doing somethign 'good' she was technically attacking an innocent. However she never concluded the action even if it had an effect on her. Lust, on the other hand, has a more tenue line between thought and action. To some people the act of having lust already generates a reaction... but yeah, the room is stupid.

Ronaldo Souza

Damn, I really didn't expect that. I must say that an arc of this diverse team within The Chaos Brigade would be interesting. This is the beginning of a good joke: John F. Kennedy, Fidel Castro, Richard Nixon, Robert McNamara enter Dimension Lost……. To be fair you made the spoiler more obvious with the mention of a split personality balance breaker. It's funny, I must say that I didn't expect this “revenge.” Personally, I would repeat the cliché that you are using to get the enemy on duty to enter Fuyuki, but seeing everything that is missing, I must say that it would be very redundant. So I'll be all flattery. I love the way you make Shirou have an ideal close to his canon counterpart. He is an extremist through and through. Without measuring the consequences. He is not the protagonist who triumphs. We already saw his general destiny. It's true that I like Shirou better who suffers the consequences of his actions. For example, Kaleid's, although they already revived Sakura. In the same way that ShirouC is obsessed with saving without mediation those who he hurts. This one is the same and I like that. Angelo has a good point. To be fair in the real world if someone attacks a loved one and you kill them you will end up hurting your peers more. In a sense it's a little boring knowing that Shirou (nor his group) won't be affected if he causes a war against Zeus or the Spice Girls story to hurt Aphrodite. In the end everything will be resolved and no one will die. But what a good time you gave our redhead. Simply 'peak'. Certainly this rematch is more of a means to power up the NP in UBW. The tiebreaker is approaching and against GoB Shirou really had nothing to do so this was the most consistent development. Even if you spit a little on the heroes' own faction. Although I must say that I lean more towards the fan service side with the Kaleidoscope and Archer, Galahad's shield or Yggdrasil in Ragnarok. The tiebreaker of their fight was to be after Kyoto. And what happens with Isei? That was good and comforting. However, it raises a really dull variable in my opinion. Why the hell Ishibumi did I have to create that room as a cheap excuse for the Angels to have sex? Really the cheapest narrative device for Irina and probably Gabriel. Emotions and the fall of an angel. Is lust the fuel? If Azazel had asked his father's permission to marry that woman, would he still be an angel? That is a really moral and ethical question. To begin with, why would God give them the possibility of having feelings, desires, curiosity? What differentiates them from machines? When Miguel gets angry with Iris for mentioning the serpent of Eden, shouldn't he have fallen? Since he felt an “evil emotion”? Or Ariel, if anyone remembers her, she must have fallen at the exact moment she descended from heaven. Whether they exist or not, all such actions are irregularities. In a certain way, Saint Michael is the most human angel there is. Always among men. In Orlando the Furious he has a whole chapter where he helps Charlemagne with the Saracen Army. Not with power but with actions he guides them in search of virtues; He faces the sins and they manage to triumph. It is true that he was sent by God. But still there are many other examples like that. He is also portrayed as a Dragon Slayer in the same way that Saint George is portrayed. Outside of that in Fate as I remember the shape of it is based on Nike. Why would they have chastity? They are perfect beings. So they can't feel love? God gives free will to his machines. So an angel can't love? I must say that people, especially in the more contemporary sector of anime, think that love is just excessive sex and that's it. A fallacy portrays in the creation of that room. How I hate her, the most cowardly argument when facing a group. I ask too much for an Ecchi but they should at least rock a development. Now after that. I have a question. When you were writing the fic at the beginning. Beyond chapter 20-50. Have you ever thought about staging Wever's “Aula”? I was reading the FateSF FF volume 8 and the spoilers for 9. I couldn't notice the prominence that Wever's students have. Obviously with Rin as carry. But I asked myself the question. In a hypothetical situation in which the worlds of Fate/DxD were 50/50, the demons would fight over the Magus. In an era of Gods, the guy in LB5 threw meteorites at you. And it would have been interesting to see the strength of the “Aula”. In this environment. Right now it's too late but I really wonder if it didn't cross your mind or you didn't find a way to introduce it. Ayako> Setsuna. Thanks for the App chapter. Preferably take a break.

Lacró

I have a good memory to the things I like, and I remember every damn thing I can about your story.

Grant Walker

Ah, right, that... okay then. I retract my question.

Ronaldo Souza

"With the sun ahead of you and surrounded by swords in a triumphant battlefield I have no idea what else to call that version of you." She is a little ashamed but refuses to stop. "And when the dusk came, when the sun was not there anymore, the shadow returned. In my nightmare I see it, emerging from the ground, springing from beneath your feet, covering you little by little. It is huge, many times your size and has red eyes filled with hate." Illya lowers her tone as the image comes to her mind one final time. "I can't see that 'you' anymore, just a giant with antler-like horns like a crown on its head, a golden cup on its hand and just thinking about it, a word comes to my mind…'extinction'."

Grant Walker

Yeah, I agree with Julien '?'

Ronaldo Souza

And just when it looks like things were going on the up and up this happens.

JeanMartin Freites

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Julien

Awesome chapter as usual. The only thing I can think of is this is where shirou loses avalon?

Grant Walker


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