FBBH 71
Added 2023-10-26 15:59:32 +0000 UTCHere we are once again for another chapter. As
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We are close! Coming soon, be patient.
Lacró
2023-11-11 19:15:59 +0000 UTCWhen will you upload a new chapter?
num
2023-11-11 18:59:51 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! Couldn’t stop reading throughout the fight, before I realized it I finished the entire chapter! The fight was great so far, showcasing Zolgen at his strongest when his resources are boosted by Rizvem, a tough opponent but the team had options thanks to the holy attacks from Altria and Xenovia, the fire from Shirou, and the general magic help from Fay. Xenovias peerless armor had a cool unveiling and really shows just how powerful Noble Gears can be, I really liked the mana bursts from her legs it’s a cool and useful idea. Next Shirou and Altria fighting together in combat was great, loved the moment when they were back to back and when Avalon was healing faster due to Altrias presence. Summoning Rias at the end was a nice way to segway to a chapter end as a mid way through the fight. Rias will definitely do great here with the power of destruction against the waves of bugs. One thought I had was about Shirou firing the fire blades at the bugs from the air like he learns to do in original Fate, but I forgot that he still hasn’t learned how to do that yet, I hope you’ll have him learn that soon! And past that as always I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Archer
2023-10-31 23:18:37 +0000 UTCAnother great chapter
Julien
2023-10-27 01:42:30 +0000 UTCBe picky and Linear Algebra are my vocations! Haha, thank you for responding. I'm looking forward to Ragnarok!
Lacró
2023-10-26 22:57:33 +0000 UTCNext chapter will answer most questions and what you don't understand may be because I am not outright stating it. And yes, Shirou and Altria's interactions are supposed to be mechanical because one don't know how to act and the other is just trying to to the right thing while being techinically an enemy. Being part of the Khaos Brigade, no matter how begrundly, means something so every interaction is done with a great deal of caution. They also didn't had real solo interactions yet as once again they don't know how to act with each other with Shirou especially growning more and more suspicious of who she really is. Also this Fuyuki is different so... wait for the next chapter, it might explain enough to satisfy you or it might not. In the end criticsm is a valuable tool to help any creative endeavor but sometimes it can turn into nit picking if one isn't careful. Also Zolgen was introduced several chapters ago as Rizevin's friend, don't ask me which, I don't remember. Until next time.
Ronaldo Souza
2023-10-26 22:45:47 +0000 UTCGood chapter. Hello, I'm really sorry for being a nuisance, but if you plan to continue writing as a hobby you should know that there will always be people who criticize your work. Out of every 10 people who admire you, 1 will criticize you for better. In this case, I will be your Albacea. I feel that the interactions between Altria and Shirou are mechanical. I don't know if this is intentional, since she is neither in the form of Gray, nor in the spirit of Artoria. It's good that they don't fall in love with nothing, but, I must say that it doesn't feel in writing or the ideal of a gentleman that the Pendragon should represent. Maybe it will get better later. You said that after Saira's RT it would be the last thing on the DxD side. But here is Zolgen. I won't comment on the "why" it's in Fuyuki. However, I find it hard to believe that the current quartet can beat him so easily. It's true that you have heavyweights. Caladbolg, Ruler, Durandal and the sorcerer who when he is alone is the superior, but it turns out that if the plot requires it you are only the comic relief. One of the points that I remember in the VN was that the guy was something like that 300 years old when they decided to form the Grail. I don't know what the context of your holy grail war is. The fourth did not happen and no one has talked about the other 3, assuming that they actually happened, a case that would be a contradiction because everyone seems to know about the servants and the war in general. Do you portray him as a really old guy here and that makes you ask? Does your conscience not deteriorate? At the end of HF that ends up happening and Zouken takes his final rest. Interestingly, at the beginning of DxD Iseei also deals with that issue of longevity and that he did not plan to live so long. If so, there is a reason for human consciousness not to suffer from the passage of time. We don't know if Zouken was reincared by Rivezim. I say despite the defects that are always presented for the convenience of the script on the evil pieces. I don't think Beelzebu didn't put anything that would prevent the mental collapse of the human individual. (That's another topic that you can exploit, the conception of death about an ephemeral race in an immortal world) And yet he has lived so long but he has such a basic repertoire of creatures? In a magical world where every organism is forced to adapt. Do you only get wasps, beetles, mantis, spiders and mosquitoes? There are subspecies so dangerous that a picket can be deadly, imagine those things with mystery in them. I hope they don't make him a Kyrie Eleison in the next episode. (It is obvious that he will survive, and well his opponents are compatiblely better than him and Rias is the best pitcher with the power of destruction) I hope he is just playing, he respected the alleged bug that "shinji development" I think remembers an aquatic parasite that usually catches the tongue of the fish and fulfills the same control function, so it is not new. Damn even Shirou is a pole, which although he played a good role taking care of the backs of others in his Archer mode. The guy forgot about Huntring. Not to mention that almost emotionless moment in which he almost died. Really with so many problems that Fuyuki has. It's a good time for Kirei to arrive. I know he said he has problems introducing it into his story. But currently and under the plot structure, Kotomine does not have a goal. All the paraphernalia that happens in Fuyuki can perfectly be a trigger. Why not introduce it as an observer agent. Here is no Kiritsugo or Gilgamesh to discover his purpose. Among the lost, the rear, Calibur, The Peace Treaty, Kuoh, Aphrodita and now Zolgen. Not to mention that probably more things will happen in the future, all these things would not accumulate in the head of Fate's best antagonist? Now with Zenobia, if I don't remember this "core" that somehow serves as an equalizer for the power of the NP must be strong. I really don't remember if in previous chapters Zenobia received a super difficult mission from a God so that jellyfish can give him the "gift" and that it serves to be able to take out his power. Otherwise, what did Shirou do to get the original Durandal? I remember that someone in FF mentioned that the NGs were somewhat similar to the Zanpaku-to and I can't help but agree. But how much of the NP's history can you get? If we already know that there is an limbo where the heroic spirit resides, does that mean that through the "core" Zenobia may get to talk to Roland or Hector? And if so, can Zenobia also get the pseudo-servant? My doubts are because I don't know how much the "core" can get information from the history of the sword. For example, even if it is not an NP Zenobia could access versions of the weapons with which Durandal had contact? Something similar to Shirou's projection? I really wanted to ask this question when the RT arrived against Diodora. But, I'm in Europe and I came across this book by Ludovico that is called "Orlando Furioso" in case you wonder, here Astolfo, Bradamamte and Rugero are born along with potential NP weapons. What happens to the Durandal that is in Rocamadeur, France? Could Zenobia get a spiritual version of Roland's horse? Just like the pegasus? Thank you for taking the time to read me.
Lacró
2023-10-26 22:37:41 +0000 UTC(This is the third time i'm writing this, Patreon app is horrible ngl). Great chapter as always! Keep the good work! I wonder if you're going to make Shirou more aware of Avalon and stablish a deeper connection with it and its powers. Also, I would like to see more accomplishments and realizations about his reality marble. I can't stop thinking if you'll go with the classical "I am the bone of my sword" or Shirou's signature "My body is made of swords", gonna be honest, I prefer the latter. Of course, taking into account that a RM is the representation of one's soul I imagine the Shirou from this story would have his chant adjusted to better accomodate the setting of the world. Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm really excited!!
Lucas Souza
2023-10-26 20:41:55 +0000 UTCAngelo showed it to him the chapter after his first apperance. Sorry that I can't remember the exact number but it was on the time my editing wasn't as good as now so the grammar will be rough. Also yes, the descendant of Gilgamesh has Caladbolg and... other stuff. It is going to be fun eventually writting that fight when the two can go all out.
Ronaldo Souza
2023-10-26 18:55:57 +0000 UTCWhen did shirou get caldabog?
Grant Walker
2023-10-26 18:46:14 +0000 UTCLove the chapter and can't wait for more.
Grant Walker
2023-10-26 18:45:52 +0000 UTC
