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Added 2023-05-19 22:41:32 +0000 UTCFate/Bonds Beyond Humanity
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Similar comment to another, the fight with Lakmias servants was a bit to long. But the fight with her managed to bring it back! I really look forward to the next chapter when hopefully Shirou can get out and join the fray!
Archer
2023-05-24 03:22:27 +0000 UTCThe fight with Lakmia's servants was too drawn out, slowing the pace of the plot quite a bit. It was boring, unfortunately. I still liked the chapter though. Can't wait to see Shirou's side.
Pietro Deglie
2023-05-20 08:44:20 +0000 UTCFinally Rossweisse UwU Damned cliffhanger...
Pietro Deglie
2023-05-20 08:27:39 +0000 UTCIf I’m being honest, some of the chapters you have been posting is drawn out and boring. I skipped most of it in this chapter. I was reading the Fanfic since the first hour it came out and I love this story still. However, stalling out the story loses its charm. I know you are combining DXD and Fate so there is a lot of world building but still…There is a lot of unnecessary details you can cut out.
Andrew
2023-05-20 04:33:56 +0000 UTCI am gonna be honest, The chapters have been feeling very lackluster. Drawn-out. And just feels like it lacks a plot lately. I mean I skipped almost half the chapter and it felt like it did go nowhere. I think It is not worth waiting a month for a chapter that feels like it was cut in half every time. I am sorry but I think I have to drop it. or just remove it from my library for some time and see if I find it again. And if I do and it feels like the plot has come somewhere, I will be back. But until then cya.
IgnisPrimus
2023-05-20 03:38:27 +0000 UTCSomeone should definitely take Avalon out of Shirou what is the worst that could happen....
Phantom
2023-05-20 03:31:12 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, liking the build up in your stories I celebrate when you release a chapter, seeing Lakmia feeling like she is in control when she is to high on her own power to understand the consequences that will come to her. I wish the chapter was longer now I have to wait and try to hold my enthusiasm for the next one but I know the wait will be worth it.
Videogamer75
2023-05-20 03:04:39 +0000 UTCI like how you make the gods scary, normally they don't take it into account and they do it as idiots, without wisdom or anything.
num
2023-05-20 02:41:59 +0000 UTC
