FBBH 54
Added 2023-02-01 12:11:43 +0000 UTCThis chapter has two fights and the title of it
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Just about to start reading this chapter but I really hope this isn’t just another full chapter of overly descriptive pointless fighting with Shirou still incapacitated. The last couple have been brutal on my interest in the story
Eric
2023-06-05 02:32:04 +0000 UTCGreat fights! Can’t wait to see Rias fighting similarly to Kiritsugu gun wise! Also Im curious about what Noble Phantasm(s) Sonas team will have in their match from Olga’s experiments. Let’s see if Rias’s team can improve enough to beat them with that advantage, I hope they can! I also hope that Shirou learns to fire his swords soon, maybe when working with Azazel he’ll figure it out via an off hand comment. Still great work as usual and can’t wait for the next one!
Archer
2023-02-07 17:49:50 +0000 UTCWe need a Kiritsugu POV on his opinion on Rias. Very curious of what he thinks about his Daughter In Law
Andrew
2023-02-02 12:25:40 +0000 UTCYeah no I can already tell Rias is going to SUFFER during this training arc lol. It was a great chapter as per usual, and honestly I have to say that you’ve really improved even further with how you pace your fights. It’s really descriptive but at the same time it comes off as rather punctual, basically I just love how it kinda reads like an actual light novel! Like really good job AOL! Story wise tho, I’m honestly really happy with how things are turning out: Medusa’s growth and change and how that affects her mentally, Kiritsugus actual nigh human interactions with characters, everything involving Azazel lol. But most of all I really just, love how you basically established that Rias & Shirou both aren’t necessarily invincible. I think Shirou losing to Okita was good because it showcases that Shirou still has room for growth and improvement, same with Rias. It’s an amazing sort of development that I honestly really like cause, you managed to avoid the rut/issue I see a lot of crossover stories do. Which is basically make it so their main characters win without fault or struggle, it’s nice to know that we the readers can look forward to evolution/progression from the main characters. You honestly have my applause for that AOL. Lastly tho; I think the thing I’m hoping to see the most is like . . I kinda wanna see interaction between Kiritsugu and Rias. Shirous getting a harem, but it’s clear him and Rias are basically the main power couple of the story, so I think it’s warranted for Kiri and Rias to interact in the story because it just makes sense. She had a major interaction with Iri, and it established their dynamic as potential family one day, so I’m curious to see how that would work for Kiri. Same with Rias’s parents; I wanna see Shirou interact with Zeoticus and Venelena more, primarily cause they’re probably still trying to comprehend that their daughter is completely in love with a human. I wanna see the internal conflict of the fact that their anxieties about how their future would go, Shirous life span, the possibility that a kid wouldn’t last long. And I kinda wanna see how it gets resolved, and how their dynamic functions. This chapter, despite being combat focused, has honesty made me consider a ton of questions and thoughts for the future of the story. And that’s honestly really amazing. This was a fun read AOL, and I can’t wait for the next chapter! thank you!!
Just Kab
2023-02-01 21:31:55 +0000 UTCSnek Goddess UwU SHero to Ria-tan: Hey, that's hell you're walking into.
Pietro Deglie
2023-02-01 17:29:05 +0000 UTCIt’s like Alexander’s reality marble and a stand at the same time. Fighting spirit indeed. At least Rias knew that it was possible to make a stand.
Coleman
2023-02-01 14:46:41 +0000 UTCYESSSS
num
2023-02-01 13:53:02 +0000 UTC
