Occultus : Part 1 : Pg 49
Added 2020-05-11 23:05:30 +0000 UTC:3c This is end of Part 1! There will likely be 4 parts total (I'm reworking some stuff w the last half of the story). There may not be an update next week since I'll be getting this part ready for print (delivery is TBA until I can confirm it with the printer) BUT I really want to start part 2 right away since it's fun~
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Is there still the possibility to buy Chapter 1?
Antje
2020-09-23 20:33:26 +0000 UTCWhich would explain WHY Ezra is so extremely overprotective of him in the Avialae storyline. Not only do they have to hide his human status, Ezra is probably terrified of his accident-prone husband getting THAT hurt again
A-Random-Bookwyrm ?
2020-05-16 20:00:03 +0000 UTCPoor Ezra has to be picturing his sister's skeleton with the blackened bones and just thinking "Not him too not him too not him too" in his head. :(
2020-05-14 08:29:45 +0000 UTCWow asking him to move in so sudden 😂
Basketcase
2020-05-13 18:33:22 +0000 UTC@Aaliyah ahhh yes that’s what I meant! Idk why I put Silas name there. I fixed it!!! Thank you!!!
WilderNESS
2020-05-12 18:22:40 +0000 UTCI think usually if there's a problem in the blood (mainly with air circulation?) then veins will be a lot easier to see as someone's closer to death. His scar is on his skin so I think it's completely separate.
Storyline (Aaliyah)
2020-05-12 17:46:59 +0000 UTCI think that's Ezra saying 'stay with me'
Storyline (Aaliyah)
2020-05-12 17:45:48 +0000 UTCCan’t wait and I am excited see their story grow . Keep up the awesome work
Sheila Enos
2020-05-12 17:38:59 +0000 UTCI live for the suspense and angst.
Kaitie
2020-05-12 07:19:05 +0000 UTCWow, that's definitely strong poison! Gannet's mom must've suffered a horrible death. Congrats on part 1 done!
Karen
2020-05-12 06:44:33 +0000 UTCAre those the effects off the poison on his face? Is that how he got the scars?
Arianne
2020-05-12 03:47:19 +0000 UTCEzra, my sweet birb, you were supposed to ask him to stay with you BEFORE the chop chop got his foot. 😂
WilderNESS
2020-05-12 02:08:57 +0000 UTCOh i didn't know it'll be so long!! Thats so exciting!
Alex M
2020-05-12 00:46:30 +0000 UTCThat's the good stuff right there. /chef's kiss
Weavr
2020-05-12 00:04:55 +0000 UTCAlso can you imagine Silas thinking that's the last thing he's going to see before he dies? This was incredible.
Jennoasis
2020-05-11 23:43:17 +0000 UTCCongratulations on finishing part one!! This has been so amazing!!
Jennoasis
2020-05-11 23:35:19 +0000 UTC
