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SLIPPING INTO DEPRAVITY - Ch. 29, Restaurant Restraints

SECOND CUCKOLDING, PART ONE OF FIVE

KAYLE

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And the descent continues. I love the way Kayley gets aroused simply by Leroy demanding that she wear the necklace all the time. She understands what it means, but Sam is oblivious, because of what she’s hidden from him, and it excites her. As does “the game” she is playing with Sam. “…it was also dark and a little scary. There was a deliciously unrestrained cruelty sometimes, that frightened me as much as it drew me.” That Kayley is so aroused by the cruelty to Sam, so drawn to the darkness of it, is but a preview, I expect, of what is to come, as the story gets darker and darker – and so revealing. She may love submitting to Leroy (at Sam’s expense), but she also loves controlling Sam and humiliating him (“…With an obedience that gave me a tiny little wet thrill … It excited me … knowing I had this power over him.”). You certainly have set Kayley free to unleash against Sam. She may be perplexed that he’s not always hard as she taunts him (she really doesn’t know him as well as she thinks), but I think this is just a shadow of what she’s about to do to poor Sam – and even though she sometimes worries about him, she will get off on it, propelling him to unleash more on him. As always, great writing, Eve.

TJ Rogue

Gives a whole new meaning to the words 'Soup of the day.' doesn't it.

Larry Hunt

So, I was idly searching Literotica, and found a story under Loving Wives called - - "Enjoy the Soup". No idea what's in the story, it just struck me as funny.

Allen R

@Eve. Thanks

Craig

Oh I just love you!

Eve St. Albert

Having said that, see below, I think, is anybody else having trouble with Patreon? I see a notice in my gmail that Eve or someone else has responded to a comment, and I will see part of it there. But when I go to the page, that comment doesn't always appear. For example, I see that Mr. Fogarty made a response that started with "THIS!" and then I think he went on to give a different perspective on my take. I would respond, but I can't find it in the feed. This is not the only instance, and it does not matter if I access Patreon from my iPhone, my Chromebook+, or my Lenovo PC. Am I alone in Luddite land?

Craig

Eve should be getting comments like, "Kayley gagging on Leroy's cock in the backseat was so hot I came all over my phone. It's going to be hell cleaning the charging port." Instead, we're dissecting her story like we're at a grad school seminar. We can do better.

Craig

Here's what I think about knowingly letting someone I love, or even care about eat a bowl of piss soup, or food that had been spit on. No! I wouldn't intentionally allow it. But, in this erotic story, as being cucked maybe, that's a small price to pay. I don't know one way or the other. But, if a man eats another man's nut juice from a woman's pussy, or from her ass, like some bulls tell the cuck to do, or the wife suggest even...how's that not on the same scale of being disgusting? I mean at least the spit and piss was masked by the food...what's masking a mans cum? Another man's cum perhaps? The wife's? I disagree to say it wasn't cucking. Who says cucking only exist in someone's bedroom? I mean, isn't a cuckold, a cuckold around the clock? That would be like saying I'm totally disabled...but only from noon till 6pm. Just saying!

Larry Hunt

I think people were shocked by the food scenes because they were gross and shocking, not cucky, and not role play. It’s just Kayley’s dark side given free rein, perhaps for the first time. Stripping Sam in the car, while dangerous, fits comfortably in a cuckold scenario. But you are obviously not writing just a cuckold tale. I am happy and eager to see where you take us.

Craig

Obviously, I wasn't giving nearly enough warnings, given how traumatic everyone seems to find the restaurant scenes. All I can say is never go into a kitchen. I suppose I should promise that after this, I will never ever write another scene where one person's pee ends up in or on someone else. But you know I'm not going to make that promise. I'm a little surprised that Kayley forcing Sam to drive out on public roads with his pants down and belted around his thighs so that his erection is completely exposed didn't get more comment. To me, this was the most horrible thing she did in this chapter, because if Sam was spotted or stopped, there'd be no way for him to hide it or pull up, and he'd certainly be arrested for indecent exposure. She was risking having him charged. It will be interesting to see how the next chapters go down

Eve St. Albert

It won't be easy.

Eve St. Albert

While the restaurant scene was quite something. I’m a little angry about her making him eat soup that she knows the guy had pissed in, that just didn’t sit right. Also, the petri dish that he was served she let him eat it regardless he could get very sick from that. Doesn’t sit well and a little unbelievable. Then she missed a golden opportunity when they were getting ready to leave. She should’ve looked at Colin and said Sam my “husband” will pay the bill, then looked at Sam and said isn’t that right my little “Cuck” and make sure you leave a good tip. then turn to Leroy and said let’s go home and fuck my “Bull”. Looking forward to the second half and hoping that this is finally them being done with Leroy, they need to find new men and new adventures, now they know exactly what it is They want their extra curricular sex life to be.

FU

Eve did announce that the 2nd session is a five part series. I'm estimating 10k-or more for each....I think this is just was the warm up. Remember, they weren't exactly expecting it to start so openly in such a public location...a car garage is one thing, but inside a restaurant full of people has to be a whole new level of excitement.

Larry Hunt

I find it interesting that Eve has begun to refer more frequently to Leroy's reactions to Kayley's behaviour. Could this be a prelude to hearing some of the story from Leroy's POV? (Before or after Kayley decides to dump him for a new (better or worse) model, I wonder?)

A Philosophical Doctor

So, mixed feelings tbh. Liked the fact Kayley had a brief liaison with the waiter, otherwise the cuck triangle gets a little boring to me. Colin! This a name to conjure with. A name that has fallen out of fashion and has become associated with a vaguely geeky type of person, at least where I come from. In North America maybe not. They wouldn’t be young though, probably north of 45, so was his name realistic? The only American I can think of with this name is Colin Powell, and he deliberately changed how it was pronounced, Co-lin instead of Col-in, to make it seem more hip. It did anchor me in the story though with its randomness. Disappointed the sex with him was so short, although i get why. Major opportunity missed imo. At least Kayley got her own small victory and secret over Leroy Brown, although a pyrrhic one I fear. In what follows in further chapters, that may be the only thing that she can boast about to herself when she begins to lose her agency. What didn’t I like? Sorry, but if she really loves Sam, the pissed in soup would have been a bridge too far, the slimy vegetables spat upon and served to him in her full knowledge, definitely a no no. I get she worries about going too far and checks whether he is “up” for it periodically, but, sorry Eve, I wasn’t convinced. The problem is the story is premised strongly on their love for each other, it’s a big motif running through the story, so you do find yourself measuring her behaviour against that.

Royston smith

And who's the real Kayley? Has this all been simmering like Sam's cuckold soup once did, and just now starting to spill from Kayley's pot of justice. To be served cold, hard and so degrading with spicy humiliation. Wow - but they didn't know Leroy. Sam at least tried digging up as much as he could before this session. So, everything he told them, he was able to find was true - that's why at least for now there is trust.

Larry Hunt

Sam emasculated himself long before the first cuckold session. He failed his number one job as a partner and husband, to protect Kayley. Instead, he handed her over to an abusive asshole. She is committing reckless and shameful acts, and he hasn’t stepped in even once. He is not keeping her safe. So even though she loves him madly, deep down, she’s hurt and pissed at him. She blames him for the mess she’s in, even if she’s not consciously aware of it. That is where she gets the rage and spite to laugh at him for eating the soiled food. This is why she wants to crush him like a cuck bug. It makes emotional sense. That’s my theory, anyway.

Craig


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