Rewriting the Arc
Added 2019-11-21 03:34:30 +0000 UTCThere will be a slight delay as I re plan and re write the next following chapters after 344, I try to push out the new story asap!
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Why do they have to die at all? Also the whole convoy not making it was overuse as well.
Thundermike00
2019-11-21 19:29:39 +0000 UTCI sorta basing this part on BHD ... but i guess it was too predictable and overused I guessed... so I decided to scrap the 2nd half of it and rewrite something else
2019-11-21 04:33:43 +0000 UTCI actually liked the goblin sad to see him died.
Thundermike00
2019-11-21 04:01:28 +0000 UTCWhat made you think it should be rewritten?
Thundermike00
2019-11-21 03:59:42 +0000 UTC