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Pokemon thing

I don't think I like this one. I think I may have wasted time on it. Too much clutter. Too much information. The eye isn't drawn to any vanishing points, because I can't comprehend them. Ugh. The Nessa thing seems to have been a waste. I'm going to draw drawing her and misty again, but maybe ins something simpler. 

Pokemon thing

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Tan lines are a legit idea.

Yeah maybe the next one should really just have Nessa and Misty in it....... maybe something with tan lines.

Hivedragon

I like it to you got a good amount of babes so you rock as always I know we are our own worst critics. But least you nailed, Misty and the other Red head perfectly. Even that one Pokebabe is hot.

Master Dragon

I like it. It -is- cluttered and not focused on anything but that gives it a kind of amateur photography quality to me which i'm liking. It also means the girls are posed casually rather than the standard 14 girls at a beach porn poses.

Mandragora

Yeah. I think you went for to much. Focus on one girl in high detail the rest in the background. Other than that, this has good colors, really pops. And I agree with Dvspuss, this was going against your weakness. But all that said, I still like it.

Geeko170

Misty has a nice ass at least

Barcod

I think this picture focusses on your weakness (making a scenery) and ignoring your strength (telling a story) (I am trying to be helpful but if I am not please point that out)

Dvspuss

Looking great man

That black guy

Looking cool, not be so hard, that misty ^^

Ace

Mark let me help you out bro you're making this too complicated: Brown booty

makai9

I'm loving how you drew Nessa, Misty's booty, and Sophia's titties.

Mauzeyman


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