WIP?
Added 2019-01-13 00:34:53 +0000 UTCSo . . . Eh?
I think it sucks. I rushed into it without no idea of what I was really doing. Initial idea was of Zack grabbing Kasumi's ass and checking it out while Hayate watched. Then I added Ayane. Then I threw in two more panels. Gross. It looked . . . Awkward. It looks like something I would have drawn in 2015.
I'm going to try again. Something simpler. Just the idea from the top panel. Zack grabbing Kasumi's ass and checking it. Hayate and Ayane may stay. I'm just not digging the 'vibe' I have going here. It's soft and messy. I'd like Zack to come off as a bit more dominant, and Kasumi as a bit more shocked/bashful, but also intrigued. I don't know. I just need to get ONE panel right, rather than have THREE panels that are crap.
I'm not giving up! Just starting over.
Comments
Its ok to go back, if its to take flight, I am sure you can make this work fine.
Ace
2019-01-13 09:35:39 +0000 UTCI'd say just have Zack go after all three ninja babes from the poll, that way you can set up things perfect
Master Dragon
2019-01-13 05:11:31 +0000 UTCI'd move the panels if you can reuse or salvage what you've drawn but I wouldn't delete them. they are nicely made. The theme is a little odd though, because Hayate and Ayane and Kasumi are (iirc) siblings or half-siblings, not lovers.
Mandragora
2019-01-13 03:21:42 +0000 UTCCould have Zack checking off a list of the girls names/faces and let "The implication" stand
That black guy
2019-01-13 00:49:29 +0000 UTChe he he
2019-01-13 00:39:20 +0000 UTCVely DISUHONORUBUL
makai9
2019-01-13 00:36:45 +0000 UTC
