WIP
Added 2018-09-13 23:40:02 +0000 UTCI've got a few irons in the fire right now. I really am trying to power through this ladybug comic, but ugh, this on doesn't look so great. Luckily it's just story fluff. I'm not sure what Page 8 will be. I COULD get straight to the action with The Cougar abducting Adrien while he's flirting with Julica and Rose, but what I'd like to do is have Marinette have a run in with Chloe first, since that's more in keeping with the spirit of the show.
Comments
Looking good, i would not go straight into action, pacing is important and the idea to put some extra is good
Ace
2018-09-14 05:08:18 +0000 UTCNice job on the comic. I like those extra chicks that are suggesting the threesome.
Master Dragon
2018-09-14 02:58:39 +0000 UTCNo, the art here is just bad, and I don't want to spend another hour fixing it, so it's just going to stay bad.
2018-09-14 00:22:13 +0000 UTCI wasn't going to, but then they introduced a gay love interest for him, and I just thought, "WOW! Marinette friend-zoned him so hard that they had to introduce a pity-dick character for him," and that cemented it for me.
2018-09-14 00:21:44 +0000 UTCI think I may change the dialogue, thanks.
2018-09-14 00:20:57 +0000 UTCYou would have all my money forever if Marc’s a big buff dude. Also, wouldn’t the obvious side joke for panel 1 be “ménage a trois” cus France?
Greg
2018-09-14 00:00:50 +0000 UTCMarinet loos a little small and her arm looks really off, though i guess you're going for a more chibi look on this peaceful page with the big heads? (I realize the show had big heads but not quiiite this big proportionally.)
Dantels
2018-09-13 23:57:24 +0000 UTCI doubt even you could resist to draw a blonde, bratty would-be dom and risk a cat fight with the protaganist. Not to mention her sub assistant.
Ultrasound7
2018-09-13 23:56:40 +0000 UTCOh no, I was hoping the cute little redhead would go unmocked. Ah well.
Dantels
2018-09-13 23:50:01 +0000 UTC
