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Fantasy Fuck-Fighting League! 2.2

Should have had this done yesterday, but I've already talked about my time management. I also cut the coloring short because I need to work on another comic-page I've been neglecting that really deserves the attention. 

So is this structure working for people? I'm curious, because the way this will go means I'll only get a full fight out every two weeks. One Sunday, introducing the fight and the vote, then the second Sunday showing the results, and repeat a week later. 

Would you rather this come out quicker and shorter? I could have my Knights vote on which fight they'd rather see, and give 3 different match-ups. That way I'd just draw the fight, and we could get through a match-up once a week. 

Hmmm. Just to experment, I might do that for the first one. I'll have people vote on the match-up, but then I'll decide the winner with a coin-flip. 

Fantasy Fuck-Fighting League! 2.2

Comments

what would happen if won wendy?

Alessandro Canciani

ok... no problem

Alessandro Canciani

. . . Although I will re-use characters I think. Like Wendy versus Tinkerbell, but I'd rather have Tinkerbell fight Thumbellina.

I don't think I'll ever have the time to do alternate endings. I'd rather move on to the next fight.

I would like to see as much as it would be if won wendy

Alessandro Canciani

yeah, I should add a bubble before adding it to HF, although I did have tiger-lily say in the last page that if Wendy lost she'd end up a cum-dump.

Let us try

That black guy

Maybe before you put it on HF add a dialogue bubble with the tribe thanking her for the new cumdump?

Dantels

Personally, I prefer the longer format as it's more content. But I understand the constraints on time and am fine with going a shorter route. I would ask about a compromise of the fights being 3 pages rather than 2 though. This comic kind of felt like that story-telling gaff of "one thing led to another" and we ended up here. They went from deciding to fight straight to Wendy losing and then it went from her losing straight to the aftermath of her punishment which is probably only clear to us patrons who discussed it. I guarantee that some people who see this on hentai-foundry are going to wonder what happened. I understand that a 5-part comic like last time is a huge time sink, but this two page comic had some pretty big gaps in story. Maybe with a 3 page format those gaps could be filled in. Say, page 1 = the set up, page 2 = fight, and page 3 = aftermath. That would allow an extra panel on page 2 to be dedicated to the fight and allow a more thorough showing of the punishment on page 3.

Smiling_Jack

I prefer the structure you are doing currently. Gives a week for the votes to build and as the winner of the voting becomes prevalent, it gives you a chance to figure out what you'd like to do. I always exercise that patience is a virtue. :)

I am fine with either option. Generally I like this one right now, where we have a sexy picture introducing the fight, vote, and then see the outcome, but having us vote on the combatants and not knowing the outcome until it arrives could also be interesting.

ArdenW

Hmm both options sound interesting. and the flip coin sounds fair.

Hivedragon

We can try that, just make sure that you put 3 fights you want to draw, is a nice pic with a sexy couple, but of course after the epic 5 parter we need to get used to the short ones. Looking forward what you have in store

Ace


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