Three Stories
Added 2015-12-12 01:44:03 +0000 UTCThree Stories I've written over the last few months for various patrons. Would you all like it if I post them like this? Sometimes they get rejected by literotica and I don't know what else to do with them.
One of them is a magical fantasy story about a rogue. The other two are very rough reluctance stories about girls getting broken in by arrogant studs.
Comments
Its always nice to read stuff
Hivedragon
2015-12-13 02:36:14 +0000 UTCI've always wanted to do random bits of art for any of my Nadia stories . . .but sigh . . . time.
2015-12-12 09:19:44 +0000 UTCThanks. For some reason certain kinds of stories seem to draw more paying commissioners, but I do tend towards violent things for some reason.
2015-12-12 09:19:08 +0000 UTCI don't mind them being placed here. If anything I get a good read out of things I'd never have read upon another site.
SorrowBorn
2015-12-12 08:20:15 +0000 UTCGalvyn was the one I liked the most, but all three just come across as angry brutes pulverizing hot girls in what amounts to dangerous hate sex until they're broken. It'd be kinda nice to see one where the guy's a genuine nice guy who's a bit of a romantic who also happens to be Achilles in the sack. I dunno; a little less angry borderline abuse sex and more romantic passion? Just my two cents. They still read well, though, apart from the few grammar mistakes that have already been mentioned.
ArdenW
2015-12-12 07:31:57 +0000 UTCOut of the three enjoyed Galvyn the most. Apart from just a couple of Grammer errors it was a great read. Any chance of seeing cover art for this story?
2015-12-12 04:54:30 +0000 UTCThanks. I'll give it another go before actually posting it anywhere. This is one of the biggest obstacles to my writing. i have no fun editing.
2015-12-12 02:08:58 +0000 UTCDecided to start reading one just now, and though I'm enjoying it, I am finding some grammatical errors every now and then that just put the flow on hold. With a little bit of editing, Galvyn's story could improve by quite a bit.
Weiss
2015-12-12 01:57:48 +0000 UTC
