adblood 75
Added 2026-02-28 19:55:36 +0000 UTCComments
Tftc. Wondering what Jessie's look to mark meant, and what he is hoping for.
Whaler Whaler
2026-03-02 03:13:33 +0000 UTCGreat stuff! Although, wasn't Mark told something along the lines of "never bow to anyone, ever again" lately? Am i misremembering it?
Seijax
2026-03-01 10:53:29 +0000 UTCTftc! That is aan incredible ending, I'm so excited to see where this goes! Page 15: Almost all of the vectors of the platform were directed at Addavein, and though Mark suspected Addavein couldn’t feel those emotions like he could, Addavein also absolutely could. -> reads weird to say 'he couldn't feel those emotions' and then 'also absolutely could'. perhaps "like he could, Addavein could absolutely still sense them."? Page 16: Her bright right red hair was done up -> bright right red is either a typo or something I simply have never heard of. Page 31: “ She was the bigger monster, -> “She was the bigger monster,
DeadicatedReader
2026-03-01 03:19:14 +0000 UTCFascinating! So a lie became a myth became a person, hm? I suspect heavy witch involvement in these shenanigans.
Robert H.
2026-03-01 02:41:30 +0000 UTCOooohhh now THAT’S intriguing! Thanks for the chapter.
Diego C
2026-03-01 00:12:25 +0000 UTCLots of things going on, and it looks like things will continue happening for the rest of Winter Ball. Fun! Thanks for the chapter! "helpfully identifying that the guards back there as different from Walaria’s," -> "helpfully identifying the guards back there as different from Walaria’s," "Addavein grinned. “Quiet so.”" -> "Addavein grinned. “Quite so.”" " As Mark and his got onto a secondary tram," Something's missing after "his".
Jakobuo
2026-02-28 22:00:28 +0000 UTCSo the Resurrection Ghost became real because the people believed it was real? That's the vibe I'm getting. The Winter Ball sort of reminds of when Erik went to the party where he proceeded to kill half the dark dragon's priest and soul curse/bless the other half with benevolence. Funny considering Mark is doing something similar with his Skiller magic.
Selvias
2026-02-28 21:59:13 +0000 UTC
