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277 - Jane

From the desk of Erick Flatt, to whom it may co

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Technically we've got five cosmologies but I was trying to avoid being too pedantic while making the point 🙂

James Skinner

I mean, it is CANON that there aren't just two magic systems. It is just that Erick has only delved in to two systems.

Tristan R Mitchell

The whole uterus thing gave me a Sensible Chuckle™ and Evan's black cultivator goo produced a full snort of amusement. Great info in regards to the personal script, insight into various folk's state of mind, and funny bits throughout.

Hodge Wasson

That's what made it so wonderful lol

Jake Martin

What a great way to see the 'Personal' in the Personal Script. We haven't yet seen how the gods of Veird interact with or what they think of the PS.

jj

This really should have been the chapter janes figured out that they needed to be in full size dragon form to deal with the personal script reasons stuff.

Findell

No one expects the uterine inquisition!

Rayse

Shivraa's POV really hit for some reason. I like a less angtsy Jane as well, feels like she's really grown as a character.

Rayse

I loved all tje bits form so many different perpective showing how.mwny peole strive so wonderful 👏

Jackjargon

You aren't ever happy with just one thing are you? Two main characters, two cosmologies, two magic systems and now two systems lol.

James Skinner

We got all the classics: black cultivation goo and hand-holding causing babies!

James Skinner

Good chapter especially all the other povs cause they were cool to see. I like Evan. I want more of him. And it would have been cool to see Quiltalap pov. (Maybe we get him and Ophiel next chapter). But yeah the script is fun. I like how the marks have personalities, that's super interesting.

Heru Kane

The Personal Script is amazing!!!!!! Like OMG soooo amazing. I want more about it. Can we follow a scholarly admin like dude on Earth who has the new Personal Script. Hehe

Heru Kane

Go Shivraa!!!!!!!!

Owen Kaz

I love this chapter for all the POV’s of the fallout of the personal script release. Also how they dealt with their own personal scripts. I also love how Erick is now much stranger than before from an outsider perspective because of how high level his dealings are. I would love to see more perspectives outside of Erick like from Quilatalap, Guile, and maybe some of the other gods/fae. Because I think it would be really interesting to see what they are doing/feeling. Thanks for the chapter and I’m looking forward to what comes next.

Zero

i did not expect to read a chapter about Jane's uterus.

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