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Added 2022-08-21 01:12:32 +0000 UTCThe hallway of the gods in most Interfaith Chur
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Aw kinda wanted him to be long
Rebecca
2022-08-23 22:37:27 +0000 UTCAnd I really like the setting of Jane’s adventure in the deep underworld! Her elite, diverse party vs the terrifying (and sometimes domain-holding) denizens of the deep. Definitely excited for her to find her sword and maybe more.
Robbs
2022-08-23 15:53:14 +0000 UTCMaybe Erick feels conscious about it because of Jane. "I have a daughter your age, it would be wrong!"
Conrad Wong
2022-08-22 05:34:07 +0000 UTCNow that you mentioned, it's actually pretty ironic. Erick's felt it was weird for him to be with Nizir due to the age and experience gap between them, but Rozeta is literally millennia (I think she was either over 3 thousand years old or was born around 3 thousand years before the Sundering) older than him and the gap of experience between them is massively larger than between him and Nizir.
raisgollous
2022-08-22 01:59:46 +0000 UTCI've been waiting the entire story length for Erick to sing the song, glad its actually going to happen
Jak
2022-08-21 23:48:34 +0000 UTCAfter all the drama with him telling Nizir that’s she’s too young, it’s funny to have Roseta be like ya sure! Just you know, in like 120 years? You’re a bit too young and not a god for me.
darkmuch
2022-08-21 23:12:05 +0000 UTCMan I didn't think too seriously about those two but after your comment I freaking ship it.
Tsula
2022-08-21 16:50:10 +0000 UTCI also really like that Rozeta is a potential love interest to Erick. I think the two have a very good chemistry together and I really like how the two trust and respect each other so much. Besides, Rozeta is one of the few people who really knows and understands Erick and his struggles. And she is one of the only people who can actually help with the worries, dangers and challenges he faces. Likewise, he is one of the people she confides some of her worries and problems, and is actually capable of easing her burden. He literally made her cry of happiness and relief. And she also finds him cute and also occasionally drops her front of a neutral arbiter around him, showing how comfortable she feels around him. So I think if they got together, they would take care of each other very well.
raisgollous
2022-08-21 16:14:00 +0000 UTCI don't know why but I pictured a golden dragon for Eric. This still works though. Thanks a lot for the amazing chapter :)
CentaureHeart
2022-08-21 11:33:05 +0000 UTCI am actually quite fine with waiting for this story, because every chapter delivers^^
s476
2022-08-21 09:51:23 +0000 UTCIs that size a hint towards my favorite orcul archmage who's name starts with s and maybe has an y but I always forget how it's in total? Great chapter
s476
2022-08-21 09:50:44 +0000 UTCGods dammit. I have no story where i hate waiting so much as this one.
Josh
2022-08-21 08:49:22 +0000 UTCThis would make a lot more sense to me. Him ending up a Western Dragon like Melemizargo was basically a given (and unfortunate, since Western Dragons are associated with destruction and greed (which is really what Veird's dragons should look like in my opinion, based on their actions) while Eastern Dragons are associated with protection and guidance, which suits Erick MUCH better). Still, it makes sense that Mel would do this, but like you said, it would make more thematic sense for him to be the reverse: dark inside the light (Erick), instead of light inside the dark (Melemizargo). Perhaps there will be a transition later on? The fact that his [Perfected Benevolence] and [Greater Dragon Body] are NOT combined yet leaves me thinking he can do so later and assert his Benevolence onto his Draconic form.
Collateral_ink
2022-08-21 07:19:34 +0000 UTCFor curiosity's sake, how big is Erick's dragon form, 1, 2 or 3 kilometers in length? I think most greater dragons would be around only 1 kilometer in length, but he seems to have quite the special dragon form even aside from being a western dragon.
raisgollous
2022-08-21 06:42:59 +0000 UTC‘Hello darkness my old friend…’
BW
2022-08-21 05:16:55 +0000 UTCI wanted him to be a dragon but was guessing that Protean would end up having something to do with the solution. Glad to see it was considered and he became a dragon anyway.
Foxmoor Fiction
2022-08-21 05:13:12 +0000 UTCThis was marvelous! Such an awesome chapter!
Heru Kane
2022-08-21 05:11:44 +0000 UTCI love that the dragon just wants to hear the rest of the song
Pheonixarcher
2022-08-21 05:09:08 +0000 UTCThe moment Erick walked into melemizargo's place the first thing I did was beg that he would sing the song. When he did I had the biggest smile ever hahaha.
Ina Harris
2022-08-21 05:04:41 +0000 UTCTbh me too
Alexandra
2022-08-21 04:57:28 +0000 UTCLoved it, I really expected a white dragon with black highlights though. I can't wait to see people's reactions lol
Jamie Idle
2022-08-21 04:25:05 +0000 UTCAhhhh this was amazing! Fantastic chapter, I've been really loving this story arc.
Rayse
2022-08-21 03:50:54 +0000 UTCall fixed! thanks
Arcs
2022-08-21 03:32:33 +0000 UTC'raise them those Wizards' -> 'raise those Wizards' 'his own person Reality' -> person -> personal 'But I’ll get it all back, for sure! Soon, Erick! Soon! Darkness will spread once again! And you will be the Herald of Benevolence that lights the way!' <- should be bold
Corwin Amber
2022-08-21 03:31:14 +0000 UTCyay dragon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thomas j walters
2022-08-21 02:48:05 +0000 UTCwhoops! fixed
Arcs
2022-08-21 02:47:47 +0000 UTCThrowback to the Songli arc with Paul=Poi? Dragons are actually just really scary ducks. I am excited to compare the effects of the blessing of empathy with benevolenced dragons. Ar'Kendrithyst is one of the highlights of my week Arcs!
Jack Elphinstone
2022-08-21 02:44:37 +0000 UTCThe childish joy I get from these chapters… it’s unmatched! TFTC arcs!
Robbs
2022-08-21 02:07:35 +0000 UTC
