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169 - Jane

Events proceeded rapidly after her father vanis

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I think they'd notice that. I do think that this teleport and being trapped in it for days is closer to how navigating the mana ocean looked. Why he got trapped in it, I can't say. The only people who've used this teleporter were also on the path.

Cam Hanach

I imagine the destination pad is covered by that river of thick air. He blips in and is swept away.

Pheonixarcher

I knew you would write something about erick at the end!

Pheonixarcher

If I was a monster in that abyss I'd be hoping for Eric not to stare into it, because Eric might decide to luminous beam anything that stares back. You managed to create some tense and visceral fights this chapter. Keep up the great work.

Pixelblade

Really enjoy these outside Eric chapters. They make the world seem bigger. Big Princess Mononoke vibes from the black soul ooze. I'm gonna bet Eric is heading to the Core and we're finally gonna get some monster Ancients lore.

Somerandom

@courier The other guys soul was released 10 days after he used the teleporter, a long time before Erick was even on veird, people were just using that as a timeframe for when ericks soul would appear if he were also dead, but Erick didn't release his soul or anything that happened ages ago

Jean Banninga

thanks for the chapter 'When it it turn' -> 'When did it turn' 'done differently' -> 'done it differently' 'once was mostly' -> 'once it was mostly' OR 'once mostly' 'Teressa went straight to bed' <- but she is seen in next scene without leaving bed

Corwin Amber

Ahh I got you, oh that's clever, I like it!

Jean Banninga

A dragon vein is a current of energy that runs throughout a world. They are also called ley lines and the energy in them is usually mana or qi or something similar. The Sliding Machine said that Erick would have to ride the dragon, I'm pretty sure this dragon vein was what it was talking about, not any actual dragon.

Codered999

With the imagery that keeps coming up, I can't help but wonder if there is any connection between Erick, his light domain, Melimazargo, and the dead God of knowledge. Maybe Melimazargo went nuts after the God of knowledge was sacrificed? Was there any mention about her being a God of light as well?

Overclocked

@Codered999 How'd you know it's a dragon vein? In fact, what is a dragon vein, did I miss something?

Jean Banninga

I'm guessing the guy got out of the dragon vein but was eaten by Underworld monsters while he was too groggy, disoriented, and weak to fight back against all of them by himself.

Codered999

I'm pretty sure he just left a foot behind in the dragon vein he got sucked into for ten days.

Codered999

I think the rest would have noticed that

s476

Which foot is he missing? I was wondering how that worked, since he was described stepping and then teleporting on the platforms, so I figured he may have left a foot behind

Gardor

Fantastic.... Just plain awesome.

Torbjørn Nilsen

Ohh, not fully a tease that bad! That ending was nice. Fantastic chapter as per usual ❤

J Berg

Thanks for the chapter!

s476

Goddamn, I'm on the edge of my seat here! Do you guys reckon it took Erick 10 days to appear out of that river of light? And he only succeeded cause he's got dope magic and the same thing happened to that lady's husband but he didn't succeed and that's why his soul was available after 10 days? Ooh boy this freaky new biome really got me excited!

Jean Banninga

Oh, you didn't. A Jane chapter right after the disappearance. Tease ;)

J Berg


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