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Added 2021-05-16 21:44:42 +0000 UTCClan Star Song’s mountain mansion was a beauty
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Don't lie, you've always wanted to write a xianxia novel this was just your way to do it ahahaha thanks for the chapter
Ivandro José
2021-05-22 11:03:56 +0000 UTCThank you!
Arcs
2021-05-17 07:00:33 +0000 UTCfixed. thanks
Arcs
2021-05-17 05:53:19 +0000 UTC'Ledger will bring to employ' <- odd phrasing 'parts were there would be lead' -> 'parts that would be lead' 'around the city, but there’s' -> 'around the city, there’s'
Corwin Amber
2021-05-17 05:25:39 +0000 UTCI really like his young master persona.
Chris
2021-05-17 02:24:37 +0000 UTCThat was a great chapter. Great mix of tense dialogue, exposition, plot threads, and inner monologue. I was initially worried that the story was going to lose it's way when "solved" the ar'kendrithyst storyline (titular!), but if anything it's been the opposite. The worldly path storyline has been revitalizing, and keeps getting better. Good job arcs!
viewless
2021-05-16 23:22:47 +0000 UTCAaand another week. Fuck
Josh
2021-05-16 22:31:56 +0000 UTC