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Don't lie, you've always wanted to write a xianxia novel this was just your way to do it ahahaha thanks for the chapter

Ivandro José

Thank you!

Arcs

fixed. thanks

Arcs

'Ledger will bring to employ' <- odd phrasing 'parts were there would be lead' -> 'parts that would be lead' 'around the city, but there’s' -> 'around the city, there’s'

Corwin Amber

I really like his young master persona.

Chris

That was a great chapter. Great mix of tense dialogue, exposition, plot threads, and inner monologue. I was initially worried that the story was going to lose it's way when "solved" the ar'kendrithyst storyline (titular!), but if anything it's been the opposite. The worldly path storyline has been revitalizing, and keeps getting better. Good job arcs!

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Aaand another week. Fuck

Josh


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