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> From the deepest, most true part of himself, Erick knew he could not kill this man. Not like this. Never like this. And yet, he couldn’t let the Shade die. And yet, he also couldn’t let him live. I think the first "And yet" should be cut, since this is actually agreeing with what came prior rather than contrasting with it.

PrimalShadow

Ohhhhh, we finally get to meet the Witch! I had completely forgotten about her. Looking forwards to the ensuing fight!

Earfallas Blanc

I think this is one of those times where the phrase "it's like hell in a handbasket" is appropriate.

Pixelblade

cast time, yes. All durations are always listed inside the text of the spell.

Arcs

What's the thirty second counter on his blessing for? Can't be duration, is it cast time?

Gardor

Some nice chaos going on. :-)

Lessthan

Ah man that blessing, got some oomph behind it.

Wyatt

oh yeah~

Arcs

fixed! thanks

Arcs

thanks for the chapter 'The grey orgol sighed' orgol -> orcol 'really wanted to rains' <- sentence needs to be fixed

Corwin Amber

So much happened it will take a while for me to digest it.

Chris


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