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Erick stood before his bed, under the protectio

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"For a moment, the sacrifice of other people to break out of an endless prison was okay. But just for a moment." Welp, empathy can be a scary thing.

Cam Hanach

fixed!

Arcs

they don't have an 'am' and 'pm' there, in a technical sense. Buuuuutttt.... AM means 'after midday' while PM means 'post midday'. so maybe i should not try to reinvent the wheel here, and just go with what everyone already recognizes

Arcs

Thanks for the chapter! already looking forward to next week to see who this is and how it plays out ^^ 8:10AN --> 8:10 AM But then you say it's afternoon, so it should be PM?

Earfallas Blanc

thanks for the chapter :) 'what everything that had' -> 'what with everything that had' 'That 10 mana spent he spent' <- needs to be fixed 'shoulder from some someone' <- needs to be fixed 'blood and viscera stood contained' <- awkward phrasing

Corwin Amber

Hmm. Yes. That was the wrong language, there. He should have said 'accept that Class Ability'

Arcs

> So unlock that Class Ability for the Quest Board Didn't he unlock the quest board when he made the tree with weather powers?

Nedardo

fixed! thanks

Arcs

> You’re understand when you get there you're --> you'll > It usually takes a lot of evidence to prove to most people that the Script is anything but artificial This looks like you should either remove the 'anything but' or change 'artificial' to 'natural'. > Someone around here probably new the combination to get [True Sight] new --> knew

loimprevisto

It seems Eric has found the motivation to gain witness.

Chris

Can't wait to see what kind of spells we get with Erick's new found stats. Also I have a feeling that Erick will lose control and go overboard on this saboteur...

It means they have more time to work! : )

Arcs

Time dilation seems like it would mess up this extortioners plan

Gardor

Thanks!

Zoe Weinstein


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