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It's an active event that is affecting the land. i think i used it correctly...

Arcs

Mel: "I'll give you a boon" Erick: "World peace and an end to hunger and..." Mel: "Boring! I'll choose... this'll be fun!" Erick: ヽ(°〇°)ﾉ

Monomatopoeia

"And end to" - > "An end to" x3 "For its affect" - > "For its effect" (noun, so should be effect)

Monomatopoeia

I hope Eric reveals that Phaegar had to put some limitations on his Immortality spell, seems like a funny throw away line for Eric in front of someone yelling at him for disrespecting immortal beings

Gardor

> an entity that could quite easily remove *existence* from existence. fixed

Dax

Everyone assumes melemizargo is insane, but what if he is not? In Eric's shoes I would have asked to be his champion, both to see his truth and to prevent the other shades from existing. If he is correct, this is the right start to fixing things. If he is not, you won't be able to talk to him unless you understand his position so this is the best starting point as well.

I had never before considered that Melemizargo may be trapped in a delusion that began immediately after the Sundering. Mental health being just as important for gods, Relevant Entities, and Dragons is an interesting angle to take. It also makes Mel a more terrifying enemy. because he truly does not consider his opponents real. What does it matter if your actions negatively affect some imaginary beings? I am excited for what is to come

BigBuckler

His actions make alot of sense now. It honestly could all be a mind trap or illusion so close to reality he can't tell the difference. When it comes to beings of phenomenal cosmic power this IS how they would fight each other. In his mind he's likely thinking whats more likely. That all of existence imploded reshaping itself into this pale shadow or that he somehow got mind wammied by one of his many enemies somehow.

Althaelus

Eric could tell Mel about the Holographic universe theory if it is explained right which I couldn't do it could give perspective to him. It could also fracture Mels mind even worse. It all depends on how it is explained.

Chris

1. Did not expect. 2. Totally awesome

Wyatt

I like that Erick pops sass at an entity that could quite easily remove him from existence.

Gygax Fan

fixed, thanks!

Arcs

Agreed

Corwin Amber

This was epic. I felt sad for Mel because he is a dilusion patient that thinks existance is a lie and that his friends and family are waiting for him to get free, but then I remembered that he has the power and inclination to destroy existance in order to prove himself correct and get back to them. I would say he needs some serious grief counselling but he already has those resources really.

Seadrake

Thanks for the chapter.

John Phipps

'everyone tired to keep' tired -> tried 'everyone tired to keep' tired -> tried 'workers piked up blocks' piked -> piled 'called the Clayfield’s' <- don't think the apostrophe belongs here 'shadelings can’t us [Fabricate]' us -> use 'being a Blessing' -> 'being a Blessing is correct' (or something similar) 'talk out out' -> 'talk you out' 'and almost-tan incani' and -> an 'our site manage' manage -> manager 'almost Kiri a panic' <- sentence needs to be fixed

Corwin Amber