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In a comfortable room with fluffy chairs and a

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Can't wait to see what other familiars he creates.

Scott Frederiksen

All fixed, thanks!

Arcs

thanks. nice break from work this morning :)

Corwin Amber

'The mimics was clearly dead' was -> were

Corwin Amber

While Erick was freaking out looking at the clouds, I was reminded of that scene in the Matrix where Smith had Neo, with the oncoming train. "That is the sound... of inevitability."

Niraada

'Erick knew was a need for magic like this' -> 'Erick knew there was a need for magic like this'

Corwin Amber

'like a laser pointed turning on' pointed -> pointer

Corwin Amber

'thing, at at once' -> 'thing, all at once'

Corwin Amber

I love the magic creation chapters! (I also love where I think that you are taking [Gate]) Thank you for the chapter!!!!!!!!

Lessthan


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