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All fixed, thanks!
Arcs
2020-05-14 19:16:04 +0000 UTCYes. 1000 mana in rads = 1 darkchip. Also the kill quests for their listed amount, between 1 to 10 chips
Arcs
2020-05-14 19:15:49 +0000 UTCAll fixed, thank you!
Arcs
2020-05-14 19:14:22 +0000 UTCthanks for the chapter :)
Corwin Amber
2020-05-14 15:43:25 +0000 UTC'it sit rather wrong' sit -> sat
Corwin Amber
2020-05-14 13:22:52 +0000 UTC'not problem for me' -> 'not a problem for me'
Corwin Amber
2020-05-14 13:21:15 +0000 UTC'this parts of this' parts -> part
Corwin Amber
2020-05-14 13:20:22 +0000 UTC'all his everything' needs correction
Corwin Amber
2020-05-14 13:12:00 +0000 UTC(Possible) Typo time! - "Tell her I'll be meet her" --> "tell her I'll be there" or "tell her I'll meet her" - "have created created a spell" --> "have created a spell" - "get dispersed or let alone" --> left alone - "how ultraviolet night gives cancer" --> "light gives cancer" (could I suggest "causes" instead of "gives"?) - "Poi, and Teressa, passed two checkpoints" --> I believe the last comma isn't necessary. - "I might could swing Oceanside, too," --> "I might swing Oceanside, too," I'm not too sure about this one, but I'll just put it here: - "All of your goals means time taken" --> means without the s? I'm not a native speaker, so I'm not confident on that one. Cheers for the chapter!
Earfallas Blanc
2020-05-14 10:43:42 +0000 UTCI really hope Delia doesn't become a problem in the future, it would be really sad... I still remember how she tried to communicate with them at the very beginning. At the time I thought of her as an 8-year-old girl though. Also, those new stat fruits seem impossible to achieve with just the subjugate quests, even more so the "Undertake a trial to become a Shade" and "learn the secrets of magic". Are there more ways to get darkchips (apart from those 3 quests) that we don't yet know about?
Earfallas Blanc
2020-05-14 10:35:51 +0000 UTC: )
Arcs
2020-05-14 07:27:43 +0000 UTCWith Eric comparing Delia to Jane multiple times it seems like he should have contacted her about the best way to go about helping Delia. Maybe it's just me tho...
Kapelteta
2020-05-14 05:03:22 +0000 UTCInteresting chapter, thanks!
Mike G.
2020-05-14 03:59:05 +0000 UTCOh, that's actually a very good point. I should have written that better. Thanks for the catch.
Arcs
2020-05-14 01:57:49 +0000 UTCLooks like teleporting an object *into* another object doesn't result in an earth-shattering explosion, given that Fork isn't dead!
Conrad Wong
2020-05-14 01:22:33 +0000 UTC
