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Demon lord: Latex demon p32-33

I've managed to finished two pages before the end of month. I've change a lot if thing from the draft. Anyway as usual if you find any mistake or have any suggesion feel free to post it in the comment.

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@ibenz009 Happy end of the month! What's the next story comic series you have in mind? Also, are you alright? There was the border war ...

Arthur Yeung

😍

Adam 御剑

@ibenz009 Here are the grammar changes, marked in uppercase: Page 32: Rhys: CEASE THIS DEBAUCHERY, Fang! THOUGH WE WERE BUT COMRADES, I SHAN'T WAIVER! Fang: How adorable. Do you truly think you even STAND a chance AGAINST me? A high demon? COMPARED to a demon like me, you INQUISITORS are nothing but GLORIFIED CANNON FODDER. HAHAHAHA … you're barely HOLDING FIRM AGAINST my charm. DOES my new look PLEASE you, Rhys? There's no need to be ashamed. I AM a demon of charm, after all. Hmm… WHAT PURE, untainted desire. I HAVE NO DOUBTS you'll become A splendid paladin in the future. But we CAN'T allow that to happen, NOW CAN we? or: But we WON'T allow that to happen, NOW WILL we? Page 33: Rhys: What DOST THOU DO!? Fang: Turning you into a demon, of course. Rhys: WHAT DEVILRY IS THIS!? Tail: Hell yeah! Finally , a body! EHEHEHE! Nice to meet you , lad! Are you ready for a wild ride , baby? Rhys: ZOUNDS! Fang: HE'LL NEED A LITTLE BIT of work. But please , take good care of him. Tail: HEHEHEHE! NO WORRIES, SISTER FANG! THE LAD AND I WILL GET ALONG JUST FINE! Good thing SISTER FANG gave us ample energy for your MAKEOVER! YOU AND I, LAD, WE'LL MAKE HER PROUD!

Arthur Yeung

Thank you so much for your help!

ibenz009

万分感谢🙏

Wayne Chen

yeees

Stormfries

Thank!!

Markus

Format: Original quote ↴ Modified quote without notes. Notes shown in [square brackets] Multiple possible modifications shown in {curly brackets / braces} ―――――――――― [Page 32] "How adorable. Do you truly think you even have a chance agains me? A high demon?" ↴ “How adorable. Do you truly think you have even a chance against me? A high demon?” "Compare to a demon like me. You demon hunters are nothing but a glorified foot soldier." ↴ “Compared to a demon like me, you demon hunters are nothing, but glorified foot soldiers.” "Huhuhu, you're barely holding on again my charm. Do my new look pleased you, Rhys?" ↴ “Huhuhu, you’re barely holding on against my charm. Do my new looks please you, Rhys?” "Hmmm, what a pure untainted desire. I've no doubt you'll become splendid paladin in the future." ↴ “Hmmm, what pure untainted desire. I’ve no doubt you’ll become a splendid paladin in the future.” "We can't allow that happend don't we?" ↴ “We can’t allow that to happen, can we?” [Page 33] "Kekekeke! Nice to meet you lad! Are you ready for a wild ride baby?" ↴ “Kekekeke! Nice to meet you, lad! Are you ready for a wild ride, baby?” "He will need take little bit of work but please take good care of him." ↴ “He will {take a little bit of work / need a little bit of work}, but please take good care of him.” "Kekekeke! No problem, Big Sis Fang! Me and the lad going to get along just fine!" ↴ “Kekekeke! No problem, Big Sis Fang! Me and the lad are going to get along just fine!” "Good thing Big Sis Fang gave us ample energy for your make over!" ↴ “Good thing Big Sis Fang gave us ample energy for your makeover!” "Me and you lad, we are going made her pround." ↴ “Me and you, lad, we’re going to make her proud.”

trigger_portal_cleanser

Thanks for the update!

fatcat

Yay! We're getting two latex demons soon! ^^

StarGazer

Pg 1, bottom left panel should be "Do my new looks please you, Rhys?" Or "Does my new look please you, Rhys?"

Carl Endres

Very Nice

CrazedGamma1721


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