Demon lord ch2 p8-9
Added 2021-02-25 15:52:20 +0000 UTCAnother two page done on demom lord comic.
If you've found any mistake or had suggestion feel free to tell me in the comment.
Comments
where is page 6 and 7?
Zack chia
2021-05-05 10:00:02 +0000 UTC@MagicCobra911 I've unfortunately ran into some kind of writer's block, so I've decided to slow my pace down and try to look at the colored versions to help fill the gaps. Additionally, some of the new scenes I've added - I need to put a lot more thought in it.
Arthur Yeung
2021-02-26 15:05:27 +0000 UTCSo how has your story adaptation been going?
MagicCobra911
2021-02-26 12:51:44 +0000 UTC@ibenz009 Also, since you also redraw these pages, mind making one more addition to Aria's demon form, like in this picture? It's by the grey arrow I pointed in. Thanks! https://drive.google.com/file/d/1wkF9nJMmpJn1nklWNu7D4NUYxRPpPNRP/view?usp=sharing
Arthur Yeung
2021-02-25 23:29:12 +0000 UTC@ibenz009 Page 9: 1 - "The human mind cannot latch onto an ethereal, intangible body, like you have now." Also, try putting a space in "Lose Track" - it will grammatically make more sense. 4 - "Let alone MANAGE to keep your body solid".
Arthur Yeung
2021-02-25 22:56:31 +0000 UTC@ibenz009 I think there's only a small couple of errors in these pages: Page 8: 1- "Like It will just fade away and be forever lost in A sea of shadow ..." 2- Try this - "It's so hard ... to think ... I'm so tired ..." 4- Gilda should use "okey-dokey" in the last panel (Thanks Benjamin Lawton), as she's like a child in the story. The Demon Lord should say, "Her body is losing shape - she's slowly becoming a spirit."
Arthur Yeung
2021-02-25 22:00:16 +0000 UTClol I thought these exact same words... I approve of her slipping in the seed haha
Lilly
2021-02-25 17:47:11 +0000 UTCIt looks so cool that I want to see it in animation.
Alexey Stratulat
2021-02-25 16:55:08 +0000 UTCvery cool
Stormfries
2021-02-25 16:47:02 +0000 UTCThe visuals look great, I do love how the purples have been blended together and how the swirling shadows are enveloping Aria.
Arbiter
2021-02-25 16:41:52 +0000 UTC"Her body has started to transform into a spirit." I think works better in the bottom left panel
ZeroForever
2021-02-25 16:36:56 +0000 UTCI see, yeah I thought so but great work so far your style and quality really is amazing.
MagicCobra911
2021-02-25 16:28:10 +0000 UTCYou're reading too much into it. Lol
ibenz009
2021-02-25 16:25:17 +0000 UTCI noticed this demon seed looks a little different with yellow lining around the eye, was that a conscious decision with reason or am I reading too much into it๐ค?
MagicCobra911
2021-02-25 16:21:59 +0000 UTCGreat visuals, again the Demon Lord slipping the Demon Seed through Ariaโs chest was pretty neat๐. Also Gilda has been delightful in every panel she is in no matter how small.
MagicCobra911
2021-02-25 16:10:22 +0000 UTCWow, it looks fantastic as always! The only error I see is on the 9th page with "lose track" you're just missing a space between them.
StarGazer
2021-02-25 15:55:12 +0000 UTC
