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Mecha Belt - pages 13, 14 and 15

Added 2025-12-24 20:36:13 +0000 UTC

I'm going to leave Mecha Belt here for now. Part 1 was supposed to go for probably another 15 pages, but I'm not super happy with how it's turning out and I don't think you guys are enjoying it very much over all. So I'm gonna move on.

The rest of the post is me rambling about it:

This was an attempt at blending the nsfw stuff with a light plot that might make it more engaging. I wanted to have these three characters with different views on sex create situations where they clash or influence eachother, and the plot with the aliens would be there to facilitate that (with alien powers that affect them and change their dynamics and stuff).

And I still think this story could have worked fine if I organized it better. And if I was a bit better at comedy, bacause one of the things I'm not sure was working is this gimmick I was going for where all these characters are in a serious, dangerous situation where they might all die, yet all they think about is sex because of how sexually repressed they are for cultural reasons. But I'm not sure I sold it very well. Maybe it just feels like the story has a confused tone.

And sorry I spent time designing the mechs but didn't get to the part where they show up. Maybe I'll rethink this story and pick it back up in the future.

I'm also rethinking Snail Knight, because I'm not sure the same thing wouldn't have happened with that comic. So I won't put it in the next poll. I'll include it again once I'm sure I can make it engaging for you guys from the beginning.