XaiJu
DeprivedArt
DeprivedArt

patreon


Mecha Belt, pages 1, 2 and 3

I'm trying to speedrun the intro. It'll probably take another 3 pages, then sexy stuff starts to happen.

Edit: I did small changes to the outfits.

Edit 2: I added some world context in page 3 hoping it makes the story work a bit better. I think Sandra's attitude in her masturbation scene felt a bit out of nowhere.

Mecha Belt, pages 1, 2 and 3 Mecha Belt, pages 1, 2 and 3 Mecha Belt, pages 1, 2 and 3

Comments

My english is far from perfect, ofcourse I rather you guys point out these things rather than releasing pages with typos. I should write that somewhere in the Patreon page. Thank you!

DeprivedArt

I never know if you appreciate people pointing out typos but here goes lol you misspelled "meant" on the bottom center panel of page 3. Really looking forward to seeing where this goes! *I of course had a typo in my comment pointing out a typo lol

Gwen

Really glad to hear that!

DeprivedArt

Okay, I'm in so far. Go on. :3

Rami Hound

Ive never been so invested into something that i had no clue where the plot would go😂

hi there


More Creators