V.11 Alpha release!
Added 2017-12-24 18:24:49 +0000 UTCMerry Christmas, guys! What a crazy week this has been... But I managed to finish the update just a couple ours before my Christmas dinner!
Three important things:
1- You will probably tun into a "Name not defined: sfv11daring" bug. This is because i forgot to set the variables in the previous update u_u To fix this, you just need to lead a save from before Ashley takes her last Instagram picture. Sorry about that.
2- There is a certain sex scene than can be revisited if you didn't get it before. I'm aware this causes some conflicts with the outfits. This issue will be resolved for the final relase.
3- If you really, really must share this update in other sites, I would kindly ask you to wait until a proofread version comes out. I would like to avoid getting a version out to the world with bugs, deficient grammar and typos... I'm pretty ashamed of that, and I really apreciatte the help of all the backers who play the Alphas and betas and give me feedback on bugs and typos. Thanks!
So, that's it! I must take a couple days off because of family reasons, but I'll bring you back the Beta as soon as I can. As always, leave your comments and bug reports down below!
Comments
One variable bug if the selfie Ash shows at the drinking game is the one she sent to Jack almost at the beginning of the game: While running game code: File "game/script.rpy", line 59284, in script if instatau: File "game/script.rpy", line 59284, in <module> if instatau: NameError: name 'instatau' is not defined</module>
Cabot
2017-12-26 23:42:22 +0000 UTCIf you play around with the options for the truth or pay the bill-game, then you can be rewarded with a kiss between Tyrone and Iris. At least something!
Breadloaf
2017-12-26 20:13:48 +0000 UTCAnother great update. Hope you have a happy holiday. Think my fav scene this update was the webcam scene, I wonder if Ashley having someone else there with her would make the next webcam scene interesting. Cheers and keep up the great work :D.
eyedhitit
2017-12-26 20:00:15 +0000 UTCNow that christmas in Central Europe is nearly over most of what I wanted to write has already been written. I don't even have any bugs to add and for proofreading I shoulnd't be of any use. I can only add some minor stuff. The dialogue for Jasmin was relatively funny, I had to laugh when it came to the fetish part. Very Bad Eva's new haircut was interesting and I wonder what Ashley's answer to that will be. And I feel a bit sorry for Iris, I guess she wasn't successful with Tyrone or I just didn't figure out how to help her with that. I hope you had a good time during christmas you made us a really nice gift.
Dscheel
2017-12-26 19:52:16 +0000 UTCReposting, since Patreon ate up my bug report. I'm guessing it's because I wrote something that looked like code, so did a slight edit. I also forgot to mention that Jessica's and Ashley's selfie with Jack's dick was pretty nice. Here's hoping that more like that will come! I'm busy eating gingerbread dough like a pig, so I might as well post my bug report. Hopefully not too redundant. It has been mentioned earlier, but at line 60764 Ashley can repeat herself about wanting some cocaine. You could solve it by writing an if statement for addicted, and nested in it have the if statement if Ashley is a thug and have the normal comment about her addiction as an "else." Line 57292 and 57293 doesn't seem to belong there (since they appear in the slightly different Instagram scene) I triggered line 59943 the rejectjack-variable on a playthrough where Jack and Ashley have had sex (he did turn Eva into a Sith first though). I think that the variable is still true even if Ashley and Jack ends up having sex, which doesn't make much sense. You could solve this by setting "rejectjack" to false if "sexjack" is true in the beginning of version 0.11. That way people won't have to load an early save. I found some typos from earlier versions, so might as well post them here. Here's some lines where you wrote something else than "OK". I figure that you want everything to be consistent, so here you go: Line 1246, 1248, 1499, 1854, 2011, 2498, 2511, 2545, 3433, 8630, 8822, 10865, 15481, 18087, 23852, 24448, 25228, 25234, 28675, 28725, 28762, 30531, 30537, You wrote "Wilson¡s" instead of "Wilson's" at line 51550. To summarize: GG WP.
Breadloaf
2017-12-26 00:11:35 +0000 UTCSlightly off-topic, but Novamarauder's and Cabot's comments about Ashley's new outfits made me think back to her earlier clothes and the minor comment rebellion about her eyeshadow. Patreon really shines when it comes to passionate patrons getting some input to games during the development, so why not use it? At the $30 tier you could post a first sketch for new outfits and ask for input. And if you're not really sure what do draw you can ask for ideas. It could also work for makeup, considering that most girls doesn't have the exact same style at all times (one makeup look for her normal style, one for parties and so on). It wouldn't be a big spoiler either, so it's mostly if you feel like it.
Breadloaf
2017-12-25 23:57:13 +0000 UTCGreat update, like always! I especially liked that there were so many small but important differences between choices both from this update, but also from all previous choices that come to play here. Feels like the only thing missing was a sex scene with Tyrone plotwise, but considering how substantial the update was I can't complain. The plot progressed very nicely too. You also introduced a couple of new characters, which did make me think a bit. Most of the side characters in the game have a small part in progressing the story, and a big but optional part when it comes to relationships and/or sex. It can also work in reverse - a big part in progressing the story, and an optional sex scene. That would lessen the amount of branching and isn't something that I think you have used that much so far. Just a thought. I liked all three new outfits. I especially liked that the good girl outfit makes her look good, while it still fit the good theme. I would also like to compliment you a little bit extra for the truth or dare sequence. Nice dialogue options and it shows that you gave it some thought, since every option (and what you chose afterwards) mattered. That was a great RPG element. The threesome (and the variants between the current state of Ashley, Jack and Jessica) was probably your best smut so far. I think that Novamarauder and Cabot posted most of the bugs, but I might have found some too. I'll post them in a while. Lastly, I want to point out that even if this isn't proofread or bugtested, you have nothing to be ashamed about.
Breadloaf
2017-12-25 17:59:51 +0000 UTCI'm also not in love with the thug outfit (while I really dig the sexy one), but I wouldn't worry too much about it knowing a complete makeover usually takes place every 3-4 updates.
Cabot
2017-12-25 15:42:38 +0000 UTCTalking about the update I'm happy that, imo, we got more non stricly sexual story and character progression than in the last one: 2 new characters (Ryan & Jolene) that look interesting, advancement in Dave's plot (or Dave+Jess, or Dave+Eva, or Sabotage Eva or... heck, that one's a tough one lol) at the hospital/art gallery, Ash starting her career as drugdealer, also some more investigating The Wheel and possible Norman's involvement in it, bits about job chances and driving license and a little more insight into Jack's past and Iris and Doug relationship. Good stuff all around. Regarding the sexual content as I'm a big Jess fan and not so fond of Jack initially I went with the Jess solo option, but after playing it I have to admit the 3some was fucking awesome, specially the choking part! And the second cybersex session with Eric was hot as fuck too, specially the first Mandigo appeareance and seeing how Eric is starting to ask Ash about her exploits if cuck's route is encouraged. Not really interested in the Jasmin's content, but happy for her many fans out there. My only cricticism would be that I think you are teasing us too much with Tyrone, and at this point it's gonna be hard for him to live up to the hype, lol. But all in all a pretty solid update.
Cabot
2017-12-25 14:06:27 +0000 UTCBug report: - For a sexy or thug Ash there are contradictory staments about the number of likes: first Ash says there are a lot and then that few than expected (lines 57290-57293). - Line 59930, Jess speaks when it should be Jack. - Line 60511, Wilson speaks when it should be the landwhale. - Few moments later if thug and addicted there are two mentions about wanting to snort some coke, one should be enough? - And last but not least if agreed to a 3some with Jack and Jess but have not fucked Jack before, initially Jess will go to Jack's place but then disappear as former sex scene from v09 it's played.
Cabot
2017-12-25 13:37:11 +0000 UTCAsh's new outfits are very cool, even if I'm conflicted on the thug one. It makes Ash look the part, intimidating and hot, but it is based on the hip-hop aesthetic and subculture, which I loathe and find ugly. I like the thug route a lot, but dunno if I can stand to see Ash dressed that way all the time. I'm most eager to see developments on the club route, Ash progressing in the minor celebrity lifestyle, and our girl getting that boob job at long last (although she has to heal the nipple piercings first).
Novamarauder
2017-12-25 13:28:28 +0000 UTCI hate when Patreon eats long comments. Anyway, very good stuff as usual. About dialogue scenes, I especially liked friendly banter between bad Ash and sexy Eve, and among the Jack, Jess, Ash, and Ty bad-boys/girls quartet. Among its many perks, this game does an excellent job of humanizing and giving full agency to people with a non-traditional romantic/sexual lifestyle. Among the sex scenes, the Jack/Jess/Ash threesome tops my list, although the Jess/Ash g-g is almost as hot. Even if I find shemale stuff a terrible turn-off in general, I have to admit the Jasmin scene is rather sexy.
Novamarauder
2017-12-25 13:24:08 +0000 UTC
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