EDIBILITY - Visual Novel Game, Demo
Added 2021-08-07 05:20:33 +0000 UTCEdited to include the file attachment, my bad!
https://mega.nz/fm/WSBk0LJS
Here's the first demo! Right now, only Shortcake's route is accessible. Next month I'll be adding in Roy, then an additional route can be requested through top tier patron votes.
I poured a lot of time into this project, and I'll continue to. Let me know what you think!
Steps: Open ZIP file >
Open Edibility_Demo folder >
Open the "Edibility" game file.
It should open and run smoothly for Windows!
Comments
So far this project is looking great! The only things I think could use some adjusting is the clickable parts of the config menu, maybe some options on the title screen for volume and such (it was loud for me on PC) and the text for the lower part of the main dialogue box. In the config options they don't seem to be aligned with the visual icons even when I adjust the window size and the text sometimes gets overlapped by the bottom screen options when being more descriptive. Also there seems to be some odd translation issue in the options menu when adjusting configurations? Aside from that things are looking pretty nice, the music and transitions are starting off excellent and I enjoyed playing with what is here so far! I am very much looking forward to the progress on this, keep up the good work and do take care of yourself too!
Rider
2021-08-07 23:13:18 +0000 UTCi know which tunnel that route leads too~
Smack
2021-08-07 21:16:19 +0000 UTCThank-you! There will be an end-card for all the character routes :]
Kanoodle
2021-08-07 19:44:27 +0000 UTCi liked this a lot but i can't think of anything else to add that Jerbens didnt already say, i loved that end card for shortcake nice ass shot <3
Smack
2021-08-07 19:36:22 +0000 UTClooking at it again, the liquid IS visible but the issue is still true. even windowed it shows black bars when compressed to a different size. I only caught this because a bug showed the expanded image of cupcake at one point. If you'd like, I can talk more via PM. I'm currently working on a type of VN engine for my own game so I'm sure I can assist in some way One thing that I think would REALLY help this is if you make the textbox background semi transparent. I realize you can right-click to hide the textbox (tell your audience!) but it'll help reveal what's behind it. There may also be a way to hide the textbox entirely during intimate events, showing only text
Jerbens Jarman
2021-08-07 19:12:36 +0000 UTCThe aspect ratio could be due to the resolution of your device--otherwise it's something I'll keep in mind in updates. As well as an exit button. The VHS scene is an easter egg meant to be played if the end card stalls for too long, and will be important in future updates. Thanks for the feedback!
Kanoodle
2021-08-07 18:16:08 +0000 UTCSo, a couple of things on my mind: -The aspect ratio of the game doesn't match the background artwork you used, which ends up losing a lot of fun detail in the stomach scenes (you see flesh, but not the pool of liquid) -an exit button would be nice on the main menu - I get the question about the intro VHS after the sequence completes, but not when the game starts. is this an error?
Jerbens Jarman
2021-08-07 17:33:10 +0000 UTCOh man, I absolutely LOVE this! to be honest I did not know shortcake was as openly voracious as this! a pleasant surprise
Jerbens Jarman
2021-08-07 17:18:48 +0000 UTC
