v.10 Alpha release!
Added 2017-11-19 18:38:41 +0000 UTCHere's the alpha for v.10. I hope you enjoy! As always, the text still needs proofreading. If you find a bug or inconsistency, plese write it down in the comments! You can see the list of scenes in the Word attachment.
Comments
In the cuck Eric route I think is quite obvious that Doug is being nursed by Ash to become some kind of simpleton bull, so even that sex scene can be argued it’s natural to that plot. So, yes, maybe I was too harsh (gun to the head, I said about the "complain") about being too much sex scenes in the update; although I still think it was lighter plot-wise than other recent updates. Again, just my opinion and not a big deal in any case.
Cabot
2017-11-20 21:40:58 +0000 UTCGreat update as always. I disagree it had scarce plot development since it saw several routes such as the Dad, Arthur, Wilson/gang, Natasha/bookstore ones reach important milestones, entirely comparable to the ones for Jack and Jessica in the previous update. Not to mention Tyrone coming back in Ash's life at last: his plot and the Dad one had been stalled for too long. I would not really say there were too many sex scenes in this update since all of them seemed integral and natural to the plot. The main exception is Doug, who indeed seems to have exhausted story potential in his being a one-dimensional jock boy-toy.
Novamarauder
2017-11-20 21:06:56 +0000 UTCI thought I had solved that bit were you see Eric's Instagram if you're single. I'll look into it again...
Eva Kiss
2017-11-20 18:55:24 +0000 UTCYes, as I said in my comment I also think there is not a lot of story progression in this update. It can be said that some character story paths reach in this update the “up or out” point (Nat, gangbangers, Arthur) where Ash have to really commit to them or they’ll probably leave the story for good, but aside from that a little of Tyrone back in town storyline and just a tease about The Wheel. Not really a big problem that some updates are more sex centered than others in any case (and this was great in that regard, imho), but I would encourage Eva Kiss to do it backwards if she feels the story needs it and release updates more story-centered even at the cost –gasp- of some sex scenes. Just my opinion of course, but I subscribe to what somebody said a while ago “come here for the porn, stayed for the story”, and I feel I’m not alone in that :)
Cabot
2017-11-20 17:25:34 +0000 UTCA very small bug in line 51203: Eric speaks when it should be Wilson. And I still find odd that an Ashley not in a relationship with Eric –clean breakup or not- gets his Instagram photo (without having the first part of the conversation with Iris) and can enter in full jealous mode (“He better explain!” What? They are not together anymore…). Pointed it out in the preview so I guess is working as intended, but doesn’t make a lot of sense to me, sorry for being a little obnoxious about it Great update, one more time, all around. Maybe a little shorter code-wise than what you have spoiled us lately, but released much sooner than expected, so there’s that. Both threesomes were well done and a good fit for a Good Ash (Nat&Damian) or a Bad one (Wilson&Edgar) respectively, the scene with Doug seems quite interesting for the cuck Eric route, the consummation with Arthur is disgusting and hot at the same time, and while incest is not my thing I’m guessing lots of people are gonna be happy about that last scene, lol. If I’d have (gun to head) to complain about anything it would be that the update have “too much” sex –heresy! I know, I know- at the cost of some more character and story development. But seeing that v0.9 was kind of heavy in that regard (with long conversations with Jessica, Mom&Ethan or even Jack, and new plotlines hinted) I can live with that.
Cabot
2017-11-20 17:10:44 +0000 UTCGood stuff. As always.
Kosengo91
2017-11-19 22:52:34 +0000 UTCThat was released much faster than I thought it would! Not much in terms of story progression, but plenty of sex scenes so I can't complain (seems to be something for almost everyone in this update, actually). No bugs or inconsistencies, but I did notice something worth pointing out. So far Ashley hasn't rubbed her clit during penetrative sex, which might be a bit odd (even though Jack helped her out once). Rubbing that magical nub is better than joining a chess club, after all. Nothing to add except that. Great update as usual!
Breadloaf
2017-11-19 21:40:26 +0000 UTC
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