Version 0.8 ALPHA release!
Added 2017-09-25 19:02:41 +0000 UTCSo, here it is...
First of all, you should replay the beach scene from the start. I had to add a new variable. It's just a detail, but else you'll get an error "screenjack".
Secondly, the scene I said would be missing, it's not! Well, the end of the scene is still missing (more like an appendix), but what's important is there!
My fingers flew over the keyboard to write all this, so there's bound to be a lot of spelling mistakes and all that... I hope you find it bearable until my proofreader solves my clumsiness.
Honestly, I feel so spent right now... But it would've been worth it if you guys enjoy this!
As always, write any bug you find in the comments. Thanks!
Comments
Another small bug with the face overlay: When Ashley talks with her dad, and changes facial expression when she says "Tell you? What for?" we see an extra pair of eyebrows.
Breadloaf
2017-09-26 19:59:10 +0000 UTCAnd one thing I pointed out when the DLC was released so I guess is working as intended, but still puzzles me: if Ash plays dumb with Arthur at the dinner and then refuse his advances when shopping he gets mad, calls her a slut, leaves her to pay for the clothes… and then reappears at the tattoo parlor, Ash says she will get the tattoo for free and he comments they will have more fun together when healed up. Later when asking Iris about him, Ash’s inner thoughts reflect that they are done, as it should be, so his presence at the tattoo parlor doesn’t make a lot of sense to me.
Cabot
2017-09-26 15:39:05 +0000 UTCGreat job! Really looking forward to the DLC version. :)
JLM
2017-09-26 11:36:26 +0000 UTCHuge update! I counted five sex scenes (Arthur, Jasmin, Dave’s drawings, Eva and Wilson) plus lots of development in many storylines and a few interesting plot twists: the magazine thing, Mom’s sighting (is Ethan pimping her out? We’ll see) and Dave’s beating (it’s a great detail that he’s in a coma or not depending on if you warned him, those are the things that puts this game –imho- above any other adult game I know). If I’m not wrong we got 8000 new lines of code, out of a total of 39k, so that’s 1/5 of the content (code wise) just in this update: quality aside, which I think is superb, it’s rare to find this kind of commitment and output of a solo developer in Patreon or even Kickstarter, and I’m not talking only about adult games now. So I can only say: Kudos! Almost all the branches got some screen time (well, I guess the incest fans may be a little disappointed and Tyrone’s comeback is making us wait, but you can’t always get everything), with perhaps only the pure faithful good route suffering a bit. Maybe some more phone sex would have been nice, and if Eric wasn’t in the mood this time Ash could have been a little proactive for once and started it herself, she sure is horny enough, lol. Just nitpicking, in any case. But the thing I liked the most was that we can reform a Bad Eva (if Dave gets assaulted or by talking to her in some paths) and maybe even corrupt a Good Eva or at least convince her to be a little more “hedgy”. I always thought she was locked in one of the two options a bit too soon. So I really dig that you get another option to modify her stance. PS. Earrings! At long last, lol.
Cabot
2017-09-26 11:13:35 +0000 UTCFirst of all the bug report, didn’t find anything major this time tough: - When going to Wilson’s dressed as a good girl in the blowjob scene the sexy outfit is showed instead. - If you finish the blowjob without fucking the hospital’s background is displayed instead of Wilson’s place. - Also at the end of the scene when fucking, some dialogue regarding not sending a sexy pic to him is only showed if Ash didn’t answer his call, but not if answered but refused to send him a photo. - Don’t know if it’s a bug, but if Ash bought the black bikini but managed to get more good karma points than bad before going shopping, she is locked anyway with the sexy outfit and can’t buy the other one. - Two eyebrows when talking to bad Eva at the hospital when she says “It’s all my fault” and from then on. It seems only to happen if also Bad (or sexy, not sure) Ash.
Cabot
2017-09-26 10:35:04 +0000 UTCBy the way, I found a minor bug: at the very end of the sex scene with Eva, a line in the 'want dave' path uses the wrong variable from the 'love dave' path.
Novamarauder
2017-09-26 00:09:25 +0000 UTCPretty much everything in this update left me sated yet yearning for more. Only the Dad and Tyrone paths didn't get much development of late (although Ash gets some nice dialogue with a recovering Dad and talks about Tyrone with Iris), but this update was already bursting at the seams with goodness, you cannot reasonably ask for more. Here is me hoping EK doesn't get trapped in a maze of widely branching paths and exploding boolean complexity, otherwise this shall be one of the best adult games ever.
Novamarauder
2017-09-25 22:23:39 +0000 UTCExcellent job as usual, only more so. I suppose this is how looks like to have one of the best adult game authors on patreon unbound. Lots of well-written and appealing content, even if you stick to one preferred playthrough and don't try out all the various branches. Lots of development both as it concerns plot and sex events in most paths. Many are good, so it is not so easy to choose, although I especially appreciated ero scenes with Arthur, Eva, Wilson, friendly talk with Iris, Nat, and Eva, and bad Ash getting her first taste of tabloid fame. Between her new confident attitude, her new amazing look, and her growing instagram following, a successful career as escort, stripper, porn star, and/or tabloid/reality-tv celebrity (options being far from exclusive) looks entirely feasible. Hidden depths of past relationship between Dave and Jess were rather interesting, too. Too bad they don't seem to fit in my preferred bad-girl playthrough so far.
Novamarauder
2017-09-25 22:19:09 +0000 UTCWow this update is amazing! Keep up the good work! <3
Tobias
2017-09-25 21:29:25 +0000 UTCGreat update as usual. Lots of content, even if you don't try out all the different branches. Taking all story paths in consideration it's a lot! As long as it doesn't split into completely different stories (which I've seen some writers attempt with less than stellar results) I have no doubts. I think all those small differences that doesn't alter the story shouldn't be underappreciated either - they make it look like the story is unique each playthrough. As long as you don't have any kind of core melt accident in your brain I think it's safe to say that it will be one of the (or maybe "the"?) best adult games out there. Not only because of the erotic scenes, but also for the normal plot. Things like Iris showing Ashley the magazine and talking about their lives in general, or Jessica opening up about her past means more than you might think. Lovely outfits, on both the good and bad path. I especially like the (more or less) subtle changes, such as her makeup and earrings. The new tattoos look great too! I must admit though that seeing Ashley in her new naughty outfit and reading Eva's comment about Ashley looking like a street hooker hyped me up a lot about her possible future naughty careers (escort, stripper, adult actress). Will be interesting to see how that unfolds... I almost forgot. I think that your writing improves for each update, and that also accounts for the sex scenes. Great work, and that includes the drawing sessions. I should've been asleep a long time ago, but I guess that this update kept me up, haha.
Breadloaf
2017-09-25 20:58:06 +0000 UTC
