Version 0.6 Alpha release
Added 2017-07-16 23:22:10 +0000 UTCHey guys, as I mentioned in my other post, sorry that this is not fully finished.
If you find any bugs, please list them below. Don't concern yourself with the typos and mispellings: no proofreading has been done yet. I'll have that looked at, so don't bother pointing them out yet (and I'm sure there's a ton...)
That said, what will you find in this update?
Both dads get some screen time, specially Eric's Dad, as for popular demand.
Some development with the gangbangers situation... One of the possible branches of that scene is yet to be done, the other one is completed.
Hope you enjoy!
Comments
Usually she goes with Jessica if Ashley and Eva have fallen out. I haven't tried to be unfriendly with Jessica as well. Is that how your missed event happens?
Breadloaf
2017-07-19 11:51:48 +0000 UTCFound a Story problem. When Ashley tells Eva to fuck off (Bad Ashley, good eva path) right before going to the Drug Store, it skips that scene implying Ashley not buying the pill (in comparison to other choices where she does buy the pill). So later in the scene with Wilson he is not wearing a condom Ashley still says "Good thing im on the Pill" I thought it would be hot to have a non Pill Ashley path.
Nawing
2017-07-19 10:42:04 +0000 UTCBug when going to restaurant with dad. Game crashes. line 23464 'wdaworkbook' is not defined. Also, does anyone know how to get the continued scene with Wilson?
dimhaku
2017-07-19 01:48:44 +0000 UTCAfter several different versions (Good Ashley, Bad Ashley, Good Eva, Bad Eva ...), it turns out that whatever the choice, Ashley's father has the Workbook or not, the message appears. For now, on the alpha, only the version with Daddy (Arthur) allows to go beyond the restaurant and reach the end of the alpha.
Valornim
2017-07-18 10:50:30 +0000 UTCAnother great update, and it did not feel rushed at all. I'm just wondering: EK said this update was meant to have four major scenes. Does this mean it only lacks the dark Eva branch of the gangsta scene to be complete ?
Novamarauder
2017-07-17 22:29:25 +0000 UTCHey Eva... There are a few games i enjoy seeing updated and playing (like... 4 or 5 of them which i actually follow)... Two of them particularly draw my attention to being called great games... But now, in this moment, I'm at a quarter of the Arthur scene and... Damn, I must stop to say this... This is HANDS DOWN THE BEST MOST IMMERSIVE GAME EVER... Work of art!
Yamakasi
2017-07-17 21:18:22 +0000 UTCAny kind of story confused I encountered two error message. One speaks "kisseddad" and I think this alludes to the kiss on the street between Ashley and Arthur. In the event that if one does not, one meets this message. On one of my stories, I made them kiss and I did not get this message at the time of the hotel. And what Ashley is good or bad (or mixed). The second message is "wdadworkbook". He intervenes in the restaurant between Ashley and his father. I think it's related to giving the job with Natasha to Ashley or her father. But there, I do not remember if on my stories, I gave it to Ashley or his father.
Valornim
2017-07-17 20:35:13 +0000 UTCYeah. Those small differences makes a great deal of change on the quality of the game! That Wilson scene was great, and as you I anxiously await the foursome. BTW, I think it helps Eva if you write which variable and which line in the code the error message informs you about. For example: While running game code: File "game/script.rpy", line 23464, in script File "game/script.rpy", line 23464, in <module> NameError: name 'wdadworkbook' is not defined </module> Makes it very easy to find the bug and solve it!
Breadloaf
2017-07-17 13:04:37 +0000 UTCI also like the "you are bigger/better than my boyfriend" line, and realized in my last playthrough that you can be a very bad Ashley but still manage to conserve enough good karma points to be in a relationship (open or not) with Eric, so… are we looking to a possible cuckolding route here? In this update, if doing the open relationship thing, when you tell Eric about Doug he doesn’t dump you on the spot, so I guess we will know…
Cabot
2017-07-17 12:50:40 +0000 UTCI really liked the update! The Wilson’s scene was very hot (I’ll wait anxiously to the foursome with Eva and Edgar which can be awesome, lol), at first it seemed to me that there were few decisions to be made in my first playthrough, but then I realized it depends a lot on your previous choices: basically if you do drugs and gave him your number willingly or not. Then you can call the police, warn Dave, don’t go to his place at all, use drugs with him or not, starting with a blowjob becomes optional as begging him to fuck you… and all that choices lead to different outcomes in the text content as well as in some of the drawings. Amazing amount of branches for what is in essence the same “bad Ashley” (or Eva non-corrupted) route, that’s what I think makes this game different. I also liked a lot that you can tease Arthur to your benefit but deny him sex by playing dumb or get him off just by dry humping him (btw, there is an error message if you don’t kiss him that morning in the car but select the dry humping option in the hotel’s room), again lot of ways the Sugar Daddy route can go. Keep up the great work but first take a well deserved, albeit awfully short, vacation!
Cabot
2017-07-17 12:30:57 +0000 UTCI didn't think that the typos were annoying or anything like it. I did find a typo from a previous scene, so I might as well post it here so I don't forget about it: "I started stoking [stroking] his cock as my tongue swirled around his glans, making it wet and shiny." I think that the tattoo disappeared when Ashleys facial expression changed here, also on a scene before 0.6: Dad: "She complained that I was dragging you down..." Ashley: "Well, she's right, you know." This on the bad girl route, where she had bullied Eva. The piercing is on her leg when she blows Wilson in the apartment. Two uncaught exceptions: game/script.rpy", line 23464 - wdadworkbook is not defined game/script.rpy", line 19762 - evasult is not defined (this was on 0.5, so might be fixed. I suppose that your fast fingers typed evasult instead of evaslut). The good and bad girl icons disappear when Ashley's dad walks like a klutz past the tables and yells "Monica!". The tattoo disappears when her mom says "Ashley, what were you doing here?". The tattoo, together with the piercing, is located on the left sprite instead of the right (where Ashley is). Keep up the good work! :)
Breadloaf
2017-07-17 12:21:42 +0000 UTCI think the expanded tattoo looks great. All together a nice shopping scene with Jessica, who I think is even a more interesting character than Eva. Interesting thought regarding the amount of likes she gets when they lose together, so I hope that will lead to something fun :). Made me happy to see the mirror effect on the photo which I asked for, so thanks for that! Your sex scenes are way better now than in the beginning as well! I especially love the way you draw facial expressions and foreplay. The dirty talk with Wilson was intense! I also like that there is a player option during the scenes. When you aren't swamped with work and can work on the game full time I think that you can have even two or three inconsequential options without it being disruptive. The sex scenes are the highlight in the game after all :). I would probably pick out a position change, a talk option (talk dirty, talk lovingly, say nothing, to use an example) and the cumshot as three standard options. With some deviations of course! A personal wish is that Ashley says something in the line of "you are bigger/better than my (ex-) boyfriend" during an a sex scene. Would make me happy! The masturbation scene was really hot as well. Very nice! She could always practice her deepthroat skills on the dildo, as well :). I don't play the incest or Arthur routes, but I thought that the dinner was well written. Might not be Nobel Prize literature award winning drama, but it is way better than in most adult material. When I saw Ashley's mom with her new enhancements I thought... Maybe Ashley gets the idea to do the same? Would be swell :). Could be paid by the mysterious Instagram man, Arthur, Ethan or a loan, perhaps? And don't be afraid to post an update with no sex scene! Your way of building up scenes is a huge reason why the game is great. I doesn't have to be sex to be erotic as well - dancing (of the dry humping kind, for example), kisses, sexting, and modeling scenes are great and could be expanded upon without anyone being cranky :). The upcoming beach scene with Jessica could be a great example of this, and playing the update with the Instagram comments gave me an idea. Why not have a kissing scene in the beach with Jessica? If they are coked up (using Wilson's gift) it could be topless, which a comment asked for (as long as there isn't a nipple it's okay for Instagram...). Everything posted on Instagram, of course :). Would be a nice follow up to the comments on Instagram, her internal thoughts, and the drugs she recieved ("looks better without a top", "pictures with Jessica are more popular") and as a bonus, give your loving fans the much sought after kiss with Jessica :D. I think that would be really hot! Also, really hot without featuring any sex :). Like I said in my previous comment, awesome update. You have previously said that you don't want the game to feature a string of meaningless sex scenes, and I think that everyone supports that. Ashley may turn cock-stupid during sex (nothing wrong with being orgasmic), but I hope that she never turns stupid just because she had some really intense sex. Her being smart, but becoming sexually liberated is what makes this a special game, and sets you apart from many others.
Breadloaf
2017-07-17 12:04:14 +0000 UTCGet an error message on good girl path when you go to dinner with dad.
elk998
2017-07-17 09:04:38 +0000 UTCNice update and Nice story, but there's no add scene with Jasmin.. I want any conversation with Jasmin ;-( If you comeback from vacation plz give us more Jasmin scene
DavidLEE
2017-07-17 09:03:31 +0000 UTC
