TS牛娘ちゃん搾乳差分(2枚) English ver.
Added 2024-08-24 13:24:18 +0000 UTCI used deepl translation and google translation. I hope I am translating well.
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I learned a lot. Thank you.
ドウテーのRoran
2024-08-26 05:43:02 +0000 UTCI would write the last part of the sentence something like: "so lets get to milking you quickly 🎵" But the translation is totally understandable.
Ninjaguiden
2024-08-25 20:14:21 +0000 UTCThank you for the compliment. What better word could there be than "express milk"?
ドウテーのRoran
2024-08-25 15:15:29 +0000 UTCI'm glad you're happy.
ドウテーのRoran
2024-08-25 15:12:52 +0000 UTCThe translation works very well! The only word that feels a bit strange is "express milk" in the first page, it's not incorrect but maybe not a common word used? I really like the detail of the typesetting on page 2, makes the pleasure come across well. The whole scenario is great too, the apprentice being against it at first but starting to like it at the end. Being tied up for the milking is nice~ (翻訳はとてもうまくいっている！ちょっと違和感があるのは、最初のページの「express milk」だけで、間違ってはいないけど、あまり使われない言葉かも？ 2ページ目の活字の細かさがとても好きで、楽しさがよく伝わってくる。 最初は反対していた弟子が、最後には好きになり始めるというシナリオ全体も素晴らしい。搾乳のために縛られるって、いいですね～。)
Ninjaguiden
2024-08-25 10:04:26 +0000 UTCThank you!
Hokata
2024-08-24 22:40:20 +0000 UTCThe translations came out pretty well. Thanks again for continuing to do this.
SukkuroKun
2024-08-24 16:21:31 +0000 UTC
