comic wip 1
Added 2019-06-24 01:24:05 +0000 UTCIT'S THAT TIME OF YEAR AGAIN FOLKS
funny how my last comic started with gardening and so does this one lol. anyway, very excited to announce i'm in the works with another mabel x apollo comic!
(no spoilers, but... it's gonna be a little more spicy than the last one... so yall got that to look forward to)
also, can you guys help me out a bit? do the top panels read correctly? i numbered them, but i've got my doubts about panel 4 that i didn't notice when i was thumbnailing lol. if it doesnt read properly im gonna have to move some stuff around. thanks yall!
edit: ended up changing the format anyway!!
Comments
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Fortress120
2024-04-20 22:06:02 +0000 UTCMaybe you could had a little arrow to guide the reader through those panels if you want to keep the page composition
Lictor000
2019-06-24 05:13:19 +0000 UTCPanel 1 is a POWERFUL pose.
Lupinator
2019-06-24 03:45:38 +0000 UTCAmazing work as always
Furrygamer
2019-06-24 03:04:52 +0000 UTCI think the panel sizes need some adjustment to naturaly lead the eyes, my eyes went from 1 to 4 and then 2-3, otherwise looking forward to this <3
Perry Beans
2019-06-24 02:26:16 +0000 UTCI look forward to seeing more of these two. I've gotten a little attached to them! Numbers are looking great, by the way. Thank you so much for making this Cherri.
Whiffy Plush
2019-06-24 01:59:28 +0000 UTCI read it 1-4-3-2, maybe swap where 4 and 3 are?
IamUnknown
2019-06-24 01:43:15 +0000 UTClooking great so far!
Rawk Manx
2019-06-24 01:42:34 +0000 UTCLooks amazing and I can't wait to see more of it. As for the top panels it is in a rather odd position in terms of eye movement. Naturally the eye would want to go in an upside-down N or Z pattern when reading the first four panels.
Nathan Smith
2019-06-24 01:42:26 +0000 UTCBest couple is back!! ๐
M2
2019-06-24 01:40:56 +0000 UTCI'd say maybe the switch between 3 and 4 would be good but aside from that, everything looks good to me. Also Apollo's tail wag is adorbs!!!
PrincessSamoyed
2019-06-24 01:39:06 +0000 UTCAHH IT BEGINS!! I can't wait to see more of this already, we're starting off great!! โจ and the only thing I could see happening is someone going from panel 1 to 4 by accident
Richie-Rich
2019-06-24 01:37:26 +0000 UTCOh gosh this is looking lovely. And I did read them in that order but I could see someone going from 1 to 4.
Straw
2019-06-24 01:27:28 +0000 UTCi think so too! wasnt sure if it was just me though LOL
CHERRIKISSU
2019-06-24 01:26:40 +0000 UTCIt begins! Look at that Fluffy boy
Neronova
2019-06-24 01:26:20 +0000 UTCAhhhh finallyyyy! Got my popcorn ready XD I'd say maybe switch panels 3 and 4 if anything? It might just be me though
2019-06-24 01:25:55 +0000 UTCIts time people
Antonio Rogers
2019-06-24 01:25:40 +0000 UTC
