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IT'S THAT TIME OF YEAR AGAIN FOLKS

funny how my last comic started with gardening and so does this one lol. anyway, very excited to announce i'm in the works with another mabel x apollo comic!

(no spoilers, but... it's gonna be a little more spicy than the last one... so yall got that to look forward to)

also, can you guys help me out a bit? do the top panels read correctly? i numbered them, but i've got my doubts about panel 4 that i didn't notice when i was thumbnailing lol. if it doesnt read properly im gonna have to move some stuff around. thanks yall! 

edit: ended up changing the format anyway!! 

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Comments

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Fortress120

Maybe you could had a little arrow to guide the reader through those panels if you want to keep the page composition

Lictor000

Panel 1 is a POWERFUL pose.

Lupinator

Amazing work as always

Furrygamer

I think the panel sizes need some adjustment to naturaly lead the eyes, my eyes went from 1 to 4 and then 2-3, otherwise looking forward to this <3

Perry Beans

I look forward to seeing more of these two. I've gotten a little attached to them! Numbers are looking great, by the way. Thank you so much for making this Cherri.

Whiffy Plush

I read it 1-4-3-2, maybe swap where 4 and 3 are?

IamUnknown

looking great so far!

Rawk Manx

Looks amazing and I can't wait to see more of it. As for the top panels it is in a rather odd position in terms of eye movement. Naturally the eye would want to go in an upside-down N or Z pattern when reading the first four panels.

Nathan Smith

Best couple is back!! ๐Ÿ˜

M2

I'd say maybe the switch between 3 and 4 would be good but aside from that, everything looks good to me. Also Apollo's tail wag is adorbs!!!

PrincessSamoyed

AHH IT BEGINS!! I can't wait to see more of this already, we're starting off great!! โœจ and the only thing I could see happening is someone going from panel 1 to 4 by accident

Richie-Rich

Oh gosh this is looking lovely. And I did read them in that order but I could see someone going from 1 to 4.

Straw

i think so too! wasnt sure if it was just me though LOL

CHERRIKISSU

It begins! Look at that Fluffy boy

Neronova

Ahhhh finallyyyy! Got my popcorn ready XD I'd say maybe switch panels 3 and 4 if anything? It might just be me though

Its time people

Antonio Rogers


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