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February Suggestions -- Thread Closed

Update: That's all the ideas I'll be taking this month! I'll have a post today or tomorrow detailing the three or four short pieces I'll be writing inspired by what ya'll suggested. Thanks for everyone who participated!

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Alright! So this is going to be a new thing I want to try each month, where all of you have a chance to suggest ideas to me for flash fiction stories (1000 words or so) and I'll pick a few to write and post over the next month.

MAKE SURE YOU READ THIS WHOLE POST BEFORE COMMENTING BELOW WITH YOUR IDEAS!!!!

I want this to be a friendly thing, with a cooperative atmosphere, and I also want to try to encourage people to bounce ideas off one another, so this isn't going to be a raffle or lottery, and ya'll aren't competing with one another for first come, first served slots. Instead, throw your ideas out there, if you have them. If you feel like you don't have any good ideas, or if you're too nervous to share, then feel free to reply to someone else's suggestion--either by seconding it, or by suggesting a twist on the original concept. Most of all, have fun with it! I'll be commenting too, making suggestions, asking follow up questions or offering thoughts in reply.

I'll keep this thread open until the third of the month, when I'll decide which ideas I'll be writing. I'm not going to choose them at random--it's up to me. I also reserve the right to...be creative with the suggestions, to some extent. For example, I might combine two into a single story, or add details from other ideas that appealed to me. How many suggestions I take a month will depend on how many ideas there are, but will probably be around three or four. I'll make a second post, revealing my selections, and I'll write and post the resulting stories over the course of the month, here first, and most likely also on tumblr later.

~~~Some Ground Rules~~~

Alright? Let's see what you'd like to see this month!

Comments

I'm not sure what you mean by 'give credit'--I'll certainly note whose ideas inspired the stories I decide to write for the month, if that's what you're asking.

Wesley Bracken

So this is an awesome idea, and a really good twist on the TF game trope, but it's too long for what I have in mind here. That said! I might turn this into an interactive story to run on Tumblr this spring

Wesley Bracken

A bunch of friends play a game of transformation. When the game starts, each player is assigned a type (bear, jock, Twink, etc), kinks (leather, slob, musk, incest, etc) and a goal (such as be come a leather daddy with all other players as your pup's, make everyone fall in love with you, or turn a player into your incestuous, sexy daddy). Each player picks a card during their turn, which has some kind of transformation. Some cards can be used on others, some just effect the picker and some just effect everyone. They will have physical transformations, like growing a gut or getting hairy. Some will be mental, like dumbing someone down or making a player subservient to another. Some can also change the preferences of another player, like making them a slob and love slobs or something. The winner of the game is whoever reaches their goal first. The winner gets to transform everyone however they want to at the end of the game. I'm a fan of bear, slob, leather and incest transformations, so I would love it if the story ended with all of them becoming an incestuous, skinny family with the father as the leather daddy (or daddies) in charge.

OwOkenOne

I like where that's going!

Alex Logan

That's true. Just curious are you going to give credit for the idea? I'm assuming so but just curious

Alex Logan

It's a very nice idea, but 5-7 guys is a bit too long for what I have in mind for these. That said, I might combine this idea with one of the other ideas people have mentioned.

Wesley Bracken

I'm liking it!

Alex Logan

YES

Alex Logan

I like that idea!

Chris W

Eating everything in sight to turn him fat...completely unable to stop his body's actions and panicking about it. Repeated attempts to control himself having the opposite effect of pissing off the demon and making it worse every time :)

Chris W

While certain aspects of this suggestion don't tickle my fancy it allows a more varied series where each chapter can really be focused on. Professor invents a spray that makes men wildly horny and attracted to where the source comes from. Kind of like a pheromone. To test it out he purposely flunks 5-7 college men in his courses and offers personal tutoring 1 on 1. He slowly makes each change their lifestyles as they physically start to transform. Each guy focused on one of his kinks. (Pheromone could be based science or magic if you want extreme changes quickly)

Tj

Yeah, I agree but those were just thoughts for triggers. I'm hoping someone else will suggest something way less convoluted

Alex Logan

Weird is good! I don't mind weird, but the logic of it is...a bit too convoluted. I love the spirit of it though--I mean it! Gives me something to think on.

Wesley Bracken

Kind of weird. 🙁

Alex Logan

Not sure, maybe it gets sucked up into him when he uses it, the shit on it is what makes him a slob them the toilet paper itself gets him obese

Alex Logan

Wait, toilet paper? Genuinely curious--how do you picture that working?

Wesley Bracken

Maybe drinking piss or eating out a shitty ass... Just a thought

Alex Logan

I'm just going to throw some out. A shampoo or body wash. (Irony) . gets cursed because be is a huge asshole. toilet paper? I don't know maybe a food of some sort?

Alex Logan

Certainly an idea up my alley. Anyone else want to suggest a trigger?

Wesley Bracken

Some super hot college jock, being turned gay. He gets super dirty, hair grows long and greasy and his beard reaches his pecs. Then he gets upwards of 500 lbs and never showers and falls in love with a daddy bear that had sex with constanly. I'm not sure of a trigger but if anyone has an idea I'm willing to listen. Anyway that's my fantasy so yeah.

Alex Logan

I could see him making one friend bodybuilder extreme, and another a slobby bear, making himself more of a man, while making his dad more submissive, or just another bro.

Anthony Williams

While I might not use the pocket watch in particular, I do like the setup. What sort of changes would he make to his family or friends?

Wesley Bracken

I imagine someone, a college freshman or prospective student, finding the reality altering pocket watch of that professor, and before he has a chance to return it, he's taken back home to his family, where he accidentally, discovers and then uses the watch on his family and friends.

Anthony Williams

Well that's definitely one I've never done! I'm interested. Would this be more of a bearish merman, or a twinky one? Is there sex involved?

Wesley Bracken

I like it too, but I think it works fine as a stand alone idea. Is there anything in particular you'd want the demon to force him to do?

Wesley Bracken

I like that a lot actually

Pup Unicorn

Mad scientist turns guy into a merman and keeps him as a pet.

Fishboy

I'm a big fan of occult related stories. Maybe something about a demon possessing a man and turning him into a huge fat hairy pigbear. Instead of full on possession though that alters his mind, it starts making his body do stuff against his will. kinda a "wtf is going on??" situation. Could even be the mechanism for the glory hole idea?

Chris W

That was...unexpected, but thanks for the plug! I don't know about the "neatly organized" part though... You are welcome to suggest something, though, if you want!

Wesley Bracken

Not gonna suggest anything BUT just want to say if you're on the $5 tier, the $10 reward is well worth it. You still have access to the exclusive gumroad stories but its done via Google Drive so it's all neatly organised, not split into parts, really cool seeing the live writing, and there's always a good amount of unfinished stories that won't have hit the blog yet, if ever. AND most importantly, we'd get a tiny bit closer to the next Patreon goal if you go for it! (Not sponsored, honest). Back on topic though, looking forward to seeing what we end up suggesting.

Alex

Fat and hairy, maybe slowly becoming a bit dumb as well

Pup Unicorn

I like that as a start! What kind of pig would you want him to be? Fat? Muscle? Old?

Wesley Bracken

A man slowly becomes a sex obsessed pig after a few trips to a gloryhole?[

Pup Unicorn


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