Rabblelaid's Stories

Writing Update

Hello All!

I've been pushing hard to finish The Cool Mom part 3, because I know my long commission has meant its been a while since I released new material. I need a few more days for drafting and editing, but perhaps by Friday it will be available for your reading pleasure. (I'm optimistic, but no promises). The final version will be longer than part 2.

I ran into an interesting dilemma with this one, as people who read the outline will know. The problem is that there are certa...

Writing Update and Feedback Request

Good Morning!

I'm happy to announce that I am finally finished with the rough draft of "Love the Sinner." It's practically a novel, with an 80k word count. It's also unlike anything I have written before, so I hope it's good!

For a story this massive, the rewriting process might take a while. But I hope you can all see it soon.

While the commissioner reads through and makes his feedback, I have drafted up an outline for The Cool Mom part 3. Last time, when I got feedback on ...

Story Recommendation and Renee Cross Bot

Hello Everyone!

Today I'd like to give you all a strong story recommendation.

I might be a little late to the party on this story, but the author doesn't currently publish on Literotica, so it's possible some of you haven't read this story.

The story is called "Cucked by an Incel", written by an author who goes by Scarfolamew. It's a slow boil cuckold corruption story that plays with humiliation in a way that I find immensely satisfying. If you like humiliating cuckold stor...

First Read Recommendations

Good Evening!

I'm in the home stretch of writing Love the Sinner now, although it will be a little longer before I am able to share it with you: the commissioner will get a chance to make tweaks first.

This is one of the most frustrating times in writing for me, when I'm sitting on a really long piece that isn't quiiiite finished yet. I remember it felt this way when I was writing "The Wet Witch of the West" as well. Hopefully, this story is just as good as that one!

I'm sta...

Character Archetypes: The Bitch

Hello everyone!

Here are my thoughts on the top rated character archetype: The Bitch!

Examples of Bitches from my stories

Avani Rao - The Wicked Stepdaughter

Blair Beaumont - Dollar Swine

Becky Hex - Sleight of Mind

Kelly North - Sharing is Caring

Who is the Bitch? 

Unlike with the Brat, who has certain physical characteristics that define them, the Bitch is defined completely by their actions and role in t...

Character Types: The Brat

Good morning everyone!

Still plugging along on “Love the Sinner”, the story is sitting at around 45,000 words at this point, and is roughly two thirds complete. 

I realized today that I am sort of inadvertently participating in National Novel Writing month this year! (Not that I would consider my work literature, lol).

To keep my content from drying up completely, I thought it would be fun to do another post about my writing process. 

Today, I want to tal...

Commission 5 Sneak Peek!

Good Evening Everyone!

I’m a little over halfway done with drafting Commission 5. It has turned into quite a long story (current word count is about 35,000 words) and is taking me longer than average to write. In order to keep you guys in the loop, I’ve decided to give you all a little sneak preview of the story today with the commissioner’s permission.

All plot details are subject to change!

Tentative Title: Love the Sinner

Seth and Nina...

Five more Story Ideas!

Hello everyone!

People seemed to like my writeups last week for potential story ideas that I have, so I decided to pull five more this week for people to see and vote on. Now you know why I say I have years of potential story ideas! These are varying levels of likely that I will write them soon, but they are all ideas that I think could make a good story.

Let me know what you think!

Baby Makes Four: Two starry-eyed young newlyweds, Hank and Whitney, have bee...

Story Ideas from my Notes

Hello everyone!

I’m hard at work right now writing commission 5. I mentioned in passing that it would be an interracial hypnosis theme. Sorry if anyone was looking forward to that, but the commission has moved away from that theme.

It’s a bit long for a commission, so it may take me a while. I will try to slip in some short stories where I can.

In the meantime, to tide you over, I thought I would toss out a couple of the ideas that I have in my notes, just for fun. 2024-10-29 00:43:47 +0000 UTC View Post

Cross Contamination Part 12

Good evening everyone!

I'm pleased to present the rough draft of Cross Contamination part 12: Business and Pleasure! It felt good to get back into the series. This draft might be pretty rough when it comes to typos, so be merciful!

As always, I am absolutely starving for feedback and critique. Was any part boring? Hard to understand? Were there any scenes that you though could have gone further, or tweaks that you think would have made it hotter? I would love to hear about ...

Patreon Exclusive: Feline Heat!

Hello Everyone!

This past week was a little rough for me, writing wise. Events in my personal life conspired in a perfect storm to give me almost no writing time. But I did manage to finish my next patreon exclusive short story!

A couple of notes:

As mentioned before, there was some fairly obvious vote manipulation going on in the poll for this story, so although the winner is shown as Carol, I determined that the real winner was Jackie, so that is the star of ...

Update and Looking Forward

Afternoon everyone!

After a month of Patreon exclusivity, The Cool Mom Part 2 is releasing on Literotica tomorrow. The story has a couple of minor plot tweaks and an expanded final sex scene for the final release, so go read it and show it some love if you have the chance, even if you read it before.

Now that I have wrapped up two major projects, Downward Dog and Hottie in the Mirror, I'm excited to dig into some new material!

For the time being, I plan to switch back...

Hottie in the Mirror 2nd Draft

Hello Everyone!

Normally, when I edit stories these days, the end product is fairly similar to the first draft, just refined a little.

Compared to that, Hottie in the Mirror 4 has had some major additions. This draft is 86 pages long, 26 pages longer than the rough draft. I thought I would request another round of feedback to see how people feel about the new scenes.

Here is a changelog:

• Expanded initial Anton sex scene by ~1/2 a page.

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2024-10-04 00:05:50 +0000 UTC View Post

Update and Character Motivations

Hello!

I am currently working hard at the revisions for HitM 4. It’s taking me longer than usual because this time I am including more rewrites and added content than a usual edit. There are already 15 new pages of content in this draft (!). In addition, the outline of Cross Contamination 12 is completed, and I have started the rough draft. If anyone is interested in giving feedback on the Cross Contamination 12 outline, drop me a line at 2024-10-01 20:14:36 +0000 UTC View Post

Patreon Exclusive: Better Than the Real Thing!

Good Evening everyone!

I know that it has been a bit of a content drought for readers who dislike feminization stories, so I hurried to finish this next short story, themed around the tag "strap-on"

I tried to actually make this a "short" story this time because my patreon exclusives have been getting a little bloated lately. I hope, therefore, that it doesn't feel rushed! I had a lot of fun writing this one as a palette cleanser!

My current priorities are editing HitM 4 and...

Hottie in the Mirror Epilogue

Hello Everyone!

I hoped to be done with this a little sooner, but I had an extremely busy weekend.

Here is the epilogue to "Hottie in the Mirror!

This may need some expansion as well, just like the main story. Would love to hear any feedback you have positive or negative!

Two specific questions:

I considered adding a brief mention that Lexi had gone no contact with her father. Would it be a good addition, or too much of a bummer?

At the...

Hottie in the Mirror part 4 Rough Draft (Minus Epilogue)

Hello!

Below, I have attached the rough draft of Hottie in the Mirror part 4!

The only thing it is missing now is the epilogue, which I will be writing over the next few days.

I would be thrilled to receive any feedback you might have, positive or negative.

Although this story hits all the emotional and dramatic beats that I set out to, I do think it needs a little spicing up. I plan to expand some of the erotic scenes, especially in the first half, and add at le...

Workshopping "Maid of Money"

Good afternoon everyone!

I have here the rough draft of a new standalone story that I've titled: Maid of Money.

This was meant to be my fourth commissioned piece. I won't go into the sordid details, but long story short, the commissioner abandoned the project, leaving me with the completed rough draft.

I'm considering what to do with the story right now. I'm uncertain of the story's quality, as I've never been a good judge of my own work. It's working with some themes I have...

Writing Update and Thinking about Story Endings

Hello Everyone,

I am still working hard on Hottie in the Mirror part 4. I am maybe two-thirds finished with the rough draft, depending on if I decide to include the epilogue tied into the end of this part. Some stories practically burst out of me, and others have to be dragged kicking and screaming, and this one has proven a bit of a hard nut to crack. There’s a lot of complex character stuff going on in this one, so it has taken some extra thought to get right.

How did people ...

Patreon Exclusive: Gender Liquid!

Good Evening Everyone!

I have just

A Huge Thank You

I just wanted to make a small post commemorating a personal milestone. I just passed 1000 followers on Literotica. It's just a number, but I told myself when I started releasing work that 1000 was when I would know my work was well liked.

I didn't think when I started writing that I would have so many interested readers, and even make a little money on the side with my hobby!

So a big that you to all my readers. I hope you enjoy my future releases just as much.

Patreon Exclusive: The Cool Mom 2: Life of the Party

Good Evening everyone!

Sorry for t

Brief Update and Downward Dog Character Portraits

After a few marathon drafting sessions, I have finished the rough draft of Commission 4.

That means I will be moving ahead with editing Downward Dog part 3 for publication, so if anyone was still interested in offering feedback, now would be the time.

Just for fun, I made some character portraits for the two female leads of Downward Dog. Do they match how you see the characters or do you picture them differently?

2024-08-21 19:47:59 +0000 UTC View Post

Writing Update and Inside the Writing Process: Suspension of Disbelief in Erotica

Good evening everyone!

A couple of quick updates on where I’m at with writing, and then I have a topic I want to discuss, in one of my very occasional series on the writing process.

First, after a month of Patreon exclusivity, “Comfort Zone” was released on Literotica today, and it is truly getting savaged by the anti-cuckold crowd as usual lol. I anticipated that, but I won’t lie and say it doesn’t sting a bit. One quick release note: when I began preparing the story fo...

Downward Dog Part 3 Full Rough Draft

Good Evening!

I just finished drafting the end of Downward Dog part 3! This is the end of the series unless I decide to do any follow-up stories at some point.

For those who have been reading the periodic updates, I marked the beginning of the new material with a small green highlight.

As always, feedback is highly appreciated.

Especially on the ending! I have included two possible endings to the story. Ending one reflects my original plan for how to end the sto...

Downward Dog 3C

Hello!

Hot off the presses, here is the three part of Downward Dog part three.

This section details Heather's new life as a puppy!

All that is left now in my outline is the grand finale, the day of the community fun fair and dog show! I am hoping to have it done this week.

Any feedback, positive or negative would be highly appreciated!

Downward Dog Three B and an Opinion Question

Hello!

Find attached the second part of the Downward Dog finale! This part is essentially one long sex scene leaning hard into the cuckqueaning themes of the work. Any feedback you might have would be super helpful.

The comments section of part two on literotica actually brought up an interesting point that I was curious what you guys thought of.

Some people strongly disliked Jackie and felt like she deserved some comeuppance at the end of the story.

Others felt lik...

Downward Dog part Three A

Hello!

I have finished the first chunk of Downward dog part three.

I'll be honest with you, I struggled with writer's block a little in this section. That always makes me suspicious of the overall quality of the piece, so any feedback would be especially appreciated for this portion of the draft. I would much rather get constructive feedback at this point and have time to make changes than release it on LIt and get eviscerated if it sucks.

Also, apologies on no...

Downward Dog Part 2 Rough Draft!

Hello!

I have here, hot of the presses, the alpha draft of Downward Dog part 2.

A quick programming note: because of the unexpected length of the scenes I intended to include, I have decided to make Downward Dog a three part series rather than a two part series (and it started out as a stand alone story. Ugh. Story of my life.)

NOT TO WORRY: I have learned my lesson, and I intend to finish the story right away. Instead of moving part three to the end of my work queue, I wil...

Quick Update

Hello!

I'm thrilled to say that "The Cool Mom" is doing really well on Literotica! 12,000 views on the first day I believe is some sort of record for me. It puts a little more pressure on me to knock it out of the park for the sequel, but I am hoping I am up to the task.

I've attached the next small section of Downward Dog 2. It seemed like the great majority of people either were pleased to get the chance to read the draft in progress, or didn't mind if I released them, bu...