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Jalter Doujin 2, page 43

Details on that D

Very first panel banger

Jalter Doujin 2, Page 42

No blabla wtf D: 

First panel seems to lack of power, somehow. Guess it can be improved by better speedlines/sound effects

Jalter Doujin 2, page 41

I had a major issue on this page (that could be modified by changing previous page + 4 firsts panels here) which creates too many breaks during/before sex phase, making Jeanne asking for it as during page 37, 33 and 28.

I'm wondering if it's not "too much", making it less relevant with quite a feeling of "seriously.... again ..?" for the reader (and kinda for ritsuka too i guess lol)

What's your toughts about it, if you have time/will to check previous pages and have a opinion abo...

Jalter Doujin 2, page 40

40 woohooo~

Firsts two panels are kinda messy imo because of the text/lineweight, i'll see if i can update it later. Otherwise looks good to me

Jalter Doujin 2, page 39

Nothing bad to say on this page, i really like how i turned out overall (maybe oo much contrast on the toning). The previous page needs to be modified to make her legs opened and fi the firs panel here

Jalter Doujin 2, Page 38

This ones okay too i guess, i'm just pmeh-ing over the very last panel, because i wanted to make the same plan as previous panel but adding movement to it. Problem should be mainly because of the legs closing. I'll see later c:

Jalter Doujin 2, Page 37

Makes me sad that the previous page is so bad compared to this one x___x 

Also a "wip" did a year ago because i liked this panel and wanted to draw it before even finishing the drafts :D 

Jalter Doujin 2, Page 36

Oh boi this one gonna be reworked later ~

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Jalter Doujin 2, Page 35

yeeeeey~

I like the firsts panels c:

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Jalter Doujin 2, Page 34

Latest Edit : Reduced the bulge and erased some lines because it was too much hardcore and/or not suggested enough

I like this one nomnom c:

Next two pages will include the first cumming page, then after this, it'll keep going rougher

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Jalter Doujin 2, page 33

Firsts panels best panels. Kinda sad for the one that introducing the bulge kink, i feel like it could be better shown x__x

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Jalter Doujin 2, page 32

I like this page (:

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Jalter Doujin 2, page 31

she doesn't understand that he's teasing her at a next level

I really should change her expression on previous page, making her a bit more troubled

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Jalter Doujin 2 Page 30

Yeeeeey, happy 30 pages celebration, everyone :D

I'm a bit  undecisive about her facial expression, i wanted to make her more angry toward herself, but didn't sketched anything good enough, so it ended up like this (which could work with her personnality but uh, it wasn't planned here haha)

Hope this wait before them to start fucking wasn't too long (it definitively was, sorry about that). Now you'll eat some fucking content for weeks-months (ye it's a very long doujin)

Jalter Doujin 2 Page 29

It's happening D:

Not really satisfied with sound effects on main panel, might change later.

Not really satisfied with the unwearing panties panel, might not change later.

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Jalter Doujin 2, Page 28

First panel turned out okay, i like the legz c:. The panels below could need some enlightement (looks messy, without enough focus on what to watch)

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Jalter Doujin 2, Page 27

Freshly finished, i don't have a good view on the page yet, might change/adjust things later :)

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Jeanne Alter Doujin 2, WIP [Low Resolution]

The big post, with all the resized pages :)

As said in the title, please do not forget that it's still early WIP, the english text needs LOT of correction, some pages may be artistically changed and some other pages may be added between two already existing pages, for exemple :)

Some of the original posts contains multiple variations of the same page in it, i tought that including the firsts versions and the updated ones in the same post was a good idea as a viewer perspective

Jalter Doujin 2, Page 7

Hey guys, here's the last fight page. I needed to conclude this scene in a better way than before (for the fight itself, and for jeanne's thoughts), and i felt like it was needed to add another page to achieve this.

I kinda failed the main panel sadly, i wish it had a better "impact" (like the page before this one), but i experienced too many things and finally couldn't end with something i was expecting at first (obviously).

Patreon notice for now, and 2021

Hey, i wanted to write something about what happened and what will happen here for the upcomming year and next generally. 

First, thanks you all for staying here even without any content posted. Obviously, i didn't take your money for most of the months which i was  inactive but theres still some of you that left this patreon page because my silence and inactivity, it's understandable. I'm feeling quite better about the issues i had that restrained me from drawing, i hope it's...

Daki 2, Quick Colors

Hey, here's the final lines but with some sketchy/real quick colors (kinda just did the flat colors, and added real quick shades)

As said on discord, i deeply like every part on the first SFW side (it's like, really rare that i like something about my art, and hardly find something bad to say against it) but the second side is really "meh" for me. Because i had to design an expression and a body language i'm not used to imagine, draw and just liking... :(

Not sure i'll post the fi...

Jalter Doujin, Page 23 (new one)

Hey, new and last d33pthro4t page. I really wanted to add this kind of scene in this doujin, and felt like it was missing, after finishing the cvmming page. I added this one and hope it works well with the previous and the next page :)

(kinda censored the "bad" words 'cause patreon seems to spy me through it)

I will write something about what will come next on patreon tomorrow, i'll be pleased if you guys read it :)

Thnks for your support, these days more than ever.

Jalter Doujin 2 Page 26

Hey guys, here's your monthly page, thanks for your support!! :DDDD

WIthout joking, i'm very sorry for that lack of content, again. I'm quite more ""active"" on discord, if you need some news about me and the projects, i highly recommend you to come in.

Ofc, i won't charge you again for this month.

Jalter sketches

Some little things i drew between the pages. It'll follow soon or later with a bigger colored illustration, similar to the last one i did of her with multiple drawings in it.

Working rn on a dakimakura, may post the wips soon or later too. 

Jalter Doujin 2 Page 25

29 SEPTEMBER EDIT : 

Kinda improved the whole page. The previous version can be seen there : http://puu.sh/GxuSL/283a2e0c4a.png

Hey, gonna write some words about this page then let's talk about patreon, my consistency in posting things here and stuff.

I kinda "meh" this page, idk why yet tbh, but only the first panel looks fine to me :x

About posting and stuff, uh... I...

Jalter Doujin 2 Page 24

Quite like this page, the face on the second panel is cute. I also think i gonna add a lot more saliva on the first panel c: Compared to the next page, those hands looks naked x__x

Dagashi Kashi doujin HD files

Hey, kinda forgot to upload the final HD++ version of the doujin here. I know it's kinda late and that the hype is over but one of you asked me to upload it so i thought maybe more of you needed it too  (: 

 https://www.mediafire.com/file/8gtbaqdjvlpb35g/DagashiHD+.rar/file 

Jalter Doujin 2 Page 22

Edited.

[OLD TEXT] 

Kinda tried to put the inking layer at 80% opacity, it looks refreshing but idk if i'll let it like this. DOn't hesitate to give me feedbacks about it :D

Also, i wonder if i should add a gudao's line on the third or the last panel, like a "ngh" or so, for reacting toward her aggressiveness 

Jalter Doujin 2 Page 21

:D

Jalter Doujin 2 Page 20

L I P P S

Still wonder if the first panel will looks okay for everyone, but i kinda just drew what i like and how i'd like to see it, and quite satisfied by it (maybe not that much about the lower lip...)

Also i think i'm gonna rework the last text "bubble", i don't know how to render her harsh will and put it into tricky words like those :c