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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 15 : FOUR TRIGRAM SEALING PRISON

Akira was almost ready to execute his plan but he needed a distraction.

Akira again uses the wind palm to make some distance from Kakashi which alert Kakashi that Akira is planning something. Mostly a powerful jutsu.

And he was not disappointed. Akira after gaining some distance made a shadow clone without any hand sign and both him and his shadow clone this time perform 2 different hand sign sequences in sync.

Kakashi knew what was coming. According to the amount of chak...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 14 : AKIRA VS KAKASHI 2

Kakashi was not expecting Akira to use the smokes of the shadow clone of the Kunais to catch him off guard.

Usually, people won't use this method because it's very chakra extensive. But surprisingly he did not sense much chakra being used in this clone but the smoke was a lot more than it should have been.

Kakashi was convinced that Akira have used some kind of smoke bomb when he was not looking but he did not have any proof.

While this was happening both Sasuke and Narut...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 13 : AKIRA VS KAKASHI 1

After Naruto was blown away by Kakashi's technique, literally. Akira waited till the next person acts. He was also preparing a good plan to trap Kakashi and he had formed one already.

But he still waited because he wanted to see what Sasuke do and although he had to wait for some time he was not disappointed by Sasuke.

After some time Sasuke did attack with his shuriken juts and once Kakashi easily doge the shuriken Sasuke close the gap and directly went for a close combat fight...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 12 : KAKASHI HAYATE

Kakashi was exactly like how the anime and manga described him to be. He had this lazy look on his face and was holding an orange book pretty much all the time and if Akira did not know better he might have thought that Kakashi is reading a novel or a secret ninja handbook.

Once the three boys and the silver hair jonin came outside of the academy they directly went towards the terraces.

"Well now we are finally here how about we all introduce each other first before getting star...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 11 : TEAM PLACEMENTS

Finally, the day came when the team assignment was supposed to happen and Akira was super excited about this day.

He wakes up early this morning and after doing all his work he immediately rushes toward the academy. He too was curious about which team he is going to join.

In the original series, there was a total of three teams consisting of the Konoha 9 and If and their jonin sensei was Kakashi Hayate for Team 7, Asuma Sarutobi for Team 10 and Kurenai Yuhi for Team 8. There was...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 10 : A RELAXING DAY

Konohagakure no Sato Hokage Office

The more Hiruzen read the report the more he was amazed. He did not expect that yet again a civilian kid beat all the clan heirs like how the 4th did in his time.

He just glances at the other student's reports and just gives importance to the clan heirs and 2 special individuals which were Naruto and Akira.

He then goes through the entire report Iruka had on Akira. He read how Akira was average at the academy's start but how he improved ...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 9 : GRADUATION REPORT

People did not even realize what happened in a short period. But under 2 moves Akira defeats Sasuke.

Sasuke on the other hand knows what happened. Akira just used some kind of wind-based ninjutsu without a hand sign and caught him off guard.

Akira just used the wind hand palm technique when he was close to Sasuke. His dragon fist technique used fast and strong kung fu and kickboxing styles but he also included grabbing and throwing techniques in them.

Everyone was shocked...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 8 : AKIRA VS SASUKE

Akira open his eyes, first time waking up as late as 7 am but today was special as today was the day he was about to become a real ninja.

He did not particularly look forward to attending Academy, but today was the last.

Akira also has fangirls now. He particularly did not like it and just like how Sasuke would describe it, it's annoying.

He quickly gets ready and rushes towards the academy.

While thinking about all the things he wanted to do and about his goals di...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 7 : FIGHTS AND PLANS

It took almost 3 hours for the class to finally be over and the physical test to start.

Today was the day when most of the students were excited because they wanted to show off their cool ninja techniques more or less.

"the first match will be between Shikamaru and Shino," said the teacher.

The match started and Shikamaru immediately gave up. Akira was not expecting anything more from the lazy genius anyways.

Several more matches happen and finally, Naruto and Akir...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 6 : 5 YEARS LATER

5 YEARS LATER

[so guys there is a 5 years time gap because I wanted to start the cannon soon. I will be making a few flashback chapters and jumping between times to further make the story more interesting and appealing in the future]

Akira was in a private training ground. He needed less sleep because of this special power and thus he always wakes up early and sneaks to a special training ground he found for himself.

His usual routine contained early morning training in a...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 5 : UZUMAKI NARUTO

"Hello, I am Akira Raito nice to meet ya". Akira said looking at the silent and down caste figure in front of him.

Naruto who just heard all the adults talking about him in hush silence and giving him hateful glares when he came from his apartment to the ninja academy was agitated and sad.

Originally he wanted to make a lot of friends in the academy just like his Jiji told him he can. But now he is not feeling that he will be able to do that considering how all the parents after...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 4 : NINJA ACADEMY AND KONOHA NINE

lived alone during his Konohagakure no Sato

It was a beautiful morning and every single resident of Konoha was already up and doing their daily work. The Hokage monument was standing with the faces of all the previous Hokage in all its glory.

On this sunny day, a child of 5 to 6 years old was standing in front of the ninja academy. He was not going in but rather had a big cute smile on his face which looks like he just achieved the most amazing thing in the world.

Which w...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 3 : A YEAR WORTH

1 Year Later

It's already been one year since Akira got his powers which now he named Godly Talent. After a year of hard work and analysis, he understood that he has a large amount of potential for someone who does not process a bloodline power.

At first, his chakra levels were normal but now he already has half of the chakra that a genin should have. Not much but this show that his body can improve if his condition allows it.

1 year of training allows him to analyze his ...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 2 : GODLY TALENT

Finally, the night came when Akira turn 5 years old and he was very excited about the power he is going to get.

In Akira's imagination, when he will wake up tomorrow he will see a system notification stating his power or something. If only he knew.

The moment he fall asleep, his body started heating up and unimaginable pain spread though out his body. He could feel the pain and he was aware of it all the time yet he was not able to wake up from his sleep.

He did not unloc...

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NARUTO GODLY TALENT CHAPTER 1 : AKIRA RAITO

It's been 5 years since Akira Raito was reborn in his favourite world.

He died one day and met someone who looked surprisingly like Santa Clause. The person never introduces himself so Akira is still refereeing to him as Mr Santa.

Mr Santa told how he died because of the dimensional curse which should not suppose to have happened. He can send Akira to heaven as payment or make him reborn again.

Akira who was an avid anime fan and a seasonal fanfiction reader immediately w...

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Minato Template Chapter 17 : New Team 10 (Rewrite)

After some time everyone was out of the shock. 

"Okay, everyone calm down. Let me announce about the last team as well" said Iruka.

"Team 9 is already in the rotation.

So the last team is team 10 which consists of Shikamaru Nara, Kirito Uzumaki and Ino Yamanaka." said Iruka and completed his team announcement.

"So, it's Choji who was taken out of the team." Mutter Kirito.

"Choji, you are in team 14 with some seniors. You should contact Uchiro Mishustu to kno...

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Minato Template Chapter 16 : Teams (Rewrite)

After the fighting exams, The entire graduation was pretty simple.

Naruto ended up failing and he was approached by Mitsuki. Of course, Kirito and Hiruzen were aware of the situation.

Kirito just turns into a bird and keeps an eye on Naruto. Everything just went like it did in the Anime.

The only difference was that Naruto was much stronger thanks to Kirito.

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A few Days Later.

Kirito and Naruto again came to the academy to learn which team he and his br...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 15 : FINALLY SOME ACTION.

Konohagakure No Sato.

Forest of Death.

Next Day.

Both Sakura and Jin talk quite a lot before going to sleep.

Sakura is a chatterbox, once someone started to talk with her and she does not have anything to do.

Now, Jin thinks that he knows more about Sakura than anyone in the Konoha 12 maybe except Ino.

Today was the day when the sound team was going to attack and Jin was ready for whatever happened.

"Jin Kun, can you please help me carry Naruto...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 14 : A TALK WITH SAKURA

The forest of death was a scary place. Not particularly harmful or dangerous but scary nonetheless.

Jin who already took care of 1 team has already gotten the heavens scroll from them.

Now he has to get an earth scroll.

The problem is that there is also the entire team 7 problem which is going to happen and he can't just waste time on collecting scrolls.

So he started looking for Team 7.

But what he did not realize was that he was already late.

Orochi...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 13 : KNOWING FUTURE IS BORING

<JIN POV>

'I honestly sometimes think that not knowing what is going to happen is better.'.

'At least there is some kind of anticipation and excitement about life. But now I already know what might happen and even who is going to win between Sasuke and Lee, It's kinda boring honestly.

I might be an idiot for thinking that knowing the future is boring but when people know what is going to happen life has little to surprise the person.

It's like a movie whose p...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 12 : CHUNIN EXAMS IS OFFICIAL NOW.

Konohagakure No Sato

Forest.

Jin was panting heavily.

Since the day team 7 has come from the Waves mission, Jin has dedicated all his time to mastering his ultra instincts.

He was working hard but the technique was not easy.

He asks for help from Naruto too.

He asks Naruto to make as many clones as he can and throw rocks at him from different sides while he dodges.

It's been a long time since he has broken throw his limits.

To master the...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 11 : READY FOR CHUNIN EXAMS

When team 7 with Jin was about to leave the land of waves to go back to Konoha.

They had one problem which they don't have any idea how to solve.

Two problems to be exact.

Number one is that Haku was alive unlike in the canon and he was pretty angry about Zabuza's dead.

Jin and Naruto (who after knowing the real identity of the masked man) didn't want to kill Haku.

Kakashi and Sasuke were firm in their idea that to avoid upcoming problems they should kill Ha...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 10 : JIN IN ACTION

Sasuke was fighting with everything he got.

He even opened Sharingan. But all for nothing.

He is not strong enough to beat the masked man.

The ice user has trapped him inside an ice dome. He is surrounded by mirrors made out of Ice.

When Naruto come in he thought that he might be able to help him take down the enemy but that idiot is worthless.

Using Jin's technique without even learning the technique properly.

'Jin's teaching is wasted on Naruto' tho...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 9 : SOLAR FLARE AND CONON

Land of Waves

Jin and team 7 finally come to Tazuna's house.

Kakashi this time around was on his feet and was not suffering from chakra exhaustion.

Naruto was super excited and wanted to learn the chakra burst technique from Jin.

This made Jin even more worried because he just made up the entire chakra brust technique on the spot to distract others so they don't think too much about his power.

Even Sasuke and Sakura were interested in this technique and this...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 8 : SPECIAL TRAINING KAMEHAMEHA

FLASHBACK

Konohagakure No Sato

[JIN POV]

Jin Takashi is 8 years old.

I have been training for a long time but all the training is close-range hand-to-hand fighting.

I need a long-range attack as well but not sure how I am gonna do that.

There is Kamehameha, yes and learning this trick is not that hard either.

But where the hell I am gonna learn this?

The technique is pretty much a light show even in broad day light. Let alone in the nigh...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 7 : KICK ZABUZA'S ASS

Konohagukure No Sato

Jin Takashi 10 Years old.

He was training like always.

After getting Ki 3 years ago he started training himself in the turtle hermit style.

The majority of his skills are hand-to-hand combat.

The only 2 kai techniques he has was Rasengan made out of ki and Kamehameha.

Today he is practising his kicks.

His punches are good but his legs hold more power than his arms.

Maybe because he constantly put pressure on his legs...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 6 : MEETING TEAM 7

Konohagakure No Sato

Hokage Office.

Hiruzen Sarutobi just heard about Jin Takashi's performance report from Might Guy and was thinking hard.

He already has done all the background checks on Jin when he first thought about letting Jin join Team 9.

There is nothing wrong with Jin's background. He was born just a few months before the nine-tail attack and is a hard-working boy.

"Guy I want you to train Jin well and if possible I also want him to join the chunin...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 5 : PASSIVE INSTINCTS

Ultra Instincts in Dragon Ball Universe is the technique of Angels.

One of the most powerful races and the only being stronger than them is Zeno.

Jin knew that Learning Ultra instincts is going to be hard.

One good thing about this technique is that there is no power requirement to learn it.

And with the help of the system, Jin can easily get into a state of Ultra instincts.

But Jin still has not mastered the True Ultra Instincts yet.

Just like in the...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 4 : ROCK LEE VS TAKASHI JIN

Konohagakure No Sato

Training ground 9

"What is going on Guy sensei," ask Tenten.

"Yosh, you are welcome Jin Kun let's work hard together and let our youth guide us," said Lee.

Neji on the side did not say anything and looked like he does not care either way.

"Jin kun here have been allocated to our team by Hokage sama for some time. I would like for all of you to accept him in the team" said Guy sensei with his patent smile and thumbs up.

"Hai sensei...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 3 : MEETING TEAM 9

It took almost 2 hours for Jin to get his first D-rank mission because he was held back by the management.

It turns out that until the Hokage gets the exam result of the class he was in, he can't get his first mission.

Unlike how it was seen in Anime, not every mission is given by the Hokage.

The mission itself was very simple.

Jin has to clear a training ground and repair pits.

Needless to say, Jin completed it very quickly thanks to his amazing speed.
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