Description: With Laura hypnotized, the devious Rayne sets out to gather the information she needs from the helpless blonde in order to hypnotize her roommate. By any means necessary.
Key: MC, FD, F/F, Hu
Rayne had kept Laura hypnotized for nearly ten minutes, giving her suggestions to be relaxed and open in order to smooth out the ruffles that she was about to create. She had a goal after all, a long term plan. Which basically involved her roommate not being a crazy bitch a...
2018-10-05 06:37:47 +0000 UTC
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Relaxation long induction -
“Sweeeet!” was Laura’s drawn out reply as she got into a more comfortable position. “Well, here you go…hypnotize me!”
Rayne gulped and started her induction. Focusing down on Laura’s feet, and describing how she was slowly feeling all of her muscles loosening and relaxing. How she could feel them letting go little by little as the relaxation moved up her body, ever so slowly, relaxing every muscle in her body, one by one. ...
2018-09-28 08:22:18 +0000 UTC
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Description: Rayne begins her training to learn hypnosis with Laura, while hatching a plot to get the upper hand on her overly difficult roommate Klaire.
Key: FD, MC, F/F, Hu
The day was starting out just like any other for Rayne...that is to say, it was a frantic rush to grab her things and leave her dorm room before her roommate got back from class. She had been enrolled at New Chicago University for a little more than two weeks now, and things with Klaire hadn’t gotten ...
2018-09-28 08:17:26 +0000 UTC
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2018-09-07 05:31:32 +0000 UTC
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2018-09-07 05:30:06 +0000 UTC
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To: Thief In The Mind Thiefinthemind@gmail.com
From: Thief’s Apprentice Thiefsapprentice@gmail.com
Sent: May 26th 20XX 10:20 PM
Subject: Hello Simon….
Greetings Master...or should I say Simon? Simon Psez?
Surprised? You shouldn’t be. After all it was you that taught me to always be two steps ahead of everyone else. That included you. Did you really think I wouldn’t listen? Or find a way to get around all of your pathetic safeguards?
The way I ...
2018-09-07 05:26:54 +0000 UTC
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Description: Lindsey brings her new boyfriend, the mysterious Apprentice, over to meet her sister. But little does either sister realize that Jennifer and the Apprentice have met before.
Key: MD, MC, Hypno, MFF
To: Lindsey LindseyC.NCPA@gmail.com
From: Jen JenniferC.NCPD@gmail.com
Sent: May 24th 20XX 10:48 AM
Subject: Ok, I’ll admit…he’s cute!
Alright little sis, you know how much I really hate to do this but…I’m…I’m…damn this is hard to typ...
2018-08-31 08:45:48 +0000 UTC
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To: Jen JenniferC.NCPD@gmail.com
From: Lindsey LindseyC.NCPA@gmail.com
Sent: May 22nd 20XX 6:13am
Subject: 911! Red Alert! Battle Stations! OH HOLY SHIT!
Sis…I think I’m in love! And I know you have heard me say this about a thousand times before, but this time I think it’s really true! I had the most wonderful whirlwind romance last night, it was amazing! He literally swept me off my feet, sis!
It was the weirdest thing. I decided to take...
2018-08-25 14:32:35 +0000 UTC
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2018-08-25 14:21:56 +0000 UTC
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Description: This Scene takes place in Chapter 4 after Jessy and Christine walk out of the commons area after being hypnotized.
The door to Jessy and Christine's dorm room opened slowly as the two young women walked in, hand in hand. Both young ladies still had a vacant, almost completely unaware, look in their eyes. It was only once they were inside the dorm room that they finally let their hands slide apart. Jessy hung back to close the dorm room door, but not lock it.
...
2018-08-10 09:04:52 +0000 UTC
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To: Thief In The Mind Thiefinthemind@gmail.com
From: Thief’s Apprentice Thiefsapprentice@gmail.com
Sent: May 19th 20XX, 9:27 AM
Subject: Contact has been made.
Greetings Master.
I thought you would appreciate an update on my endeavors with Lindsey Cartwright. After tracking her whereabouts via social media, I set myself up as a stage hypnotist doing a show at N.C.U. where she and a friend ended up on stage.
...
2018-08-10 09:00:42 +0000 UTC
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New idea I am trying out, let me know if this something you guys might like to see for future stories.
2018-08-10 08:46:53 +0000 UTC
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Everyone seems to be really enjoying the N.C.U. story line, so here is the outline for the next chapter!
(Please note the story may vary from the outline) (Also Please note SPOILERS!)
Rayne’s dorm room
- Rayne is frantically trying to gather her things,
- Wanting to avoid klaire
- Managed to get out of the dorm and into the stair well just as klaire leaves the elevator
- Overhears her on her phone say she is glad that her an...
2018-08-10 08:45:40 +0000 UTC
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Enlarge for best results.
2018-08-04 05:09:56 +0000 UTC
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Description: Hypnotized in the previous chapter, Lindsey and Christine are put through the paces of a hypnotic show run by the mysterious Thief's Apprentice.
Key: MD, MC, M/F, Hu, Hypno,
To: Lindsey LindseyC.NCPA@gmail.com
From: Jen JenniferC.NCPD@gmail.com
Sent: May 19th 20XX 12:34 PM
Subject: What the hell sis?! Seriously?!
So, before I even got your email this morning detailing how you got yourself hypnotized on stage, I had an ema...
2018-08-04 04:57:56 +0000 UTC
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A friend of mine in Second Life asked me to help her and another friend test out her new couch. She was kind enough to take pictures, and asked me to write a story about it. Enjoy!
2018-07-27 07:44:59 +0000 UTC
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Key: MC, MD, M/F
(NOTE: This scene takes place in the break between the end of the night scene and the beginning of the morning scene I have bookended it with the last paragraph and first paragraph of the scenes so you can place it more easily.)
As the orb faded from in front of Emily’s face the effects definitely did not, her eyes remained dilated and she looked up at him with a lazy grin and pulled him down into a deep passionate kiss. His hands moved along her frame whi...
2018-07-27 07:42:07 +0000 UTC
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Description: Young police cadet Lindsey Cartwright and two friends go to see a stage hypnosis show at N.C.U. But little does she know the hypnotist has been waiting for her.
To: Jen JenniferC.NCPD@gmail.com
From: Lindsey LinndseyC.NCPA@gmail.com
Sent: May 19th 20XX 11:27am
Subject: OMG! I got hypnotized!
OMG! OMG! OMG! You’re not going to believe this! I got hypnotized last night!
Now, before you freak out, relax. It was at a stage show, so no...
2018-07-27 07:37:41 +0000 UTC
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Not the most creative title, but the first of the patron caption bonus pictures.
2018-07-21 05:34:06 +0000 UTC
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Description: The Apprentice from the story “Thief in the Mind” comes to New Chicago for a brief vacation, and to meet Officer Jennifer Cartwright’s younger sister. Or does he have an ulterior motive for being here?
Key: Md, Mc, M/F,
To: Thief In The Mind <a href="mailto:Thiefinthemind@gmail.com">Thiefinthemind@gmail.com</a>
From: Thief’s Apprentice <a href="mailto:Thiefsapprentice@gmail.com">Thiefsapprentice@gmail.com<...
2018-07-21 05:18:36 +0000 UTC
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A requested follow up to the "Thief In The Mind" story line that focuses on the Thief's apprentice, as well as Jennifer's sister Lindsey.
(Please note the story may vary from the outline) (Also Please note SPOILERS!)
Apprentice mailing thief (potential to add freeze scene?)
- Describes how he is in new Chicago.
- Has managed to track down Jennifer
- Can’t get to her in the station
- Hypnotized her to g...
2018-06-20 08:40:20 +0000 UTC
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This story is inspired by a cave tour the Sleep'NDarlin (my IRL girlfriend and inspiration for Veo) went on during our last vacation. In which I noticed that most tour guide park rangers tend to be young, attractive, fitting snugly in their uniforms, and ridiculously hot!
This is also the last planned episode for the Driveabout series, as Xander and Veo will be moving to a more permanent location after this story.
(Please note actual story may vary from this...
2018-06-20 08:36:28 +0000 UTC
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This story takes place after the events of Raise Your Hand, and follows Rayne's efforts to figure out what happened to her in that story.
(Please note the actual written story may be different then this outline) (Also please note SPOILERS!)
Dorm room
- Rayne reviews her notebook from the lecture
- Doesn’t remember meeting trisha
- Doesn’t remember being hypnotized
- Starts to look up hypnosis on her tablet...
2018-06-20 08:32:11 +0000 UTC
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The outline used to create the 'Walk in the Woods' story. Little side note when I was growing up my neighbors father ran a Native American museum in his back yard. I met him once and it was an amazing experience! The 'old native American' who is actually a park ranger in the finished story is based on him. the 'granddaughter' is based on my neighbors adult daughter... who inspired many a fantasy.
(please note the actual story will vary from this outline) (Also note, SPOILERS...
2018-06-20 08:28:23 +0000 UTC
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The working outline for the Raise your Hand story of the New Chicago University story line. This one was inspired by a story written by Jam Jan Sandwich and uses many idea's and themes from that story. It also starts to set up the idea that these stories are all connected with the introduction of the character Klaire in the beginning.
(Please note the final product will vary from the outline) (also please note SPOILERS!)
Introduction
2018-06-20 08:19:26 +0000 UTC
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This is an extended version of Part 2 of The Dog Trainer, including the behind closed doors scene. This is non-canon as parts of it would go against story lines I have in mind for the future. So for now, please enjoy!
2018-06-20 08:11:55 +0000 UTC
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This is another outline that the finished product ended up being quite different from the actual stories. The basics are there but I broke the story up into two parts which I didn't expect to do. This story was written for a friend.
(Spoilers!)
Xander decides to go see an old friend. Finds her at a dog show doing a routine
- Heather - describes heather like [redacted so she doesn’t beat me stupid]
- Explains that he knows heather but sh...
2018-06-20 08:06:09 +0000 UTC
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This is the original working outline that I used to create the Thief In The Mind story stories, the first chapter of which can be found here: http://www.spiralsnightclub.com/2018/03/thief-in-mind-part-1.html
(Please note the final stories varied drastically from the version in the outline, but this was the basics of what I worked off of while I was writing.) (also spoilers)
2018-06-20 08:00:36 +0000 UTC
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This was the outline that I used to create the story "A brief pause" which can be found here: http://www.spiralsnightclub.com/2018/03/ncu-brief-pause.html It is the first of the N.C.U. story line.
(The outline may differ from the final story line) (also spoilers).
Yuto P.D.
- Eve working as an assistant to the P.D.
- Cleaning up ...
2018-06-20 07:52:46 +0000 UTC
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