Pulse 531 & 532 WIP 1
The end of the chapter. One page with Connor explaining the next step, and the final page the other six batteries talk about the missing two.
2024-01-20 09:06:25 +0000 UTC View Post
The end of the chapter. One page with Connor explaining the next step, and the final page the other six batteries talk about the missing two.
2024-01-20 09:06:25 +0000 UTC View Post
Just needs lettering and tweaking the dialog if needed. I think the bottom panels need more comments about where each of them is going.
2024-01-20 09:04:23 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, I think it just needs color and lettering.
2024-01-19 09:54:30 +0000 UTC View Post
My goal here was to make this seem as unprofessional as possible. I thought that would be the funniest option.
2024-01-18 10:10:21 +0000 UTC View Post
I probably need to insert some jokes in the last two panels. Only two more pages in the chapter after this, so this is the end of the explanation, and the next chapter will probably start a time-skip. Then there will be a short part with the Silver Dragon and Charlotte, and then the time-skip is over and we're months ahead.
2024-01-18 09:29:09 +0000 UTC View Post
There was a old sketch of a faceless woman leaning forward, and I turned it into this. I was sure I had a copy of the sketch, but I can't seem to see it in my folders of art.
2024-01-14 10:23:09 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, still setting up the competition rules. There's a few big things left. There will probably be a time-skip before the tournament, because of some of the things left to explain.
There might be a jump ahead of a few months, with a short side-story about the Silver Dragon in-between, and little bits of what's happening during the time-skip with the two teams- Team Tabitha, and Team Annie.
2024-01-12 23:24:49 +0000 UTC View Post
If I put Lucy in this, it would have been more complicated.
2024-01-08 23:59:36 +0000 UTC View Post
More explanation about the competition. I tried to make Tabitha emotional because she just found out about it, and Annie much more composed with in-depth questions because she clearly knew about parts of this a long time ago.
2024-01-08 09:54:28 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, we're starting to find out some of the rules of the tournament.
I was originally going to include something reminding everyone that Tabtiha was a test pilot, but it didn't seem to fit in the conversation naturally.
2024-01-04 08:45:05 +0000 UTC View Post
They talk about what happens to the losers of the tournament.
2023-12-31 21:00:28 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, this is only the third time the other six batteries have appeared as a group (and always in the same order so far). They first appeared on page 99 I think, and the red-head has appeared at least one other time- she was the one who should have been Annie's partner if Thomas hadn't altered the future accidentally.
All of the other six have names, they were listed on the page they appeared during the Silver Dragon flashback storyline- but I don't remember their names without lo...
2023-12-22 10:13:14 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, so the only other time we saw the other six in their suits, they were colored in pairs-- just like how Pulse and Bolt were both blue in the beginning. But because both Pulse and Bolt became different colors when they upgraded, these six all needed to be different colors as well. I tried to make them colors that worked together as a pair in a way though, and tried to avoid making any blue or red.
Also each of the three times the other six have appeared, I've tried to ke...
2023-12-20 00:59:56 +0000 UTC View Post
Two Tifa pictures and one of Rikku.
I wonder if in the first picture if Tifa should be wearing a swimsuit or not?
2023-12-20 00:46:42 +0000 UTC View Post
I looked back to page, I think, 99 to get an idea of the shapes and hair styles of the other six. But I still have to check which page in the Silver Dragon flashback period had all of them and showed their faces to get a better sense of what they look like-- even if they are probably wearing their helmets here.
The one with the long wavy hair is the one Annie should have gotten as her teammate if Thomas hadn't accidentally altered the future.
2023-12-13 09:22:35 +0000 UTC View Post
==Page 527==
Connor has said that there were more than two of Annie and Tabitha. Tabitha probably jokingly argues that they don't look anything like them. Connor say they'll have to fight them in a competition. Even though their suits can self-repair, they're already showing signs of wear internally. The only option to get two reliable suits is to have extra parts.
==Page 528==
Tabitha asks what happens to anyone who loses, and C...
2023-12-11 23:33:06 +0000 UTC View Post
They never have any trouble with attendance.
2023-12-09 09:49:06 +0000 UTC View Post
So here we're starting to transition to bringing in the other six batteries and heading into a tournament arc.
Technically, there's only four arcs left to Pulse.
Annie tries to remove the bandage on her face silently.
2023-12-05 21:56:46 +0000 UTC View Post
Some pictures in various stages-
This is the transition page to starting to introduce the other six batteries with suits, and starting the tournament arc coming up. Annie notices the bandage still on her face and tries to remove it quietly. Then Connor has them move to a place where they'll see the other six girls on the next page while he'll explain the situation (even though Annie already knows).
2023-11-30 08:04:30 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, I wanted to have a funny way that both Annie and Tabitha would collide without eachother noticing their were hurt. Originally Charlotte was going to be carrying Annie and trip, but this seemed funnier.
This part is a little unusual because I'm letting Grace interact with the main group. She's always been a little separate because I was keeping her from Annie. She clearly has a interest in Annie, but also everyone else too. But I thought putting her in with ...
2023-11-23 08:32:12 +0000 UTC View Post
So I had different ideas about what Tabitha would have done in her absence, but I thought the funniest option was that she did the same thing Annie did-- almost. It doesn't seem like she was identified. I tried to write Tabitha's description so that it would be a little off, like she was telling a story that might not be completely true.
I also doesn't seem like Connor or Grace would have hear about Annie, so they don't realize she did the same thing.
I also obviously ...
2023-11-17 00:51:08 +0000 UTC View Post