Pulse 515 WIP 2
Okay, I think I'm down to the panel with a lot of background.
2023-07-06 11:35:14 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, I think I'm down to the panel with a lot of background.
2023-07-06 11:35:14 +0000 UTC View Post
Charlotte and Annie talk about their options on top of a building.
2023-07-05 07:58:45 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, so the story switches back to Annie and Charlotte, as they try to avoid being seen by the SCU.
My thing about Annie is that she isn't the strongest or the best superhero by any means, but she's clever. She thinks about things and comes up with plans. I'd think she's consider how they'll try to search for her, and what she can do to avoid detection.
2023-07-02 04:35:59 +0000 UTC View Post
I'm still debating what to put in the one panel. I think Rikku should be topless somehow on this page, considering none of the main cast has been this chapter. Maybe she's weighing her breasts somewhere?
2023-06-30 10:15:22 +0000 UTC View Post
The story switches back from Lucy and Jessica to Charlotte and Annie as the two on the outside try to avoid being seen by the SCU.
2023-06-30 09:07:37 +0000 UTC View Post
Some sketches-
The story switches from Lucy and Jessica back to Annie and Tabitha.
2023-06-27 09:40:03 +0000 UTC View Post
I altered the dialog a little from my early rough sketch to avoid repeating dialog from the last page.
2023-06-25 10:28:17 +0000 UTC View Post
I considered having Noah sort of the obvious background in all three panels. Like you'd be able to see the back of him.
2023-06-25 10:25:28 +0000 UTC View Post
I originally didn't plan to name who this was pretending to be Annie on this page, but based on some comments, I thought it was important to explain soon.
This is page 5 of the 12 page chapter. On the next page, it'll probably have a panel or two of Lucy and Jessica, and then back to Annie and Charlotte as they try to sneak back to Charlotte's home.
2023-06-20 09:15:31 +0000 UTC View Post
I guess a picture I started in early 2021. Cassandra Cain and Stephanie Brown as they appeared in the recent Batgirls comic (although their costumes seemed to change radically based on the artist and I had to try to merge different versions).
2023-06-20 08:52:29 +0000 UTC View Post
Jessica continues to convince the SCU that she's Annie.
2023-06-17 10:00:42 +0000 UTC View Post
I'm not sure why, but Noah here is designed a little like one of those oversized characters who just looks out of scale with the others, like the Thing or Kingpin.
2023-06-14 09:12:05 +0000 UTC View Post
I think this just needs some cleaning up, color, and lettering.
2023-06-14 09:09:51 +0000 UTC View Post
Jessica and Lucy must have thought they'd want a display of Annie's powers-- which are obviously different from her Mother's powers.
In the final dialog, I think I need to really hint here that this is Jessica, and not Annie or something else.
2023-06-11 09:37:13 +0000 UTC View Post
Jessica tries to fool them so far. It makes you wonder what she'd resort to doing if things got really bad. I wonder if she could alter their memories?
2023-06-08 11:00:45 +0000 UTC View Post
Four work-in-progresses:
I think the final art, it just needs lettering.
I had to make a number of last minute changes as you can see in the previous WIP. I had drawn the back of Lucy's top differently on a different page, The line was missing from Jessica's shirt in panel 1, The SCU woman's visor wasn't quite right in panel 4, and I thought Jessica's chest wasn't big enough in panel 1 or 5.
A lot of times you don't notice those things until you start to color.
2023-06-05 08:59:00 +0000 UTC View Post
Starting to ink in some places, even though it's still rough in other places.
2023-05-30 10:09:05 +0000 UTC View Post
I had inked and almost colored this sketch from a while ago before. Just finished it up now.
2023-05-30 09:42:28 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay here's Jessica trying to pretend to be Annie. Part of the next page would be with Jessica and Lucy, and then it'll cut back to Annie and Charlotte as they try to get to Charlotte's place undetected.
The "4" and "5" at the top are to remind me how far I am into the 12 page chapter. So I can have an ending or semi-ending that leads into the next chapter.
2023-05-28 09:27:45 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, Lucy's trying to pass off Annie's Mom as Annie. We'll see if Jessica can pull it off.
2023-05-25 11:33:49 +0000 UTC View Post
Still have a little work left, and then on to color.
2023-05-23 12:17:09 +0000 UTC View Post
I don't know if things have gotten more or less complicated, but this is Lucy's best bad idea.
2023-05-20 10:41:30 +0000 UTC View Post
Annie's Mom and Lucy trying to trick the SCU.
2023-05-18 10:53:14 +0000 UTC View Post