Pulse 468 WIP 3
Still thinking about replacing panel 5, not sure yet. Any input welcome. I felt like I needed one taking off clothes panel, one dressing panel.
2022-03-17 11:30:45 +0000 UTC View Post
Still thinking about replacing panel 5, not sure yet. Any input welcome. I felt like I needed one taking off clothes panel, one dressing panel.
2022-03-17 11:30:45 +0000 UTC View Post
Started inking. Still not sure I like panel 5.
2022-03-16 10:38:53 +0000 UTC View Post
Page 468-
Okay, a wordless page. We've got-
Okay, on page 13, Max overhears her brother-in-law is working on an experiment to induce growth, specifically to bring out the maximum potential. And they are starting with breast size. (The title of the series "Maximum Max" was meant to refer to her doing this experiment to make her breasts the size of their maximum potential, whatever that is.)
Then Max is in a daze the whole rest of the party.
I'm not sure about Max and Sam's parents- my first idea was I'd slightly ...
2022-03-14 12:12:57 +0000 UTC View PostIt looks like Annie won, beating Tifa by one point.
Any suggestions for what I should draw with Annie? Aside from anything else, I figure there are three general options-
Okay, aside from some cute and sexy here, I needed a transition into Annie having some actual clothes (coming up) as they continue to investigate why the suit isn't working. This is the second thing they've tried- getting the user out of the suit, and then trying to give it energy.
As usual, Thomas seems like he had some idea this would happen and isn't too worried, he's just softly leading things in the right direction and enjoying the happenings.
2022-03-11 11:48:36 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, what happens is that Annie puts on the shirt she got from Thomas and then tries to shock her suit to see if it would react.
Panel 1-
Annie putting on the shirt. I might adjust this because it seems like she's at least as dressed in the next panel. I also should have drawn more of her and then increased the size so I'd have her proportions a little more clear.
Panel 2-
Annie putting on the shirt while Thomas has his ba...
2022-03-08 11:11:12 +0000 UTC View PostSomething often requested is a picture with someone's breasts growing. If I were going to draw a picture, who would you want it to be?
I tried to give a lot of choices. I didn't include anyone from Maximum Max or Room-Filler Jen because something like this could be shown in them.
2022-03-07 10:00:09 +0000 UTC View Post
I list this as "sfw", but I wouldn't be surprised if Webtoons has an issue with panel 4.
Okay, this chapter is called "Iron Maiden" and I could have kept Annie trapped in the suit longer, but I thought she needed to be part of the solution. She is the tech gadget person, and her solving it on her own makes it seem like she is more trusted. Neither of her parents or her teammate have to be there with her.
I also wanted to put Annie and Thomas in more sexual situations. ...
2022-03-05 10:24:48 +0000 UTC View Post
It's almost done, I just need to draw Thomas in panel 2 (I erased him and started coloring because I didn't think it was working out and thought I'd switch tasks), and write the dialog and letter it.
2022-03-04 12:32:24 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, Thomas does the chivalrous thing and offers his shirt allow Annie to be more comfortable. She might say something to tease him about it.
I'm not sure Annie's breasts are big enough in panel 3, and I also might try to make it look like light is shining through to show her silhouette.
I'm a little torn about how much of Annie's body should be uncovered in panel 4. I probably picked a more conservative option to make it better match panel 5.
2022-03-03 12:01:16 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay the next two pages.
Pulse 466-
Worked on a lot of details, fixed some things, added a lot of shading.
2022-03-01 12:08:28 +0000 UTC View Post
Some progress on this. I think I made Mimi's breasts too small in panel one, and Jen's legs too short in panel five. Her "small" size in the last panel is still non-certain.
2022-02-28 12:02:46 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, I suspect the WIPs of the next pages will be of interest. I've started on them, but I'm not sure there's enough to tell what's happening yet.
I've wanted to have eventually a sign that Annie and Thomas's relationship has become physical. This isn't it -yet-, but I'm trying to put them into situations where it's leading into that, and where they're alone together more often.
Annie's Mom's comments now sort of seem related to this, something Annie didn't tell her- ...
2022-02-27 10:52:02 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, I changed the bottom panels a little. This is my original idea, and I had changed it.
Annie tells Thomas that she does have a way out of the suit, it's something Tabitha discovered (so something Thomas doesn't know, because his memories of the future are a future where Annie had a different partner). There's an escape hatch-- but she'll come out naked (because her suit switches places with whatever clothes she was wearing, if she ejects and the suit isn't a ring, she w...
2022-02-25 12:57:44 +0000 UTC View Post
I'm considering changing the last panel. I just had Mastermind bring her to this room-- only to have Thomas take her somewhere else? But I did think him having her on a cart would be funny (because while he could carry her easily, she said the suit weighed as much as her, so it would be -double- her weight).
2022-02-24 12:49:18 +0000 UTC View Post
I was worried if I got too clever with Rikku's dialog in the last panel that it wouldn't be obvious enough she's lying, and that the truth was she couldn't decide to use the materia on anyone and took so long she had to run back.
I thought this could be a funny direction for the story with her situations being more and more unreasonable trying to find people to use the growth materia on. This time she just didn't see anyone obvious, but as she becomes more desperate, she also only...
2022-02-22 11:30:02 +0000 UTC View Post
I need to have the story split with Mastermind looking for a solution, and Annie and Thomas together. I feel like they are probably ready for they relationship to get physical (after 464 pages) but have a barrier now obviously.
Being secretly superhuman, Thomas could probably handle it even with his injuries, but them thinking he's only human would probably be a problem for him right now anyway.
2022-02-19 13:04:42 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, a lot of details drawn, lot of stuff left to ink.
2022-02-18 11:26:01 +0000 UTC View Post
I -think- this is the final version. Kinda had to rush at the end or I might have tried to add more clutter and character items. Any thoughts welcome.
I can't put the final one up anywhere else until I get the big set of links that has to go in the comments. My plan is to post a cropped SFW image in places and put the full picture up as a Top Web Comics vote incentive, as usual.
2022-02-13 12:01:07 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay because I'm late, the rest of the WIPs for this page go up for everyone.
If you look back at the oldest page in the set here, I radically changed the page. In my original plan, Mastermind left (saying she'd rip open the suit if there was no other option) and Thomas snuck in. I thought it helped make Thomas seem like he always picked the indirect method to things.
BUT, it didn't fit with the dialog on the previous page of Annie being worried she'd be left in a bad ...
2022-02-12 08:48:35 +0000 UTC View Post
Just editing this and changed some things.
2022-02-09 12:48:24 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, I've changed my mind in a major way here, and you can probably see it. Did I make the right choice?
In the first version, Mastermind leaves (saying that she'd rip the suit off her precious daughter if there was no other choice) and then Thomas sneaks in, I thought displaying his mysterious nature.
In the newer version, I worried that Mastermind wouldn't leave until someone else was there, I also thought this moved things forward faster.
Any thoughts?
2022-02-09 12:45:07 +0000 UTC View Post
Started inking and shading.
2022-02-08 12:14:23 +0000 UTC View Post