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Pulse 464 WIP 1

Okay, I've changed my mind in a major way here, and you can probably see it.  Did I make the right choice?

In the first version, Mastermind leaves (saying that she'd rip the suit off her precious daughter if there was no other choice) and then Thomas sneaks in, I thought displaying his mysterious nature.

In the newer version, I worried that Mastermind wouldn't leave until someone else was there, I also thought this moved things forward faster.

Any thoughts?

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